Palpatine vs. Valkorion Fanfiction

Started by Beniboybling5 pages

Originally posted by ILS
Conventional methods would not stop him.
My favourite part lmao

Originally posted by Darth Abonis
You are a talented writer. Keep writing, that was great.

😂

Look at the reactions of Palpatine-wankers! I treated Palpatine as a respectable foe in my fanfic unlike the sheer (one-sided) wankery for a single character in the first post. The original post gives the impression of some kind of Palpatine porn flick or something.

Originally posted by Beniboybling
Erm...

Zakuul is a nexus. The Eternal Throne is a giant control station for the Fleet. That Vitiate built. And it's pretty much in outer space. Good job, Beni. Now, go back to reading what the OP said about it draining all life and being a twisted mass of evil if you want something to critique.

Originally posted by FreshestStrap
Zakuul is a nexus. The Eternal Throne is a giant control station for the Fleet. That Vitiate built. And it's pretty much in outer space. Good job, Beni. Now, go back to reading what the OP said about it draining all life and being a twisted mass of evil if you want something to critique.

The Eternal Throne which occupies a building on the aforementioned nexus? Not sure what outer space has to do with anything, since nexuses have factually existed in the naked vacuum before.

The planet is a nexus. The Throne is not. You

The point.

It's a balanced nexus anyways, so who cares? 🙂

Originally posted by FreshestStrap
The planet is a nexus. The Throne is not. You

The point.

Yeah, I forgot that the Force can't permeate walls or atmosphere. Clearly not a nexus.

You've become weak, Tempest. To think you once were this forum's father. Now? Just dust.

Originally posted by FreshestSlice
You've become weak, Tempest. To think you once were this forum's father. Now? Just dust.

Assuming that's true, the fact that you still can't beat me should bring you enormous shame. 😬

The fact that you don't know you're dead brings more shame than anything.

I live in you. I'm like Mufasa that way.

....

uhuh

Originally posted by S_W_LeGenD
😂

Look at the reactions of Palpatine-wankers! I treated Palpatine as a respectable foe in my fanfic unlike the sheer (one-sided) wankery for a single character in the first post. The original post gives the impression of some kind of Palpatine porn flick or something.

Lmao, I paid barely any attention to the content, only its atrocious literary quality.

Easily the worst fan fiction I've ever read. 🙂

Originally posted by FreshestSlice
Zakuul is a nexus. The Eternal Throne is a giant control station for the Fleet. That Vitiate built. And it's pretty much in outer space. Good job, Beni. Now, go back to reading what the OP said about it draining all life and being a twisted mass of evil if you want something to critique.
The Eternal Throne inhabits the planet's upper atmosphere. I'm not seeing how that is so far and away from the planet itself that it wouldn't benefit from the nexus. Especially considering planetary nexuses have been both felt and tap into from actual outer space. mmm

And why would I critique the accuracy of a piece of fan ficiton? Lmao.

Again, Beni, since you can't read two posts up, I never said Zakuul wasn't a nexus or that the power from the nexus wouldn't effect people near the throne. It's actually one of the things I hate about people saying Vitiate didn't have Dromund Kaas to tap into during the Chapter 2 finale. What I did say is that the throne isn't a nexus, which it isn't, at all. And it's near a neutral one at that, not a mass of evil, or whatever.

And I'm sure you'd jump on it, if it were about how Ahsoka spent six months working in a brothel for Palpatine.

I love how freshest' semantics destroy even the best of you 🙂

Originally posted by FreshestSlice
Again, Beni, since you can't read two posts up, I never said Zakuul wasn't a nexus or that the power from the nexus wouldn't effect people near the throne. It's actually one of the things I hate about people saying Vitiate didn't have Dromund Kaas to tap into during the Chapter 2 finale. What I did say is that the throne isn't a nexus, which it isn't, at all. And it's near a neutral one at that, not a mass of evil, or whatever.
And that's wrong. Whether or not it's the core of the nexus on Zakuul or not it is a place where the Force is unusually strong, i.e. a nexus, in some shape and form, which you flat out denied it to be. 👆

Nor is it unreasonable to infer, within the contexts of a fan fiction, that Valkorion could have designed the spire to focus Zakuul's energies, as he did with various Sith structures on Dromund Kaas and is in general obsessed with power, and harnessing power.

And I'm sure you'd jump on it, if it were about how Ahsoka spent six months working in a brothel for Palpatine.
As if I would even go near something that cancerous. 🙂

Beni soloing Skillz-n-'Strap tbh.

What did I do? 🙂

Nothing of consequence. That's the point.

You also bent the knee.