Trinity- RP Thread

((feanor is still up in the tower fighting fas, and zel is not there, she is down on the ground with the others. also, did you not see this?

Originally posted by Mando' Ade
you cant deflect verpines mandos. they shoot out like shotguns, hitting you with ten microblades every time the trigger is pulled. bullets still woudnt deflect, they would just be cut in half and most likely one half would hit you. these guns don't fire bullets. i'm giving you a chance to repost because feanor would be shredded on the spot if he didnt dodge.))

(wow things have gotten so out of hand so im gonna take command to try to save this story its gotten messy)

Tzila stood over the captain in the command center her purple humming blade at his throat. Behind her Liana cut off her saber and went to the controls. "Now Captain shut this monster off," she ordered the trembling imperial, he looked around to see the dead bodies of his soldiers littering the room.

A loud cheer erupted from the Fanthar rebels as the drill whirred to a dead halt. Urun raced up to Master Da-Zel, Astor and Draegen, "we have to move fast or this will all be for nothing. We have 40 minutes till the drop shuttle returns now go!"

so, in order to take command, you skip the entire story, let's rewind shall we.))

twenty minutes ago...

all of you, open fire now!" the imperials on the catwalks, recovering, haled fire down towards the jedi. one of the techs hit a control panel, releasing the repaired leg from the clamp so that it fell into place. it slammed down to the ground as te walker picked up a bit more speed as it lumbered on towards the carrier that would take it back to the ship. the captain fired his pistol repeatedly, hoping for a hit.

then...

the drill walker stopped in place under the hovering tug, waiting to be carried up. tech's ran for turbolifts and the group on the walkway began to climb off, leaving only the captain and the jedi alone, the jedi on the main floor and the captain above on the catwalks. "so, you think you've won do you, you think you're clever? you're wrong!" he pulled something cylindrical from his belt, igniting a dark crimson lightsaber. "i wish i didnt have to do this, but it is clearly neccesary, and unfortunately you will never be seeing your friends again." as he spoke, the walkers legs picked off of the ground, the tug pulling it up slowly. they began to move forward, slowly moving farther and farther from the city. "and to think that you could have taken back your precious planet just a few hours later. ironic that you came too early." he slowly walked towards a stairway leading down to the ground floor. "oh mister diris, do you mind locking down the remainder of the drill while i take care of this?" a rodian walked out of the command room and leaned over the railing. "of course master." the captain smiled. "he's a loyal one, dont you think?."

this story is closed way toomuch confusion ill start another story soon

nice way to take charge urun...

nice... superpokeplz thread closed due to the creator being confused as to how an rp works similar works of confusion will follow, until then, go... do something else.

you dont have to be mean mandos. i dropped out of this long ago because what you were doing wasnt following the story line and was not approved by urun. if the rp being closed is any ones fault its yours. i agree with urun.