this is a poem my 12 year old daughter wrote to me.....its beautiful and i want to share it with the world.....
there's a very , very special place way up in gods big sky
where i went to get my wings and learn how to fly
i floated on a puffy cloud while watching over you
hearing everything you said and then i knew you needed me
you called and i was there ....
because im your gaurdian angel and i will always care .
and another....
now and always may your heart be light
may your memories be warm and your future be bright
may your hopes find fullfilment and your dreams come true
now and always dear mom may joy come to you
both by Amanda , my beautiful daughter
Originally posted by shellie
this is a poem my 12 year old daughter wrote to me.....its beautiful and i want to share it with the world.....there's a very , very special place way up in gods big sky
where i went to get my wings and learn how to fly
i floated on a puffy cloud while watching over you
hearing everything you said and then i knew you needed me
you called and i was there ....
because im your gaurdian angel and i will always care .and another....
now and always may your heart be light
may your memories be warm and your future be bright
may your hopes find fullfilment and your dreams come true
now and always dear mom may joy come to youboth by Amanda , my beautiful daughter
Wow! Those are amazing for ANYONE let alone a 12 year old 😱. You have a really bright kid there Shelly. 🙂
Originally posted by Kosta
A moment,
just a single moment,
thats all time needs to change.
That one little thing,
that chages all things,
that one little action,
just a tiny fraction,
of all that makes everything tick.
The seemingly little decision,
That impacts the world in a way,
enough to make the mountains sway.
good stuff, man..... 🙂
it sucks to be a monster. really sucks to live this way
not having someone close enough to be with day by day
you could be my friend, but that would be obsurd
one day when i lose myself you'd be the one i hurt
can i really keep on going, these words i often cry
or jump off of a building just to see if i can fly
if i fall will someone miss me? nah, i truly doubt it
i actually think im the only one who care anythin about it
did i crack you up a little are you feeling kinda sorry
this life will soon be over, so you really neednt worry
cause when you talked it made you seen a little bigger
now im sitting in my closet, about to pull the trigger.
this is not a story of sorrow, eventhough the sorrows great
we all should think real hard befor choosing such a fate
these feelings arent to linger, nor in our hearts abide
this isnt just a poem, its a note of suicide.
Here is my first poem I've posted at the forum:
(It's based on an LotR character...)
Kementári, Yavanna, The Giver of Fruits,
Clad in green, one of the Mighty Powers.
Alone she stands in a field so empty
Empty in spirit, empty in life.
The sight brings great sadness to her heart.
A garden, were light and warmth should have filled the air
And cheer and play of the little ones…the children of Eru.
But broken and hollow, the trees and flowers pay for their innocence.
Her eyes, gleaming siver, shine as bright as Elentári.
A tear swells up in her eye
Filled with the Power beyond the reach of the Quendi,
The single tear drops,
Hitting the soil quietly, absorbed willingly by the soil
Silver rain falls…
She turns, she leaves,
Knowing her seed has been planted.
And the strength of a vala so strong,
A single tear reshapes the land.
White dasies bloom, the wild flowers grow.
The willows sway gently in the wind,
And the green grass glimmers in the sun.
In a land of sad past memories,
New ones grow to replace those…
She sees this and more in her mind,
“May the grace of the Valar protect it,
With the blessing of Eru.”
😮
Originally posted by Telperaca
Here is my first poem I've posted at the forum:
(It's based on an LotR character...)[b]
Kementári, Yavanna, The Giver of Fruits,
Clad in green, one of the Mighty Powers.
Alone she stands in a field so empty
Empty in spirit, empty in life.
The sight brings great sadness to her heart.
A garden, were light and warmth should have filled the air
And cheer and play of the little ones…the children of Eru.
But broken and hollow, the trees and flowers pay for their innocence.Her eyes, gleaming siver, shine as bright as Elentári.
A tear swells up in her eye
Filled with the Power beyond the reach of the Quendi,
The single tear drops,
Hitting the soil quietly, absorbed willingly by the soil
Silver rain falls…She turns, she leaves,
Knowing her seed has been planted.
And the strength of a vala so strong,
A single tear reshapes the land.White dasies bloom, the wild flowers grow.
The willows sway gently in the wind,
And the green grass glimmers in the sun.
In a land of sad past memories,
New ones grow to replace those…She sees this and more in her mind,
“May the grace of the Valar protect it,
With the blessing of Eru.”😮 [/B]
Beautiful, Telpy.......Froto would be proud.... 😄
Seriously, very nice.......
Forgiving Heart!
Yesterday you opened my eyes,
you had me beleive that you were telling lies.
As my heart fell to the ground
and the tears begin to roll,
It made me feel like i was never whole.
This pain i feel i try very
hard to for get.
But yes i am scared of what will happen next.
I have forgiving you as my day has went on.
my heart it bleeds Im all alone.
The tears they rolled down my face,
and every little evil thought
they had to be erased.
I knew i wanted to forgive you and i did it so fast,
I wondered if our relationship will ever last.
But here....here is my heart
i will leave it with you,
If you feel you can not protect it
just tell me and please be true.
You held out your hand when i was fallen over the cliff,
You pulled me up and my mind left only to drift.
I had thoughts of what am i really doing here,
When will it be our time?
or is it even near?
I dont want to hold on to something that is not there,
And my heart has no more room to share.
If you ever have the thought that we have no future together.
then let my hand go, let me mend and make this better.Let me accept you as you are,
lets not make false dreams
that we both know are by far.
For the first time in a long time my heart has been torn.
and pain no more is what i have sworn.
Let us try and start a brand new day,
and please never again hurt my heart that way.