Sodapop Allerdyce's Poem(s)

i always wanted to get a professional's opinion. had debated many times in the past wheather to send in my songs to velvet revolver or not. so, after joining the vr forums and finding out duff posts there, saved me a lot of trouble and sending an envelope covered in numerous stamps! 😛 😆

hah...yeah, thas true.
ahhh.....the advantages of the internet...😊

i can't wait until vr finishes touring so that duff can post and see the message that i sent him! 🤘

yeah......would be cool to get a reply from a celeb.

anyways, i wrote a new poem earlier this week. still working on the format. trying to work a title, a song to use as a frame of reference for when people are reading it and see if it should be a song or poem. post it sometime this weekend or next week if i have any time.

cool👆

I'll be sure to read it when you post it.

i crashed and burn with a few other previous attempts this week and previous. always do that before i get a good one out. getting back and trying my best to stay in the songwriting groove! 😄

yeah...can take a while sometimes to come up with a piece you're satisfied with.

yeah, takes a while to get the lines in my head down on paper right and get the theme flowing in my head how it did when i wrote my other pieces.

yeah.

Sometimes I struggle to find the exact words I want..but I find em in the end

i write a verse. crash. don't like it. move on to next topic. well, my new successful and full written bit is about this jerk in my class. written a couple of poems and song about him perform. such as "wasted upon a fool". remember that one? it was a song.

yeah...I remember that one🙂...was a good piece👆

there were a few poems but i can't remembered what i called them though. well, i can't wait to title my new one! it's dark, and very angry. i have never written one so hateful and angry towards him before. i even go as far to cuss. makes it come across nicely. the tone and all. you dig?

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well, the swearing adds to the tone.....so really, it would work well with your poem.

i normally try not to and some reviewers don't like. but screw them. i'm sorry. but it has to be that way. they have no choice! 👿 😛 😆

hah! I agree though:..screw em if they don't like it..it's your poem......you can write it how you wanna.

i remember one time i did use a very mild swear word once in a piece, and an online xanga pal told me it kind of ruined a few lines in it. but oh well. so what!

😖oh pfft...I'm sure it didn't ruin it at all.

i just didn't take so well to her review or any review that says i need to improve something. constructive critiscism or any minor thing they didn't like bugs me. i can't help but think about it at times. but then i just say "screw that" for some of my pieces wouldn't be the same if i hadn't listened to them! 😄

exactly!🙂 just write your poems how you wanna write em....
your own opinion matters in the end.
it's what you like that counts.