Poetry

Started by finti6 pages

looks like she does

yes.

as we didnt know, a well behaved home sitting girl 😄

I've actually wirtten a song just now and I dont think its that bad but it needs some ajustments.
I'll post it in here when I've got some time on my hands I'm in class right now.

A love song?

no, a song of loss, hurt and desperation. Its almost like a plea.

oh Country and Western then

no, its about my sister.

could still be C&W

here we go! just for the hell of it!
BTW: what does C&W mean?

Don’t let her go!

Whats going on?
Your there, I’m here.
We’re in the same place we were last year!
Have none of us learned?
We’ve all crashed and burned!
I have so much I want to say,
But the word just won’t come my way!
I remember the night you had to go,
The salt from my tears stung.
I’m up the ladder, your on the last rung.
I want to help but the gaps too wide!
That final night I cried and cried.

Don’t let her go!
Tell me, what went so wrong?
How long is it going to take?
For her sake, help us!
For her sake please,
Help us,
Help us, please, please, please!
Don’t let her go!

So much to do, so little time!
So little of it really mine.
Now its twenty past nine,
How much further do I have to climb?
Bring her back, she’s mine!
Don’t say she’s gone for a long, long time.
She’s mine, don’t make me climb,
Don’t make me leave her behind,
Don’t say its all in my mind!

Don’t let her go!
Tell me, what went so wrong?
How long is it going to take?
For her sake, help us!
For her sake please,
Help us,
Help us, please, please, please, please!
Don’t let her go!
Don’t let her go!
Please, please God! No!
Don’t let her go!

C&W is Country and Western

ok, but now its not C&W. more kinda like R&B, soul, Bluesy .

Lara sings the Blues.

dont do poetry.

Don't you dare mix up C&W (blah) with R&B. Two different animals there.

Actually R&B has grown real boring, too many females singers that sounds like they mastrubate while singing

wrong type of R&B there finti!

Still is the kind of R&B they play on the radio all the bloody time.
Destiny Child, Alicia Keys, Tony Braxton and so on.......... too much of it

music is a very personal subject and every one likes different stuff so lets leave it at that eh?

thats why i dont listen to the radio, all they play is crap.