Cammii You'll be the death of me Gender: Female
quote: (post ) Originally posted by kava_kava i write alot of poetry that people can't understand but that's because i write it for me. If you want your poetry to touch other people you have to develop the images and lines. for example its okay to talk about splinters and fireflies, i love that line, but if you want me to enjoy it, just develop it more. if not, then its a poem that only touches you, which is great.
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calvinNhobbes Senior Member Gender: Male
Thanks for your suggestions, both of you. I appreciate the input and can understand your points. I may go back and reinterpret this poem into a new one. It will be interesting to see how it turns out.
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calvinNhobbes Senior Member Gender: Male
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