our own sequel

bother!!!! my stupid mom is telling me to get off......... erghhh if i manage to sneak on later i'll tell u.............. 🙄

k ill be on till about 10 or so.

talk to you tonite if not tomorrow 😄

Mary in a flash was in the water searching for the monkey that hell itself spat back out! mary swam deeper and deeper searching for the vile monkey. At last she couldn't handle it any longer she had to get some air. she swam to the surfae and swallow the lovely air." That stupid monkey, he swims way too fast and he doesn;t have to breath. no FAIR! anywayz the map will be ruined it is just parchment ... did anyone happen to make an extra copy of the map?"

still feeling a little sick and gross jack srcreamed "The boat is sinking love... any other iDEAS!" "swim?"" your not helping at all ... if you weren't already in the water ... I WOULD THrow YOU OVER BOARD... SAVVY? oooo my 'ead ouucchhh thats way to loud mate turn it into a wishper .. * whispers*" indoor voices" " Umm jack do you tend to speak to your self alot, or is this a rather new habit?" said elizabeth

"We're sinking," said ELizabeth panicked, "why are we sinking? Will!"
"Calm down Elizabeth," he assured her, "we'll be fine, we just need to figure out where the water's coming from"
"there" mary pointed to a hole in the corner of the boat.

oops mine came late

well im off, maybe ill come back on later again bye!

k, bye! thanks for all the website stuff. its really cool!

I thought the monkey died when Elizabeth pushed him off the boat. I could be wrong though. 😕

you haven't seen the easter egg at the end of the movie. i didn't know until i was really bored and watched the credits. at the end of the credits, the monkey comes and steals a piece of the gold and scampers off.

y is it called the easter egg?

because it's a surprise!

lol i have no idea...i just made that up

JAck went over to the leaking corner and ropped of a corner of his shirt and stuffed it in the hole. Then he ordered, "Alright youse, start getting the water outta this boat and let's get the hell out of this godforsaken ocean to that island!"

Immediatly Will, Mary and Elizabeth cupped their hands and scooped the water out of the boat. Jack used a bucket that was in the boat already. When the water was down to a low level, He and Will each took one oar and they began rowing as fast as they could and Mary watched to corner with the hole in it and Elizabeth kept getting water out of the boat.

lol so anyone else??? or should i continue on this?

I dont mean to be pesimistic or anything, but has anyone noticed that there's no real plot to this thing? we're kinda just staying in the same place. if anyone agree's, i have a new idea. everyone makes their own sequel, pm them to me, and then i'll take parts from them and make a new one and send it to *drumroll, hero music* SUPER KATHLEEN to post on the site. 😬

we can use things from this, too. i just think that it has no real plot and if we want to send it in or something, it might want to go in a diferent direction.

i actually like the story, i just think we need to move on from ht e island and the monkey 😮

and maybe cut some of the stalling, too.