the law of oaths ( character creation and discussion)

Started by XanatosForever42 pages

No, no, isn't it obvious? Annie's a great assassin, but nate's some kind of uber ranger that can track anything. Never mind that his his backstory says that he's this doctor person, he apparently also had time to spend hours on end studying peoples's footprints through rain and sleet and snow and mud and all kinds of different methods.

I edited my last post xan, go take a look.

And ORLY!? No way! Oh my god, this Nate guy sounds like a badass. So let's recount.

A Brilliant Strategist
An Expert Swordsman
A Well Trained Doctor / Healer
Uber Ranger that can Track Anything
Everyone Loves him

Holy crap, I wish I could be that awesome! 😄 Sadly, I'm restricted by a character sheet that says I must be a novice. How sad this makes me T.T

well you should know that the smallest things you do in real life can afect your battel stile like a person captures animals need to hear and smell an enemy so in transfresion into battel his increased senses can help him uncover a hiden enemy and i explaind why he can notice small things in my edit to my last post
edit: the brealeant stratgest comes frome needing to know what to do in operations so he can organise what to do first and what to do last to increase the survial rate of the person hes operating on and if you realy want to turn it down i will try to but i just said basic at magic

Oh my, no Nate, no! I understand! *she moves onto her knees and bows* Forgive me for not bowing, I was unaware that I was in the presence of someone who could do anything! I am trash before your mighty word, please forgive me for not backing down sooner! Please, be epic for us all! In fact, let's just all step back and watch Nate solo everything because he's just the best person ever! He can stand up against Shota's incredible Oath Strength, he can shrug off an attack from Black like it's nothing, he can locate an Assassins footprints! My god Nate the epicness that you have is just awesome! I wish I was as cool as you <3

T_T I WAS JUST TRYING TO FIND ANNIE SINCE WE DIDNT KNOW WERE SHE WAS SO I PUT IT SO HE CHOULD FIND OUT T_T
edit:and anyway what about the divice to make it so i chouldent use my magic thats not something varey easy to find D_D|

Oh my, please keep going! Don't even worry about the others getting to post. In fact, why don't we just have everyone else back out so you can do everything solo ^_^ That's clearly what you want to do.

ATTENTION EVERYONE! Nate will be solo'ing this RP from now on! Please don't post! Allow our expert here to do what he does best!

well why dont i just leave and i will come back later when you guys are so much stronger than me that you can squish me like a bug

Why don't you just listen to us? DO YOU EVEN REALIZE how much you're stepping on other characters? If it was Shota in there, I wouldn't make a single complaint that you saw her footprints. Nor would I make a complaint about seeing Faust, Avon, Donny, or even an antagonist like Black or Dominus! But Annie is an Assassin, she's trained specifically NOT to leave obvious markings like footsteps. If she did, she would be a shitty assassin.

ok i will explain my works right know
briliant stratagest: he has a fullproof escape method
an expert swordsmin: ivnever actualy been in a fight were i should trully good swordsmin i was hit aside esaly with one hit to black
a welltraind docter: ill amit that ive been pushing my luck on my back story but thats basicly all i got to say
uber range: he is not that good but an energy elemntal can esaliy subconshisly increase a persons 5 seenses with just a small bost in the seenses can make a person a grate person and he was atack all of his seenses were going on super drive and enway when he saw the footprints his magick was still working just abit because it wasent completly gone
the roccet: i put this in he thought of this move because the attack of black he needed a good way to move 2 pepole or more without using huge amounts of energy so he came up with this move to escape fast since his outher move is mostly only usealbe with one person
here is my explanations he soon will lose mostly use the ranger inless he starts becoming more and more casicous if this is not acceptable then i dont know what is T_T

Goddamn it, another post that was 75% illegible.

So here's the parts I understood, responding to them..

Originally posted by nate9939
briliant stratagest: he has a fullproof escape method

And what if someone shows up who can counter his "escape method"? Then he dies because he was careless and ran in alone. Even if he found Annie, what if she couldn't do anything because she was unconscious? You're assuming that your character is more strategic then someone like Horus. That's why we have OOC. To plan out what will affect more then one character..
Originally posted by nate9939
an expert swordsmin: ivnever actualy been in a fight were i should trully good swordsmin i was hit aside esaly with one hit to black

You claimed to be trained decently by your father when he wasn't teaching you to be an expert doctor.
Originally posted by nate9939
a welltraind docter: ill amit that ive been pushing my luck on my back story but thats basicly all i got to say

If you want to be an expert doctor.. you should make that your class, not a master with weapons.
Originally posted by nate9939
uber range: he is not that good but an energy elemntal can esaliy subconshisly increase a persons 5 seenses with just a small bost in the seenses can make a person a grate person and he was atack all of his seenses were going on super drive and enway when he saw the footprints his magick was still working just abit because it wasent completly gone

Okay, no. I'm calling 100% BS right here. An Energy Element has nothing to do with increasing the senses. It doesn't increase hearing, sight, smell, or or taste. It might enhance touch but that's just because it can increase your sensitivity. It could also neutralize your sensitivity and make you immune to pain, not to damage, but to pain.
Originally posted by nate9939
the roccet: i put this in he thought of this move because the attack of black he needed a good way to move 2 pepole or more without using huge amounts of energy so he came up with this move to escape fast since his outher move is mostly only usealbe with one person

Lolwut? I didn't understand any of this.. So he had a move to teleport two people. So... WHY did he have to teleport two people? Was this another means of doing something because you weren't patient enough to wait for someone else to post? ThIS ISN'T SPEED ROLEPLAY, this is Forum. Which means you can wait a few hours if you must so that others can be fair. If this is wrong, ignore this comment.
Originally posted by nate9939
here is my explanations he soon will lose mostly use the ranger inless he starts becoming more and more casicous if this is not acceptable then i dont know what is T_T

The rest of this post... made no sense. It was too illegible to read. I understood a few words, specifically "here is my explanation(s)[cancel s]".

Okay, so I had a bit of time to cool down, which is probably a good thing.

Nate, you have to understand something. In this setting you created for the game, we are all supposed to be young, underdeveloped, and inexperienced, on top of being more or less civilians. The more this game has gone on, your character has been showing power, abilities, and skills that simply do not match the setting.

We are supposed to be struggling for survival after our home town has been brutally invaded, yet every time you post your character is miraculously able to tend to our every need. That does not makes for good story telling, and it makes the other characters, our characters, have no reason to do anything at all. That, as players, is frustrating.

You remind me of a friend I once had that I played Dungeons & Dragons with. He would run the games as Dungeon Master, creating the setting. Whenever our characters participated, however, our actions would eventually be ignored as he brought in his own characters and had hem perform amazing feats that would essentially solve our problems, one way or another. It wasn't fun.

If you want to be a hero in-game, that's okay. You should not, however, expect to jump into every scene that involves conflict or drama, with the capability to solve the problem, even if the consequence might be the death of a character. You might be trying to help, but it ruins the sense of story. People are going to die. People should die. That's the setting you've placed us in, and even moreso as children. If you save everyone from everything, every time, well...it's just bad writing.

I'm not trying to insult you or put you down. I'm trying to help you realize that we're all in this together, and sometimes, that means you shouldn't try to have an answer for our situations, especially if your character is not directly involved in them from the start of the scene

eh nvm

@nate9939: refer to XanatosForevers comment. I agree with him. I now feel bad about how I handled it. I was a bit annoyed after having read the last post in OOC.

I'm holding off on replying. though I can, I want to give other people the chance. This thing is going too far between just Nate and I. It's upsetting though... I hate leaving an RP with someone else having gotten the last post because then I can't always tell if it's a new reply or an old reply.

I'll make a post, then. I'm sure Avon's pretty confused at the moment. 😆

That sounds good. Please, try and wake up Donny too. Someone do it at least, I want to get everyone together on this so that nobody ends up getting lost.

i just thought of something that chould have stoped all this fighting wile i was in the shower @_@| well if i said something to the extent that he was woried that he chould see the footprints (aka he chould see them cause of the fight) anway a question on the restraints can i still move my hands or can i not move them

No you cannot. Shota has you tied. Nate, don't make a single move until after I post. / I / Post. Not Scen, Not Xan. If you keep posting after each persons post, then you progress the story. When people take turns, the story stays in the same general area and gives everyone a chance. That's why I'm waiting to post. If Xan, Scen, or Reg make a post then it can take place during the time that Nate and Shota were sent flying off. If you make a post, then it's taking away their opportunity to do things.

i have a thought why dont we do something to the extent that each team fight a grunt and nate cant inerfer cause of the restraints because he cant move his hand but it will hapen after evrey one gets to post once or twice and after annie heals

... What? O.o