Originally posted by Wei PhoenixIm sorry that i only can post for 10 min before my phone times me out not allowing me to write everything i want to right and im sorry that i have a smaller amount of message length can only go up to 1thousand and 50 or i would have put more and i did classify it as a fighting skill not a power and i didnt make uneccicary movement i made as much as i could on a phone
I suppose if you say so although your bio only stated that he has a fighting style and you in no way took the time to explain or give examples of it. I'm sorry he lost and all but I hope you took note of my reasons and work on them in the future. Don't talk, this isn't a movie or an anime, don't try to sound cool or make unnecessary movements or attacks. Next time try to make a character that's more original, and don't try to one up each previous post by you and your opponent.
Enter the second human without super powers! Emma and Jackie will take this place before you know it.
Name: Jackie
Age: 42
Alignment: Good
Race: Human
Birthplace (Can make your own) : North Dakota
Height: 6'3
Weight: 215 lbs
Power: None, he's just a peak human an indomitable spirit and mind. Jackie's will power is second to none.
Weapons/Gadgets: Two hands
Occupation: None
Bio: Jackie is a man with a kind heart, a man of discipline and a man who has gone through a few personal trials and tribulations that has brought him to where he is as a person today. He has lived his life as a blind man to appreciate sight, he has lived as a mute to understand a whisper, he has fasted on and off year round just to gain appreciation for his meal. Jackie has stripped himself of technology and fancy items and dealing only with the bare essentials. He will not eat meat unless he kills the animal itself and the animal is strong enough to defend itself.
Appearance:
Originally posted by Regelion1
Im sorry that i only can post for 10 min before my phone times me out not allowing me to write everything i want to right and im sorry that i have a smaller amount of message length can only go up to 1thousand and 50 or i would have put more and i did classify it as a fighting skill not a power and i didnt make uneccicary movement i made as much as i could on a phone
No need to apologize.
Where did you mention that he can stretch his arms or has super speed?
You made plenty of unnecessary movements, the fact that you have such a small word limit should've encouraged you to keep your movements simple and practical, nothing flashy and "cool".
Originally posted by Regelion1
He then stopped a distance from Donny so that they could view each other. The most evilist smile shown over Deathstars face as he waved towards Donny to come get him " So lets dance pretty boy ha ha ha ha."
What was practical and necessary about that right there? All he did was flirt with his opponent and smile at him. That could've been time used to attack him and keep him on the defensive side.
Originally posted by Regelion1Most Evilist?!
The speed Deathstar moved at was incrediable it always made him feel like he was invisible. A breeze blew through the dessert area and from the breeze flew shuriken towards Donny. He then stopped a distance from Donny so that they could view each other. The most evilist smile shown over Deathstars face as he waved towards Donny to come get him " So lets dance pretty boy ha ha ha ha."
Originally posted by Wei Phoenix😆What was practical and necessary about that right there? All he did was [b]flirt
with his opponent and smile at him. That could've been time used to attack him and keep him on the defensive side. [/B]
If any assistance i still have my chat
Originally posted by Regelion1Sorry, I meant nothing by it.
If you know anything on that post i was on my psp and that is the most i could write on it so there you go and when i figured that out i was like what ever because i was going to try to go to Hitosus house and post on his computer but he was busy so i couldn't make something better like i wanted to
Originally posted by Regelion1
If you know anything on that post i was on my psp and that is the most i could write on it so there you go and when i figured that out i was like what ever because i was going to try to go to Hitosus house and post on his computer but he was busy so i couldn't make something better like i wanted to
I don't think you are comprehending what I am saying correctly. Your reply is completely irrelevant to what I said.