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Fëanor
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hmmmm.....WE wonders too shifty

Jun 9th, 2005 03:35 AM

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Coldfire
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Location: Vancouver, Canada

Niiiice, lol. Post more stuff please.

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Jun 9th, 2005 04:43 AM

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Fëanor
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soon....very soon

as of now, i'm in a weird mental state huh

Jun 9th, 2005 05:33 AM

DreamingWarrior
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Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Fëanor
soon....very soon

as of now, i'm in a weird mental state

hahah I'd guess so with the gettin married and all... ahhahaha!

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Jun 9th, 2005 12:07 PM

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Fëanor
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Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hahah I'd guess so with the gettin married and all... ahhahaha!

how'd you know?!?

actually it's more chaotic than that...and the ones i did came out as drivel(sp)...made me wanna gag no expression

Jun 9th, 2005 03:31 PM

DreamingWarrior
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hahahahah!

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Jun 9th, 2005 03:44 PM

Fëanor
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Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hahahahah!

case in point:

I gave my love a cherry
That had a lovely stone
She took said pit
And blindly spit
Directly at my bone
I winced with pain and agony
For the love of my life you see
Had hit the spot, that was so hot
So thus the wenched has damaged me

need i say more? no expression

Jun 9th, 2005 04:01 PM

DreamingWarrior
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Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!

haahhahahhahahahrotflmao!!!! hahahahahahahahahha!!!!!!

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Jun 9th, 2005 04:45 PM

Coldfire
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Fëanor
case in point:

I gave my love a cherry
That had a lovely stone
She took said pit
And blindly spit
Directly at my bone
I winced with pain and agony
For the love of my life you see
Had hit the spot, that was so hot
So thus the wenched has damaged me

need i say more?

Uhhh... no you don't lol wink

Ah well, we can't all be fabulous every day can we?? hahaha

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Jun 12th, 2005 08:32 AM

Smodden
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Gender: Male
Location: The Darkness

Goodness Fëanor, why didn't you ever tell me about this place! eek!

Jeez, I loved every single one....
especially this one...

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Originally posted by Fëanor
thanks cold....

i don't know what i was thinking when i did this - but obviously this one has no rhyme or reason: this is what happens when boredom hits you

A vision so visionary as to seem so visceral
Her locks a light looming longing to be literal
The curvature of her curves carves a curvaceous course
O’ but for the buttocks which buttresses the borsch
For her hand can handle this handsome man handily
Her breasts abreast beyond the breadth quite readily
Nay I say this day of dismay as I say with pride
The groom is doomed so soon but for the bride
I attain the pain of my shame with vainglorious wonder
For the beauty with booty so moody has shorn me asunder
What price? What price? For the vice of her flesh
Groping, reaching, pleading I fall through the mesh
A vision so visionary as to seem so visceral?

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Jun 12th, 2005 05:16 PM

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Fëanor
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....smod you're too much embarrasment

Jun 14th, 2005 05:20 AM

Coldfire
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Lol I wanna hear some more please!! big grin

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Jun 15th, 2005 07:08 AM

Fëanor
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Location: Winterfell

as soon as my mind is out of it's chaotic state big grin

Jun 15th, 2005 07:07 PM

Coldfire
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Oh mines like that too right now so don't worry smile

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Jun 15th, 2005 09:14 PM

Fëanor
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Gender: Male
Location: Winterfell

don't ask....

Mirror man, looking at me
Smiling face sort of mockingly
Wonder what goes through your mind
Empty spaces is what I’ll find

I laugh and cry and you do the same
Why is it that you play this game
Can you ever find it to reason with me
The distorted image that I see

I hope you’ll find it hard to believe
When I grope for my soul to live
Is it so simple just to say one word
A singsong sound from a mocking bird

You are my mirror man
The one I see and live for, when I can
And everyday I see you there
Like me, like you, we go on and stare…

Jun 20th, 2005 03:35 AM

Fëanor
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Gender: Male
Location: Winterfell

i call these two ones i did my sour grape moments.....

I go high, when the jiggy-man cries
Lovin’ strife laced with coconut pies
Half a step here to the fore
Catchin’ myself goin’ out the door

I am forever in the arms of a soldier man
Hup one, two, three so I thank you Dan
I am forever up and down, tumblin’ frown makes me smile
Hello left to the right oh god! I’m gonna die…

You said that purple mountains wave
I stroll through the empty graves
The lonely cold stones beckon me
Whispering sounds that threaten me

I am forever fumblin’ for words to say
A fever of the mind that fills my day
I am forever wondering, wandering the cloudy sky
Hello left to the right oh god! I’m gonna die…

Jun 20th, 2005 03:36 AM

Fëanor
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Gender: Male
Location: Winterfell

more crap......and not a word Ou

Here I am
Wondering what you’re gonna do
I’ve a plan
That don’t necessarily included you
And when the haze in my eyes begins to lift
I realize that you were never my gift
So like the road that leads me there
I’ve come to my find my soul is bare

Do me, sue me, oh man I’ve got to say
Who do you think will come my way
The sounds of boom-boom shaka-laka in my room
We’ll make love in the darkening gloom

Here I am
Smokin’ and not getting’ high
I’ve a plan
That ain’t gonna make you cry, cry, cry
And so the haze has come and gone from me
The blue and red idol of my yesteryear
A song to sing of only yesterday
There is no one left for me to even care

Jun 20th, 2005 04:14 AM

Fëanor
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Gender: Male
Location: Winterfell

definately a winner for the idiocy award....BUT HEY!

Wait for the corner to turn around
Wait for the rope to come unbound
I’ve got a feeling down below me there
It stirs the feelings but no one cares

My friend rises to your abrasive touch
It wilts for sure when you do me much
I yearn for something that’s bound to be
A whole lotta nothing but agony

To thrust the mind goin’ in and out
The sweat of my youth will likely burst and spout
What I’ve got left is nothing more
Than a night with a lonely bore

Give me wine and drink my lovely dove
When my hand is curled and balled to shove
The inner moisture that seeps on me
Hold on girl, I’ve got to pee

Last edited by Fëanor on Jun 20th, 2005 at 04:40 AM

Jun 20th, 2005 04:28 AM

DreamingWarrior
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Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Fëanor
more crap......and not a word Ou

Here I am
Wondering what you’re gonna do
I’ve a plan
That don’t necessarily included you
And when the haze in my eyes begins to lift
I realize that you were never my gift
So like the road that leads me there
I’ve come to my find my soul is bare

Do me, sue me, oh man I’ve got to say
Who do you think will come my way
The sounds of boom-boom shaka-laka in my room
We’ll make love in the darkening gloom

Here I am
Smokin’ and not getting’ high
I’ve a plan
That ain’t gonna make you cry, cry, cry
And so the haze has come and gone from me
The blue and red idol of my yesteryear
A song to sing of only yesterday
There is no one left for me to even care

haha cool poem!