Okay, well I've given tassie the whole day to get back to me about the scores and she hasn't, so I'm just going to post the results myself. I know you guys are all waiting and I don't want to delay this any longer.
The 3rd Inter-House Challenge Results!!!
Gryffindor Prefect eezy:
Huffelpuff
Creativity/Originality-
Written as diary, this story is very creative and the action can be retraced due to exactness.
Even sensible dates, though imagined, are included. ---6 of 7---
Organization and Flow-
The story is organized and quite clear, the flow is acceptable. Slang has been avoided. ---3 of 4---
Preresiquites(ie submitting in time, using house founder as main character etc)-
Written from Helga Hufflepuffs point of view, earliest submission lets the story have ---3 of 3--- points here.
portraying of the characters-
The first passage contains most of the information that is known from Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw, Slytherin and Gryffindor.
Characters have been portrayed striking. ---3 of 3---
Grammar and writing style-
Grammar is well and considered, wording is acceptable, slang has - as aforesaid - been avoided. Length is quite good. ---2 of 3---.
6+3+3+3+2=17
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7+4+3+3+3=20
Total -> 17 points
Ravenclaw
Creativity/Originality-
Creative idea in writing an interview gives good preconditions.
It has been realized and the huge Text is throughout the challenge unique because of the idea. ---7 of 7---
Organization and Flow-
The story flows good when reading. But after reading through i noticed slang (which may be intention, but I am sure Rowena Ravenclaw hasn't talked much slang.). Actually, I also think Rowena in fact was an animagus. ---3 of 4---
Preresiquites(ie submitting in time, using house founder as main character etc)-
After all, the second submitter, and the longest text. Another, extern character has been put in creatively. ---3 of 3---
portraying of the characters-
The other founders have practically been left out, and Helga Hufflepuff doesnt only accept hard-workers.
Rowena Ravenclaw has been described well though, which makes it ---2.5 of 3---
Grammar and writing style-
Writing style was sort of too modern which doesn't really fit to the founders (IMO). The grammar is good, but slang has been used, which makes it ---2 of 3---.
7+3+3+2.5+2=17.5
of
7+4+3+3+3=20
Total ->17.5 points
Slytherin
Creativity/Originality-
Actually, this story is written like a book. This makes the idea not very creative. ---5 of 7---
Organization and Flow-
This story's flow was amazing. I like the buildup of the text. Dunno how to solidify that ---4 of 4---
Preresiquites(ie submitting in time, using house founder as main character etc)-
too bad, this text has been the last in submission and is very short. The point of view is an independent character, which makes it readable (sorta) ---2 of 3---
portraying of the characters-
The characters haven't really been portrayed, so I can hardly rate that... ---1 of 3---
Grammar and writing style-
Awesome! Great! The wording is the best in the whole challenge, unblemished grammar and perfect phrasings. ---4.5 of 3---
5+4+2+1+4.5=16.5
of
7+4+3+3+3=20
Total -> 16.5 points
Huffelpuff Prefect frodo_dude:
Slytherin
originality/creativity:5/7
i agree with eezy, plus it's not very original, it's pretty much what jk told us about slyth in the book
flow:: 4/4 is very good
preconditions:1/3
it was waaay short is suppose to be at least 4 paragraphs, plus they took very long to post it
portraying of characters:1/3
it's true what eezy said but, they named all the founders
grammar:!: 3/3 very very good
sooo:
5 + 4 + 1 + 1 + 3 = 14
Gryffindor’s
originality/creativity: 6/7
'cause it's also very much likely the <jk style>
flow: 3.5/4
Preresiquites(ie submitting in time, using house founder as main character etc)-> 3/3
Portraying of the characters-> 2.5/3
Grammar and Writing Style-> 2/3
Total -> 17 points
Rvenclaw's scores
Creativity/Originality- 7/7
Organization and Flow- 3/4
Preresiquites(ie submitting in time, using house founder as main character etc)- 3/3
Portraying of the characters- 2/3
Grammar and writing style- 2/3
Total -> 17 points
Ravenclaw Prefect Elondra:
Hufflepuff
Creativity/Originality-5
Organization and Flow- 3
preconditions-3
portraying of the characters-1
Grammar and writing style- 3
Total->>15
Gryffindor
Creativity/Originality-6
Organization and Flow- 4
preconditions-3
portraying of the characters-3
Grammar and writing style- 3
Total-19
Slytherin
Creativity/Originality-5
Organization and Flow- 3
preconditions-1
portraying of the characters-3
Grammar and writing style- 2
Total-14
Headboy Rogue, acting as Slytherin Prefect:
Gryffindor
Creativity/Originality-6.5
Organization and Flow- 3
preconditions-3
portraying of the characters-3
Grammar and writing style- 2
Total->>>17.5 points
I really liked the story. It started off with a bang and I liked the tension between Godric and Salzar, and I even liked how Rowwena and Helga were kind of “in between” those two. The ending was perfect!
Huffelpuff
Creativity/Originality-7
Organization and Flow- 3
preconditions-3
portraying of the characters-3
Grammar and writing style- 2
Total->>18 points
The journal entry idea was absolutely great!! And not to mention original! Who wrote for Huffelpuff?? Whoever did, did a great job!! I felt as if I were Helga watching all of these happening. You talked just like I would expect Helga too. Watch out JK!
Ravenclaw
Creativity/Originality-7
Organization and Flow- 2
preconditions-3
portraying of the characters-2
Grammar and writing style- 3
Total->>17
Wow. The radio thing was excellent. The interview with Rowena was interesting too. You wrapped the history into the interveiew and we learned more about Rowena. She would be a raven if she could be an animagus, no surprise there. Again, I really like the radio point of view. VERY good beginning with the Wireless Wizardling Network.
OVERALL SCORING FOR ALL:
Overall Ravenclaw: 51.5
Overall Gryffindor-53.5
Overall Huffelpuff-50+2(for being first) = 52
Overall Slytherin-44.5
Congrats to the Gryffindor's for being in first place!!!!! The scores were really close! Good job everyone!!! I loved reading the entry's.
1. Gryffindor
2. Ravenclaw
3. Huffelpuff
4.Slytherin
Originally posted by RoguePw25
Ravenclaw Prefect Elondra:
Hufflepuff
Creativity/Originality-5
Organization and Flow- 3
preconditions-3
portraying of the characters-1
Grammar and writing style- 3
Total->>15Gryffindor
Creativity/Originality-6
Organization and Flow- 4
preconditions-3
portraying of the characters-3
Grammar and writing style- 3
Total-19Slytherin
Creativity/Originality-5
Organization and Flow- 3
preconditions-1
portraying of the characters-3
Grammar and writing style- 2
Total-14Headboy Rogue, acting as Slytherin Prefect:
Gryffindor
Creativity/Originality-6.5
Organization and Flow- 3
preconditions-3
portraying of the characters-3
Grammar and writing style- 2
Total->>>17.5 points
I really liked the story. It started off with a bang and I liked the tension between Godric and Salzar, and I even liked how Rowwena and Helga were kind of “in between” those two. The ending was perfect!Huffelpuff
Creativity/Originality-7
Organization and Flow- 3
preconditions-3
portraying of the characters-3
Grammar and writing style- 2
Total->>18 points
The journal entry idea was absolutely great!! And not to mention original! Who wrote for Huffelpuff?? Whoever did, did a great job!! I felt as if I were Helga watching all of these happening. You talked just like I would expect Helga too. Watch out JK!Ravenclaw
Creativity/Originality-7
Organization and Flow- 2
preconditions-3
portraying of the characters-2
Grammar and writing style- 3
Total->>17Wow. The radio thing was excellent. The interview with Rowena was interesting too. You wrapped the history into the interveiew and we learned more about Rowena. She would be a raven if she could be an animagus, no surprise there. Again, I really like the radio point of view. VERY good beginning with the Wireless Wizardling Network.
OVERALL SCORING FOR ALL:
Overall Ravenclaw: 51.5
Overall Gryffindor-53.5
Overall Huffelpuff-50+2(for being first) = 52
Overall Slytherin-44.5Congrats to the Gryffindor's for being in first place!!!!! The scores were really close! Good job everyone!!! I loved reading the entry's.
1. Gryffindor
2. Ravenclaw
3. Huffelpuff
4.Slytherin
hey but isn't this way:
1. gryffindor
2. hufflepuff
3. revenclaw
4. slytherin
cause huffy got 52 points and revenclaw 51.5 right?