Trinity- RP Thread

Draegen disengaged the auto-pilot and grasped the controls as the beautiful green and blue orb of Yavin 4 came into full view. To anyone else the planet would have brought joy to their hearts but to the padawan it only made him feel more alone.

Six months.... he thought had it really been that long? Yes, it had been six months since Master Shun left on his secret mission and left Draegen to search for answers. He pleaded with the Jedi council for answers to which they only said he had abandoned the order and worse were the rumors he had turned to the darkside.

Draegen cursed his master in his head why did he leave him when he needed him the most? He along with his fellow students was shocked when Urun Sai Shun, the great battlemaster, had chosen him out of all the jedi academics in the galaxy as his pupil. Among the jedi world and the master's council he was deemed dangerous and wild, his powers were much stronger than a jedi of his age should be but he could not control them.

One incident as to this was when he was at the age of 8 during a sparring match. When the older boy became too aggressive and kneed Draegen in the face breaking his nose. Draegen fell to his knees face bloodied and stunned. His eyes rolled in the back of his head and as he collapsed he unleashed a force wave involuntarily hurling the boy across the training room into the wall. The boy was in the infirmary for 2 weeks and Draegen almost expelled by the council had it not been for Master Tulik, the gentle Svivreni headmaster of the school, personally fighting his case.

Draegen disengaged the auto-pilot and grasped the controls as the beautiful green and blue orb of Yavin 4 came into full view. To anyone else the planet would have brought joy to their hearts but to the padawan it only made him feel more alone.

Six months.... he thought had it really been that long? Yes, it had been six months since Master Shun left on his secret mission and left Draegen to search for answers. He pleaded with the Jedi council for answers to which they only said he had abandoned the order and worse were the rumors he had turned to the darkside.

Draegen cursed his master in his head why did he leave him when he needed him the most? He along with his fellow students was shocked when Urun Sai Shun, the great battlemaster, had chosen him out of all the jedi academics in the galaxy as his pupil. Among the jedi world and the master's council he was deemed dangerous and wild, his powers were much stronger than a jedi of his age should be but he could not control them.

One incident as to this claim was when he was at the age of 8 during a sparring match. When the older boy became too aggressive and kneed Draegen in the face breaking his nose. Draegen fell to his knees face bloodied and stunned. His eyes rolled in the back of his head and as he collapsed he unleashed a force wave involuntarily hurling the boy across the training room into the wall. The boy was in the infirmary for 2 weeks and Draegen almost expelled by the council had it not been for Master Tulik, the gentle Svivreni headmaster of the school, personally fighting his case. From then one he was shunned by the other students and became a loner.

But Master Shun had seen something in him that the other hadn't save Master Tulik, and took him as his padawan learner against the council's wishes. Master Urun treated him as an equal and after only 3 months of training under him he had gained a much greater control and understanding of the force. But all that mattered not because he had abandoned him and left him lost again.

Now he was coming to the great Jedi Temple after receiving a broadcast message from GrandMaster Arn Cassam calling all the jedi to gather for a meeting of "urgent importance." So here he was to be amongst all the jedi in the galaxy with the knowledge that all their eyes would be on him. Dot's bleeping woke him up from his thoughts "Yeah i know we're here," he reached back slapping the old R9 unit's silver domed head. His jedi starfighter pierced through the heavy clouds and the great jungles of the moon came into full view as he cut low over them. Several minutes later the Jedi Temple came into view. Set in a great plain the four tall majestic pryamids connected in a square pattern by a tall wall was the pride of the jedi order, its haven. He received landing confirmation from the air control and set his fighter down in the massive hangar bay busy with movement.........

I have to leave. I'll be there tomorrow morning and for the rest of the day. If so need be, you can introduce my character based on his profile. I'll take it from where he is after that. Thanks urun, this rp looks great!))

Hopping down from his starfighter he threw his hood over his head. Dot beeped "No stay here for now and no arguments," he said with a firm tone. He turned and disappeared in the throng of jedi arrivals. He made his way through the tall stone main gates and into the main courtyard.

just a note urun, if you need to add something to your post, please dont copy and paste it and then continue your post. this is called a double post, and is frowned on as a noob ation in these forums. for instance, you could have just put this part : From then one he was shunned by the other students and became a loner.

But Master Shun had seen something in him that the other hadn't save Master Tulik, and took him as his padawan learner against the council's wishes. Master Urun treated him as an equal and after only 3 months of training under him he had gained a much greater control and understanding of the force. But all that mattered not because he had abandoned him and left him lost again.

Now he was coming to the great Jedi Temple after receiving a broadcast message from GrandMaster Arn Cassam calling all the jedi to gather for a meeting of "urgent importance." So here he was to be amongst all the jedi in the galaxy with the knowledge that all their eyes would be on him. Dot's bleeping woke him up from his thoughts "Yeah i know we're here," he reached back slapping the old R9 unit's silver domed head. His jedi starfighter pierced through the heavy clouds and the great jungles of the moon came into full view as he cut low over them. Several minutes later the Jedi Temple came into view. Set in a great plain the four tall majestic pryamids connected in a square pattern by a tall wall was the pride of the jedi order, its haven. He received landing confirmation from the air control and set his fighter down in the massive hangar bay busy with movement......... : and put this into a post by itself. you dont have to add the begginning if you forget to put the end.))

fas leaned against the stone of the jedi academy, watching the fighter fly into the hanger. he replaced his custom helmet and opened a secure comms transmission to his seargent. "seargent, are your men in position?"

"yes commander."

"good, the bird has landed, prepare to activate pulse grenade. if it doesnt go off on its own, we'll have to do it manually."

"yes sir, moving into position at the, 'front door'."

fas pulled up his verpine and cocked it, moving under a ladder that led up to the hanger. he began to climb up, the ysallimiri nutrient frame strapped to his back pulling him down from its weight. he managed to pull the large frame up to the top of the lader, lifting it and hiding it behind a crate in the hanger. he then climbed up behind it and hid, using a corner cam to see around the corner and watch his own back. the grenades detonated just as the jedi walked past the gates, obliterating the fighter and badly damaging the droid, as well as killing some of the hanger crew.

The explosion rocked the courtyard the force of the blast threw Draegen to the stone walkway. He quickly turned back to see the charred and burning remains of what was his starfighter. Jedi guards were running about as screams of pain from the injured and cries of the dead filled the air. Draegen raced past the jedi medics to Dot who was laying on her back badly damaged. "Dot oh girl you'll be ok," he said as the R9 let out a long low beep. "What happened?" he yelled at one of the techs who wa s extinguishing the flames.

Master Helit ran past Draegen, stopping and putting her hand on his shoulder. "Come with me young one. Bring your friend and we will get it fixed. Hurry you need to get somewhere safe." She drew her saber and waited for him to get situated, other Padawan's were standing with her, their masters off tending to the damaged and looking for the vandals. "Hurry now. Who ever did this is still around." Once he was ready she picked up one of the younger Padawans and started off towards one of the rooms that were being used for meetings. "We'll be safe here... Your masters will be here once everything has calmed down."

the temple shuddered as explosive charges blew open the main door. stormtrooper commandos in shilded armor filed into the building, shooting anyone they saw. as draegon left the hanger with helit, the troops moved in, slaughtering the medics and the technicians. fas rose from behind the crates, shooting at the jedi gaurds who approached the area. their lightsabers became useless against the scatter gun.

Draegen shook off his initial shocked and followed female master away from the hangar bay. Then he heard the sound of gunfire and battle as shook storm troopers surged into the hangar bay. Three stormtroopers came from around the corner. Instinctively he ignited his blue saber with Master Helit deflecting the first wave of blaster fire. Teh two jedi raced forward Draegen deflecting several more shots then claiming the head of one of the attackers. While Master Helit to his left dispatched the other two quickly. The two turned back racing into the heat of the attack.

The stormtroopers were overwhelming the jedi in the hangar bay as they were not prepared for such an attack. Draegen came in full on run reached inside and let the force fault him into the air. He landed in amongst a line of imperials. The closest imperial turned in terror as Draegen brought his glowing blade across his chest then dropping dorwn he spun his blade extended wide cutting down all the troopers sorrounding him. He was moving again dancing between their ranks blade flashing.

On the other end of the hangar bay the blast doors opened and jedi knights and masters poured in blades of all colors deflecting blasts sending it back to there masters. At the front of them came a purple skinned female twilek spinning in a deadly form as they collided with the imperial attackers. Tzila let out a twilek warcry as she sliced through the imperial line, she turned quickly extending her hand sending a powerful force wave out throwing the nearest imperials into the air screaming.

A distress signal was sent out to any able bodied Jedi. "This is Master Helit of Maramere. I am with the young-lings in one of the many meeting rooms. We are greatly outnumbered and under attack. We need reinforcement's. I cannot protect them on my own. There are three battle droids in the front and up to ten troopers behind them shooting from the doorway. I have the young-lings who have little experience safely hidden within the room. But I only have one young padawan at my aid. Please hurry there have been no fatalities but I'm loosing ground. I nee- Look out!" The transmission was cut.

Liana had heard the distress call from Master Helit and was sent by her Master Tzila Nerun to aid while she joined the main battle in the hangar bay. She propelled her feet to inhuman speeds down a long hall she pressed her body against the wall allowing herself a quick peek down the side corridor. About 20 feet down were a group of imperials she could guess around 10 or so and there were also three....battle droids. The killer droids were only known to be employed by the AIMF what were they doing amongst Imperial forces. It could only mean one thing an alliance between the two factions. She calmed her nerves letting the force steady her breath and guide her movements. The beautiful padawan from Naboo sprang from behind the corner of the wall and raced towards the attackers. One stormtrooper spotted her and yelled out a warning.

Liana cut his blaster fire right back into his chest sending him flying back into his fellow soldiers. She spun into their numbers letting her saber jab and thrust quickly employing her knowledge of the Makashi lightsaber combat style.

Feanor ran inside the temple. He was late. He didn't expect anything of such to happen on the day he was named Jedi Knight.

As he entered the front hall, he noticed the battle had already passed, but he was still hearing explosions and gun fire from the above floors.

Running as fast as he could, he lit up his twisting blue-green lightsabre. He managed to create it with his knowledge, combining two stones perfectly when he created his lightsabre a few years ago.

Veldara was asleep in his quarters inside the Jedi Temple. He was having an intense vision... A vision of the Sith. He olny saw three mysterious figures, walking, followed by an Armada. When they approached... somwhere, a place he couldn't make out in the dark, but seemed strangely familiar, and ignited their red sabers, the vision disappeared, and Veldara woke up aggressively, shouting 'Noooo!'.

ahh, yeah, if you had paid attention you would have seen that the imperials all had ysilamiri nutrient frames, making the force useless. also, as the only imperial player i would like to be asked what theyre pakcing, these imperials are armed with verps, so no deflecting for you. also, they're not looking to kill the jedi that are hiding. they're looking for something, the attack in the hanger is the only battle going on at the moment.))

the line of soldiers fired their rifles into the line of jedi, tearing down any that got too close. they backed away to the edge of the hanger, standing on the edge with their hefty nutrient frames in tow. as they reached the edge, a dropship came into view, a mass driver installed into the troop bay. a gunner laughed maniaclly as he fired into the crowd. fas watched in pure satisfaction as the screaming jedi retreated back behind their blast door, shutting it behind them. the squad of troops, accompanied by a group from a second dropship moved into a service corridor which led them to a main passage, accompanied by 3 grenade launcher toting battle droids.

***

deep inside the jedi temple, in a clear corridor a squad of troopers in black armor slowly moved towards a large wodden door. one trooper moved forward and placed a small lockbuster charge on the door. the others got into a sprinting position, strapping their rifles to ther backs. "on 3, 2 1!" the charge detonated, revealing that the one planting it was actually a droid in troopers armor. the others rushed in just as an emergency door slammed down. all made it. they pulled up their rifles, one shooting the jedi archiver who was protecting it. the captain moved forward, shooting open a glass display with a cylindrical device inside. alarms sounde, and the others got into a position, facing the door, rifles raised. the commander belted the object, along with severall other things that appeared to form a bombshell. "we've got what we came for, move out." the troops began to shoot rappels up onto a large skylight, which broke. they rappeled up just as the last door opened and a jedi came running through, 2 others behind him/her. the commander activated his link to fas. "we've pressed the start button, the game is on."

***

just a kilometer away, fas smiled. "good, get to the castle and slay the dragon, fas out." fas replaced his commlink and motioned for the troopers to fall back into the hanger. the soldiers boarded the dropship just as the jedi came back for another try. the mass driver fired once more and they were off, heading back for their carrack III class cruiser in orbit. they docked to the ship and it turned, its stealth field deactivating as it entered hyperspace,returning to its planet of origin.

ok sounds like things got confused alot so is there a way we can start this over with postponing the attack on the jedi temple till after the conclave due to the lack of prior knowledge so if someone could get the moderators to allow us to start this thing over?

uh uh, thats not how it works here. we must sort it out amongst ourselves. anyway, the attack is over now so is there really a point it sorting it out? am getting off now. will speak tommorow.))

(ok im gonna take control of this because everythings confused so we are going to start over so we can save this story from looking sloppy and ive consulted the other members of the story and this is the appropriate action)

Draegen disengaged the auto-pilot and grasped the controls as the beautiful green and blue orb of Yavin 4 came into full view. To anyone else the planet would have brought joy to their hearts but to the padawan it only made him feel more alone.

Six months.... he thought had it really been that long? Yes, it had been six months since Master Shun left on his secret mission and left Draegen to search for answers. He pleaded with the Jedi council for answers to which they only said he had abandoned the order and worse were the rumors he had turned to the darkside.

Draegen cursed his master in his head why did he leave him when he needed him the most? He along with his fellow students was shocked when Urun Sai Shun, the great battlemaster, had chosen him out of all the jedi academics in the galaxy as his pupil. Among the jedi world and the master's council he was deemed dangerous and wild, his powers were much stronger than a jedi of his age should be but he could not control them.

One incident as to this claim was when he was at the age of 8 during a sparring match. When the older boy became too aggressive and kneed Draegen in the face breaking his nose. Draegen fell to his knees face bloodied and stunned. His eyes rolled in the back of his head and as he collapsed he unleashed a force wave involuntarily hurling the boy across the training room into the wall. The boy was in the infirmary for 2 weeks and Draegen almost expelled by the council had it not been for Master Tulik, the gentle Svivreni headmaster of the school, personally fighting his case. From then one he was shunned by the other students and became a loner.

But Master Shun had seen something in him that the other hadn't save Master Tulik, and took him as his padawan learner against the council's wishes. Master Urun treated him as an equal and after only 3 months of training under him he had gained a much greater control and understanding of the force. But all that mattered not because he had abandoned him and left him lost again.

Now he was coming to the great Jedi Temple after receiving a broadcast message from GrandMaster Arn Cassam calling all the jedi to gather for a meeting of "urgent importance." So here he was to be amongst all the jedi in the galaxy with the knowledge that all their eyes would be on him. Dot's bleeping woke him up from his thoughts "Yeah i know we're here," he reached back slapping the old R9 unit's silver domed head. His jedi starfighter pierced through the heavy clouds and the great jungles of the moon came into full view as he cut low over them. Several minutes later the Jedi Temple came into view. Set in a great plain the four tall majestic pryamids connected in a square pattern by a tall wall was the pride of the jedi order, its haven. He received landing confirmation from the air control and set his fighter down in the massive hangar bay busy with movement.........

Veldara was asleep in his quarters inside the Jedi Temple. He was having an intense vision... A vision of the Sith. He olny saw three mysterious figures, walking, followed by an Armada. When they approached... somwhere, a place he couldn't make out in the dark, but seemed strangely familiar, and ignited their red sabers, the vision disappeared, and Veldara woke up aggressively, shouting 'Noooo!'.

Hopping down from his starfighter he threw his hood over his head. Dot beeped "No stay here for now and no arguments," he said with a firm tone. He turned and disappeared in the throng of jedi arrivals. He made his way through the tall stone main gates and into the main courtyard.

The main courtyard was filled with thousands of jedi of all the races, colors and sizes. The courtyard itself was split into four rectangular training fields that measured 109.7 m × 48.8 m wide each. The four identical fields were bordered by stone walkways lined with beautiful ferns and trees. At the center of the courtyard stood a great fountain in the center of its crystal blue waters stood a abstract statue of a woman pouring water from a vase into the pool.

Master Helit was sitting at the edge of the pool, many young-lings were seated at her feet. She looked like she was telling a story to them. Their Masters were scattered through out the courtyard, every now and then looking over to make sure all was well. For a moment her eyes met Draegen's before returning to the younger padawans.