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If it were more than 2 people Jeffrey probably couldn't beat them. I will modify Jeffrey and Alex though to make them better suited for this RP. Probably strip away the Iron Man armor from one of them, but who knows.

Originally posted by Hawkeye113
The Danger could also not be in battle. Like say a building was about to fall on a child. Just time travel back 5 minutes or so, push the child out of the way, time travel forward again. Easy Fix.

So that's 3 travels used if you include the one it took to get to our time in the first place.

Yeah. Either Electrical or Solar energy. Since both are used to fuel his suit. The Time Travels reload daily though.

Originally posted by Hawkeye113
If it were more than 2 people Jeffrey probably couldn't beat them. I will modify Jeffrey and Alex though to make them better suited for this RP. Probably strip away the Iron Man armor from one of them, but who knows.

What about those people I stated individually? Like one on one he fights Thor, Hulk, Rulk, Squirrel Girl, Juggernaut, Odin, Loki, Vulcan.

Well. He would get his butt kicked. He hasn't ever fought them in the past, but he has fought Wolverine or rather a Skrull version of wolverine to be more exact.

Originally posted by Hawkeye113

The Toughest Opponet I see Jeffrey defeating is a combination of Wolverine and the Silver Surfer both. Anyone stronger than that, he couldn't defeat.

I do not know comic books well since i do not read them. Nor did i pay enough attention on that last fantastic four movie

But listening to Wei Phoniex, Jalek, and -Pr-. I've learned that silver surfer is over powered and even stronger then Superman himself.

So someone who is able to defeat Silver Surfer alone would be a bit overpowered. And then combining him with mr. X-men himself is just adding the fuel to the fire of the word called "Overpowered"

I have redone them and here is the final result

Name: Jeffrey Star
Alias(code name): The Iron Knight
Identity(publicly known ot not): Yes
Height: 5"3
Weight: 160
Age: 17
Powers: He has the power of Fire Manipulation, Superior Intellect and of course the ability to replicate himself 50 times a day as well as the power to fire energy blasts.
Gadgets/weapons(if any): Iron Man Armor modified to be more powerful and upgraded. Sword
Appearance: He is usually in a sleek metallic silver jumpsuit made out of nanites which turn into his battlesuit the Iron Knight prototype he has built out of Tony Stark's original design. He also carries a sword on his back. It is said that the sword boosts his powers.
Bio : His family used to be wealthy until they were robbed blind by his idiot uncle Joseph. He then decided to take his inventing skills to the next level and went to an abandoned warehouse. There he found an empty Iron Man Armor. He took the armor and spent weeks repairing, upgrading and modifying the armor. His modifications made the armor lighter, faster, more durable and more powerful. Using that armor he has become the Iron Knight and he modified the Armor to look like a suit of Knight's armor. He also took the blueprints of the armor from the old hang out of Tony Stark and using those has put his new armor as a more advanced version of Iron Man’s albeit with different weapons since he didn’t know how to work the repulsors, he added in graviton micro lasers in each finger, as well as Energy blasts and orbs.

Name: Alexander T. Stark
Alias(code name): Steel
Identity(publicly known ot not): In this time No. In the Future Yes.
Height: 5"1
Weight: 160
Age: 18
Powers: He has all the powers of the Original Iron Man and the ability to time travel in addition to the ability to manipulate energy and to teleport at will although sometimes his teleportation malfunctions causing him problems. He can barely use his time travel power and thus rarely uses it unless someone is in immediate danger from anything besides a fight of course.
Gadgets/weapons(if any): Iron Man (Future) armor modified to be more sleek and metallic. Device in his heart making it safer.
Appearance:tbr

But he can beat Silver Surfer?

I have decided to reduce their power levels though. 50 clones. The clones are controlled by Jeffrey's mind. He can't however take on more than 2 people of equal power to himself at a time. (Silver Surfer is stronger) (Wolverine is weaker) He could beat Silver Surfer simply by ripping the surfboard out from underneath Silver Surfer and snapping it in half.

How do you think I should modify my characters? Make them have none of the Armor? Or strip away some powers?

Originally posted by Hawkeye113
I have decided to reduce their power levels though. 50 clones. The clones are controlled by Jeffrey's mind. He can't however take on more than 2 people of equal power to himself at a time. (Silver Surfer is stronger) (Wolverine is weaker) He could beat Silver Surfer simply by ripping the surfboard out from underneath Silver Surfer and snapping it in half.

Ok, his board can take planet busting attacks 😐 Even if you did destroy his board he could make another one. His powers aren't tied into his board and he actually made the board after getting his powers. You're telling me Jeffrey can beat someone that can move and fight above light speed, manipulate matter and energy, create black holes and survive black holes and transmute between matter and energy?

Let me redesign my characters and get back to you. I am going to make them a lot less powerful.

Originally posted by Hawkeye113
I have redone them and here is the final result

Name: Jeffrey Star
Alias(code name): The Iron Knight
Identity(publicly known ot not): Yes
Height: 5"3
Weight: 160
Age: 17
Powers: He has the power of Fire Manipulation, Superior Intellect as well as the power to fire energy blasts.
Gadgets/weapons(if any): Iron Man Armor modified to be more powerful and upgraded. Sword
Appearance: He is usually in a sleek metallic silver jumpsuit made out of nanites which turn into his battlesuit the Iron Knight prototype he has built out of Tony Stark's original design. He also carries a sword on his back.
Bio : His family used to be wealthy until they were robbed blind by his idiot uncle Joseph. He then decided to take his inventing skills to the next level and went to an abandoned warehouse. There he found an empty Iron Man Armor. He took the armor and spent weeks repairing, upgrading and modifying the armor. His modifications made the armor lighter, faster, more durable and more powerful than standard Iron Man armor. Using that armor he has become the Iron Knight and he modified the Armor to look like a suit of Knight's armor. He also took the blueprints of the armor from the old hang out of Tony Stark and using those has put his new armor as a more advanced version of Iron Man’s albeit with different weapons since he didn’t know how to work the repulsors, he added in graviton micro lasers in each finger, as well as Energy blasts.

Name: Alexander T. Stark
Alias(code name): Steel
Identity(publicly known ot not): In this time No. In the Future Yes.
Height: 5"1
Weight: 160
Age: 18
Powers: He has all the powers of the Original Iron Man in addition to the ability to manipulate energy
Gadgets/weapons(if any): Iron Man (Future) armor modified to be more sleek and metallic. Device in his heart making it safer.
Appearance:tbr

You should cut out the fire manipulation too, or the Ironman suit, you basically have two clone characters. This is the best I can do at first glance.

if you really want tha armor that bad. I suggest to just having the iron man armor. I'm not sure if its super strong or not, but if someones able to play as Iron Man in marvel Universe then im sure you'd be able to use a duplicate or some kind

But just the armor

I really dont suggest using Time Travel at all, dont even think of it really.
And the clone thing you should also stay away from unless your character is weak, which im sure he's not with all that armor power.
But if you really want cloning, then take off the armor and use a weak character with lots of cloning powers.

These are words from someone with little to no knowledge of the comic book world. So i dont really know how things work half the time. If you really want a powerful character yet accepted in this RP, i suggest talking 1on1 with Wei Phoenix or Jalek Moye the host through PM or MSN.

Name: Jeffrey Star
Alias(code name): The Iron Knight
Identity(publicly known ot not): Yes
Height: 5"3
Weight: 160
Age: 17
Powers: He has the power of Superior Intellect and of course the ability to replicate himself 50 times a day as well as the power to fire energy blasts. His invention skill has proven to be a great asset to himself as he fights crime as the Iron Knight.
Gadgets/weapons(if any): Iron Man Armor modified to be more powerful and upgraded. Sword. He also has on special gloves inside the armor that enhance the properties of the Repulsor’s beams to be more powerful. In addition he has a set of Jet boots fused into the armor to replace the old ones which were inefficient by 7.5% to him and he also has added technology of several villains into the armor to the point it can no longer be called Iron Man Armor anymore.
Appearance: He is usually in a sleek metallic silver jumpsuit made out of nanites which turn into his battle suit the Iron Knight prototype he has built out of Tony Stark's original design. He also carries a sword on his back. It is said that the sword boosts his powers.
Bio : His family used to be wealthy until they were robbed blind by his idiot uncle Joseph. He then decided to take his inventing skills to the next level and went to an abandoned warehouse. There he found an empty Iron Man Armor. He took the armor and spent weeks repairing, upgrading and modifying the armor. His modifications made the armor lighter, faster, more durable and more powerful. Using that armor he has become the Iron Knight and he modified the Armor to look like a suit of Knight's armor. He also took the blueprints of the armor from the old hang out of Tony Stark and using those has put his new armor as a more advanced version of Iron Man’s albeit with different weapons since he didn’t know how to work the repulsors, he added in graviton micro lasers in each finger, as well as Energy blasts and orbs.

Name: Alexander T. Stark
Alias(code name): Steel
Identity(publicly known ot not): In this time No. In the Future Yes.
Height: 5"1
Weight: 160
Age: 18
Powers: He has a supreme level of intelligence. Using that intelligence he made a time belt for himself but it fused into his body by accident leaving him with the ability to travel through time 4 times a day. He has also learned an ancient martial art that enables him to channel his energy out through his hands in the form of energy blasts to strike opponets and stun them.
Gadgets/weapons(if any): Nanite jumpsuit that gives him super speed, strength and the ability to fly. Device in his heart making it safer. Time Belt (Inside him)
Appearance: (Will reveal soon)

Originally posted by Hawkeye113
Name: Jeffrey Star
Alias(code name): The Iron Knight
Identity(publicly known ot not): Yes
Height: 5"3
Weight: 160
Age: 17
Powers: He has the power of Superior Intellect as well as the power to fire energy blasts. His invention skill has proven to be a great asset to himself as he fights crime as the Iron Knight.
Gadgets/weapons(if any): Iron Man Armor modified to be more powerful and upgraded. Adamantium Sword. He also has on special gloves inside the armor that enhance the properties of the Repulsor’s beams to be more powerful. In addition he has a set of Jet boots fused into the armor to replace the old ones which were inefficient by 7.5% to him.
Appearance: He is usually in a sleek metallic silver jumpsuit made out of nanites which turn into his battle suit the Iron Knight prototype he has built out of Tony Stark's original design. He also carries a sword on his back.
Bio : His family used to be wealthy until they were robbed blind by his idiot uncle Joseph. He then decided to take his inventing skills to the next level and went to an abandoned warehouse. There he found an empty Iron Man Armor. He took the armor and spent weeks repairing, upgrading and modifying the armor. His modifications made the armor lighter, faster, more durable and more powerful. Using that armor he has become the Iron Knight and he modified the Armor to look like a suit of Knight's armor. He also took the blueprints of the armor from the old hang out of Tony Stark and using those has put his new armor as a more advanced version of Iron Man’s albeit with different weapons since he didn’t know how to work the repulsors, he added in graviton micro lasers in each finger, as well as Energy blasts.

Name: Alexander T. Stark
Alias(code name): Steel
Identity(publicly known ot not): In this time No. In the Future Yes.
Height: 5"1
Weight: 160
Age: 18
Powers: He has a supreme level of intelligence. He has also learned an ancient martial art that enables him to channel his energy out through his hands in the form of energy blasts to strike opponets and stun them. This is practically the Iron Fist.
Gadgets/weapons(if any): Nanite jumpsuit that gives him super speed, strength and the ability to fly. Device in his heart making it safer.
Appearance: (Will reveal soon)

Best I can do at first glance.

It will do. Nice job by the way. Except for removing his time belt. See,that was a key part of him. The Time belt anchors him in this period so he can't leap too far forward, or too far backward thus having it's use.

How about he used a time machine to go back in the past and it was a one way trip?

One way. Alright. That should work.

Name: Jeffrey Star
Alias(code name): The Iron Knight
Identity(publicly known ot not): Yes
Height: 5"3
Weight: 160
Age: 17
Powers: He has the power of Superior Intellect as well as the power to fire energy blasts. His invention skill has proven to be a great asset to himself as he fights crime as the Iron Knight.
Gadgets/weapons(if any): Iron Man Armor modified to be more powerful and upgraded. Adamantium Sword. He also has on special gloves inside the armor that enhance the properties of the Repulsor’s beams to be more powerful. In addition he has a set of Jet boots fused into the armor to replace the old ones which were inefficient by 7.5% to him.
Appearance: He is usually in a sleek metallic silver jumpsuit made out of nanites which turn into his battle suit the Iron Knight prototype he has built out of Tony Stark's original design. He also carries a sword on his back.
Bio : His family used to be wealthy until they were robbed blind by his idiot uncle Joseph. He then decided to take his inventing skills to the next level and went to an abandoned warehouse. There he found an empty Iron Man Armor. He took the armor and spent weeks repairing, upgrading and modifying the armor. His modifications made the armor lighter, faster, more durable and more powerful. Using that armor he has become the Iron Knight and he modified the Armor to look like a suit of Knight's armor. He also took the blueprints of the armor from the old hang out of Tony Stark and using those has put his new armor as a more advanced version of Iron Man’s albeit with different weapons since he didn’t know how to work the repulsors, he added in graviton micro lasers in each finger, as well as Energy blasts.

Name: Alexander T. Stark
Alias(code name): Steel
Identity(publicly known ot not): In this time No. In the Future Yes.
Height: 5"1
Weight: 160
Age: 18
Powers: He has a supreme level of intelligence. He has also learned an ancient martial art that enables him to channel his energy out through his hands in the form of energy blasts to strike opponets and stun them. This is practically the Iron Fist.
Gadgets/weapons(if any): Nanite jumpsuit that gives him super speed, strength and the ability to fly. Device in his heart making it safer.
Appearance: (Will reveal soon)

(Am I approved?)