Krabs55 Senior Member Gender: Female
great the more the merrier!
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10:19 PM
Nerdanel Ice Queen Gender: Female
Well im happy with mine!
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12:23 PM
Trickster True KMC Jester Gender: Male
quote: Originally posted by Silver Stardust I live near there, in Chicago, about a 3-4 hour drive from Indianapolis...why? Any particular reason?
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07:39 PM
Peach mordrem Gender: Female
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Neat...though why Indianapolis? There's not much there.... __________________
08:10 PM
Trickster True KMC Jester Gender: Male
My dad knows a family there... I wanted to experience American school, so I'm going for a couple of days. __________________ "If clowns warred on monkeys, and the monkeys had guns, and were trained to use them, who would win?"
07:18 PM
Syren dreaming Gender: Female
You could write it from the point of view of Death himself __________________ ThorinWoofer
08:45 AM
Trickster True KMC Jester Gender: Male
Okay I have two poems, but I'm not sure which one to submit! Oh, no! __________________ "If clowns warred on monkeys, and the monkeys had guns, and were trained to use them, who would win?"
02:58 PM
Syren dreaming Gender: Female
Just go with your instinct.... I'm sure they're both excellent in their own way __________________ ThorinWoofer
04:52 PM
Trickster True KMC Jester Gender: Male
Hmmm... And now I need help deciding which order to put the verses in. Do you think a suicide should go first, or after a stabbing?
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05:11 PM
Syren dreaming Gender: Female
Depends who's being stabbed, if the suicide is a result of the stabbing then it needs to go last.... but if someone committed suicide and then someone else got stabbed as an ensuing occurrence, then vice versa. If possible, and if you're clever enough, you could put the second event first and then tie in the first event at the end of the poem, but you need to make a strong and obvious connection in between. Hope I helped __________________ ThorinWoofer
07:53 PM
Trickster True KMC Jester Gender: Male
Fraid not, Syren!
__________________ "If clowns warred on monkeys, and the monkeys had guns, and were trained to use them, who would win?"
08:06 PM
Syren dreaming Gender: Female
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08:23 PM
Trickster True KMC Jester Gender: Male
And they're done! I had two poems, but I chose the one I thought was most appealing... Though it is darker. However, here is my other on!
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09:03 PM
Syren dreaming Gender: Female
This is good, if a little short.... I'm guessing you wanted it to be blunt and full on? Well written.
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08:31 AM
Trickster True KMC Jester Gender: Male
I don't write long poetry - a message that takes so long to read it gets tedious isn't really getting a point across.
__________________ "If clowns warred on monkeys, and the monkeys had guns, and were trained to use them, who would win?"
11:34 PM
Peach mordrem Gender: Female
Moderator
I posted my entry... __________________
04:34 AM
Syren dreaming Gender: Female
It's good that you can approach such a personally sensitive subject with professionalism __________________ ThorinWoofer
09:53 AM
Peach mordrem Gender: Female
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Thanks Kez __________________
02:48 PM
Trickster True KMC Jester Gender: Male
It's depressing that whenever I think of death I think of suicide. I've just realised that. __________________ "If clowns warred on monkeys, and the monkeys had guns, and were trained to use them, who would win?"
05:00 PM
Krabs55 Senior Member Gender: Female
really i think about what happens after death.
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Jan 14th, 2005 10:19 PM
Apologies, I made a few assumptions 
Well done sweetie 
