poetry by me

Nice, Casey! I love angst!

ty ying........

Originally posted by White Lady
its easy.............

heres goes right a cheesy poem as we speak................

I look at my screen and wonders if he feels the same way
wonders if he can hear my heart over his typing..
wonders if he runs his fingers along my screenname..
when we depart i wonder if he touches the screen to say goodbye
i wonders if a single falls everytime i say i love you......
I wonder if he sat here wondering
if i do any of this too..
mmmmm i wonder

y wonder when u know? ...

Thats a really good poem that is for making it up on the spot heres my try......

I look at the screen and can't think what to say
The sun is shining
It's a wonderful day
My cats are asleep
They had such a hard day
So thats my cheezy poem K?

Hello..........

😕

Originally posted by thorncrawler
Temet Nosre

A flower dies
Does any one cry
A raindrop falls
A wasted body, a wasted trip, a wasted cycle
Where does it lead, where does it begin?

Silence, what is louder?
Darkness, What is brighter?
A shadow, a nothing, moving across a wall
Inspires, captivates and confuses

A torch, a spotlight darkening what is dark enough
Mystifying what is already strange
An orb floating drifting swaying
I mean what else can it do stuck up there

this is very good ......... 💃 💃 💃

Here is my fav. for right now...
"Swing"
The back door swings.
There's an unmarked handprint. House
is still with questions. Haunted with the
dullness of unlived lifes. They just drift
away every decade.
Blood stains the wall.
Fingers crawl.
A broken leg and a fallen chair.
A person hugs the chair and strokes the hole.
Their eyes lost.
Their mind unread.
They seem dead, but they live. Their
legs stand them up. Dishes are smashed
and a table is rolled.
This person falls into a ball.
Knees meet the head and they sit and
they sit and they sit as the back door
never stops swinging.

Tell me what u think !!!

Ya it's good....but just calm down K?

lost..

i dont want to be alone..
im so cold...
i have this heart...y wont it beat?
im so scared to fall in love..
i never want to hurt anyone
i stay alone in the dark
sitting in the corner crying for no reason
when love finds me
what will i do?
i have never felt love... im so scared
the darkness surounds me..im fading slowly
if you dont find me soon...i will be lost forever
lost inside darkness...lost inside my fears to fall in love...
just...
lost...

why do i have to calm down....thats lame

thats one sad poem luke.but ithought love has found you

*cries* this poem is so sad. Why don't you write something happy? Actually don't. I like sad.

happy..........whats happy...........okay me write happy

heres happy:-
I'm as happy as ever,
I feel so alive
I can't think straight,
My heart's in overdrive

I'm tired of pretending,
That nothing's going on
I'll take a chance on you now,
Before you are gone

I'm happier that I've ever been,
There's nothing left for me to find
I think I know why I'm like this,
Because my heart controls my mind

I used to get my heart broken,
I used to hate all men
But now that I've found you,
I won't feel that way again

This is awesome. But I still like the sad ones the best; I don't really belive in happiness.

found at last

i never thought that i would see..
for so long i have seen nothing but darkness..
you...you showd me light....you showd me love...
you showd me how to care....you showd me how to dream..
i used to dream such nightmears..now i dream of you
did i ever tell u how much you mean to me?...did i ever say that i care?
now you know how i feel...this will never die...
my past no longer scares me...you chased my fears away..
i look back now and then....to remeber the good times...theres so few
my borther was a saint..now hes brought me to you
your the angel of my darkness...
no longer shall i suffer...all i know is how i feel...
this will be for ever after...
you gave me wings to fly away....but now i chose...for you.... i stay..
i am...found at last..

Cool; you 2 write great poems

awww lukey...........awww im gonna cry!!!!!!!! thats for me.........awww

Tears
if tears weren't clear
She'd have to wear a mask
Her face would be stained
The way they stain glass
She'd be dis-
Colored and Ugly
Then they can all see...
How sick and pathetic is she
Yet, she is really me