our own sequel

tha'ts ok he's an actor plus if you like him hebeing mean may be a turn on lol though i don't think he's hot...i'm a jack sparrow/johnny depp kinda gal

i think the rally monkey should be our evil monkey

lol

Okay, i have an idea. lets go on with the sequel. so mary and her father are drunk, will and elizabeth are asleep. they are all out on a boat looking for the treasure. the monkey has found the map.

the evil jack monkey climbed aboard the boat * i mean ship* where captain jaramiha quickly glanced at it and shouted " victory is ours!! "

what if there are like 2 guyskinda dumb like pintel and ragetti and one of them calls jaramiha " captain Jemima(sp?)( u know like the syrup)

back on the boat, mary was just waking up. she felt awful! Her father was puking off one side of the boat and will was rowing. Elizabeth was still asleep, hand on her boddis incase jack was going to take the map.

keeo going. i'm going to go have dinner.

Mary felt for the map ... but it was gone!

im back

where did really bad eggs go? she was really good!

I know .. wait r u saying u don't like my writing ... hey !
thats ok cuz I don't either heheh

i sorry i wasn't here i had to eat dinner lol now i'll take my shower and i'll be on 🤘

u eat dinner in 15 min !! WOW u eat fast .. it takes me 4ever!!!

lol
we had sloppy joes.
i'm very sloppy.
if pro is the opposite of con
is progress the oposite of congress?
lol

Originally posted by samIam
I know .. wait r u saying u don't like my writing ... hey !
thats ok cuz I don't either heheh

your fine, you just need to write more. we were writing entire paragraphs before, and they were really suspensful.

how fun in the shower! i have to take a shower soon .. cuz I got wrting and my mom's art class so I have to braid me hair ( eternety)

Mary looked about, trying to locate the map...as she looked abuot she saw a monkey sitting near the edge of the boat. Everyone else was sleeping, so Mary cooed softly, "Hello mate! How did you get here? You should get away from the edge,you might fall in." As soon as she said that, the little monkey dived in, his hand holding her half of the map! "YOU LITTLE WICKED MONKEY!!! BAD BAD MONKEY GET BACK HERE!" Her shouting woke up Will, Elizabeth, and Jack who saw the monkey and fratically began paddling after the monkey.

"BLASTED MONKEY!!!" Jack hollered after the monkey. "Urrgg...me head...gimme that rum...."

hahhahah!!

will "well, your great plan didn't work out well, did it, Jack."
Jack "oh, shut up." he had pits of puke in his dreadlock beard.
"I wonder how they knew about the map?" Elizabeth said, sitting up.
Mary "forget about that, we've got bigger problems right now."
she looked at the water slowly filling up the boat.
"BLASTED MONKEY!"