our own sequel

yea, i think the monkeys in too much of the story

yeah, and we are staying in the same place.
and the acters dont really sound like this.

hmm we should think of a plot and assign different parts to people so it doesnt get chaotic

yeah. but lets start a new thread because this one is really full.

i LIKE THIS STORY ! but of course I am insane !!

Please write fiction in the proper forum! Sorry again...............