Sodapop Allerdyce's Poem(s)

Started by BOPRecruit 1627 pages

yeah. but i normally prefer not to swear and avoid it. only when it calls for a really angry song and esp. necessary when i'm 'yelling' at the jerk.

yeah, thas fair enough then.

gosh, i love poison! this is my second or third time through their cd since i mentioned that i was listening to them to you earlier! 😱 i would so want to use their songs in my fics and use their songs as frame of references for future pieces that i write! 😄

then use em😊

i would if i had the right plot for a song in mind and be able to write the lyrics and sing them in my head like that song. but so far i haven't. so give me a break please. need time. still rusty. *rollseyes*

anyways, that poem/song that i mentioned earlier. i'm trying to rework it. see if i can format it into a song, title it, and debate weather to post. because, i looked at it yesterday and it sounds crappy. well, i hadn't written anything in ages so couldn't expect much on that piece. but i just might post that piece of crap for the heck of it. dont' care if i get reviews for that. get it posted. period.

also, yesterday during brit lit, my t.a. period, wrote a new poem. haven't written a poem in ages for i try to stick to song most of the time nowadays. but, the new poem kicks total ass and i had "wonderful" muses to inspire it. *cough cough* for now, i'm calling it "The Evil Twins" or something like that. i know that sounds funny to you now, but just wait until i post it!

give you a break? I wasn't meaning to put any pressure on you at all😖

hah.....s'good that you wrote a new poem tho👆 can't wait to see it.

well, you just made it sound like i have never thought of to use them of yet and just telling you it takes time to really dig the song so much to the point that i want to use it as a frame of reference. sorry about that. that's another thing about being online and all, people can misinterpret what you mean and then take it personally. i know that i do that. sometimes.

ok...well then I'm sorry it came across that way.....cuz I really didn't mean it that way at all. Nah, it's ok....and yeah, that is the bad thing bout the net..hah...can't always tell exactly what a person means.

sorry, in a rush. no time to chat. got to get to bed as soon as i post this. here's the link to my new poem: The Evil Twins by Sodapop Allerdyce

ok....that's alright^-^

Well, I read your poem and posted my review🙂
excellent work👆😄

Hey BOP. 🙂

RagingSilent: Thanks for the review and support! By the way, whose that guy in your siggy? 😄

DCLXVI: Hey Melkore! long time no see around and talk to! how have you been lately, man?! 😱 🤘

Nice poem, BOP!

Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
RagingSilent: Thanks for the review and support! By the way, whose that guy in your siggy? 😄

DCLXVI: Hey Melkore! long time no see around and talk to! how have you been lately, man?! 😱 🤘

I've been well. 😛
BTW> Nice poems. I'll talk to ya' via PM, so as to not clutter this thread. 😛

Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
RagingSilent: Thanks for the review and support! By the way, whose that guy in your siggy? 😄

DCLXVI: Hey Melkore! long time no see around and talk to! how have you been lately, man?! 😱 🤘

thas ok boppy🙂
😊 thas the lead singer of Mudvayne

Originally posted by RagingSilent
thas ok boppy🙂
😊 thas the lead singer of Mudvayne

and his name is...? 😑 i'm not into mudvayne. so i don't know anything about them.

DC: it's okay to clutter my thread. i don't mind...for now. besides, it's going to be ages until i get my next piece. since school's over. get lazy and get ideas. but don't write.

😂

Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
and his name is...? 😑 i'm not into mudvayne. so i don't know anything about them.

DC: it's okay to clutter my thread. i don't mind...for now. besides, it's going to be ages until i get my next piece. since school's over. get lazy and get ideas. but don't write.

his name is Chad Gray🙂

BOP you need to get copy rights for your work so others won't steal it! Seriously! Very good literature. Thanks for sharing! 😖mile:

Originally posted by ~Air Angel~
BOP you need to get copy rights for your work so others won't steal it! Seriously! Very good literature. Thanks for sharing! 😖mile:

you make a very good point there, angel. that's why i don't post the actual text of my new pieces here anymore. i just post a link and stats about it. i do worry about my old work. but i'm not too worried for now. anyways, thanks for the compliment and enjoying my work so much! i'm deeply flattered and appreciate it. *hugs*

ZoSo: DAMMIT! YOU CHANGED YOUR USERNAME AGAIN?! I'M GOING TO KILL ONE OF THESE DAYS! I SWEAR ONE DAY...ONE DAY! 😠 🙄 😛 😆

TO EVERYONE: sometime later today or tomorrow, i will post a new poem that i wrote yesterday after dinner called "Behind the Masks". so keep your eyes out for that piece! 😎 😮‍💨