The Official Symbiote Thread

Started by fever red240 pages

Oh, lord, so much to respond to...
__Bad S, do you own that art? Wow. Be sure to re-post it after your boys find it and color it for you! 😄
__I'm convinced! I will go order Shiver and Twist!
__Warehouse roof scene? Why doesn't that ring a bell, Nemo? Oh, because I have such a weak memory. Remind me gently, please.
__Hey, Blaque Cell...Honey. (Hope Paola doesn't catch me calling you that, heh!)
__Dazzler, I look forward to the story.
__NV; I like what you've done with the revision. I know you know good writing, so I'm going to go check out that link now!

Symbiotica--it's clear that you've immersed yourself in the story--as I used to wax oh, so poetically, about this story when I was reading it too--and what a story it is, too.
It is a complicated premise--made more so by the amount of knowledge and research that went into it. But the most incredible thing is the amount of content and the depth of the story being crammed into to 18 issues.

I wouldn't worry that you didn't acknowledge or emphasize an adversarial relationship between Patricia and the symbiote. She's a strong woman--and I think that the post-event Patricia would be much more intent on processing her ordeal than resenting or exhibiting hostility to the symbiote. I just think that she would be smart enough to realize that the creature was only doing what was in it's nature--AND, of course, what it was programmed to do.

Also, it is splendid to hear that you include in your work some of the story's supa-sexiness, and the nearly palpable sexual aura of Brock and his interest in his counterpart(s). I think I might be particularly interested in reading what you do with all that...

more of Skottie Young's "easy on the eye" work...

Do you guys think I should add She-Venom (Naomi not Ann)
as a Justice Knight or not?
🙄
Does spider and alien powers count as superhero powers
or vigilante powers?
🙁
All these questions.....

It's your decision.I think spider powers are superhero and aliens as vigilantes

So far I have 13 heroes:
The Mew Mews
The Teen Titans
Kirby
Mondo and Rockna

And Cyborg's sonic cannon could hurt the symbiote.
Some enemies are fire monsters (FireLion, Flame Feeder,
Octacon and so on and on). 🤪 😑

Fever, I was referring to a scenario I posted over on the Hype regarding how I would fix what happend to Carnage in New Avengers: it ended with the symbiote reentering the atmosphere with Kasady's body still inside it, crashing through the roof of a warehouse unseen at night and what happens with the symbiote [and what's inside it] after that. I don't want to post the whole thing in public because I want to be the one to use it first; I probably shouldn't have posted it on the Hype to begin with. I'll have to mail it to you.

I am torn between that and using my prior OC Atropos. As you know Atropos is an ex-medical worker and I am mulling over having her use that knowledge to infiltrate Ravencroft [for a reason I'm not posting in public, as above] and while she's on her way out she decides to destroy the bank of microwave equipment holding Kasady in his cell, letting him out too. A dangerous proposition...

That one would allow me to totally ignore Bendisverse, too. Decisions!

I'm showing Brock in a pretty sympathetic light right now; when I write Carnage he's going to be a real SOB. But still... uh, hot... because he is that if nothing else, hot. I'm a little worried as to if I can write him sarcastic enough. You do such a great job of that; I don't know if I can do it that well.

Originally posted by badsymbiote Also, it is splendid to hear that you include in your work some of the story's supa-sexiness, and the nearly palpable sexual aura of Brock and his interest in his counterpart(s). I think I might be particularly interested in reading what you do with all that...

Oh, I'm aaaaallllll about palpable sexual auras, baby. I see a guy with a 48" long tongue and my imagination just runs rampant! 😮 I do try to keep it elegant and classy though. Not TOO gratuitous. Fever's seen some of my stuff, she knows how I can be. 😈

CHAPTER ONE

Carnage sat there tapping his clawed finger against the steel floor of his cell thinking , and for once it wasn’t about how to eviscerate a certain wall crawler

“So many super teams” he muttered his claw making a clack sound each time the point hit steel

(this takes place after carnages little bout with the avengers and I say he still alive dammnit !)

“Ha I know I’ll create my own super team with only symbiotes, wonderful symbiotes” carnage cackled with glee when his apparent dreams of grandeur were shattered by his ‘dad’ .

“Keep it down in their some of us are trying to think of ways to rip a spiders arms and legs off and still keep it alive” roared venom who wished he could beat his offspring to silence but couldn’t thanks to the microwave force fields .

“Keep it down both of you” the guard said his hand going for the truncheon in it’s holster .

“oh and what are you gonna do" said carnage smirking he loved to rattle the guards .

"I’ll whomp both your asses" growled the guard .

"We eat people like you for breakfast" said venom his sharp teeth glinting slightly in the light .

The guard made a noise that sounded like a mouse being trodden on and left the room the automated camera’s keeping watch of the symbiotes .

"Hey dad" carnage asked in that tone most kids use when they want their parents to buy them a toy .

"What" venom replied gruffly knowing that things were going to be bad .

"Can you get the big brain guy you know the mutie" .

"If you’re referring to Charles Xavier then no" said venom as he lounged in his cell he paused for a second "although I could get him if I asked for some therapy , but they are a little wary after you drilled that last guys brain" .

"Hey he was asking for it" replied kassidy a smile on his symbiotic face .

"Why do you want old baldie stiff legs anyway" asked venom the lethal protectors natural sense of curiosity getting to him .

"Oh you’ll see venom you’ll see" carnage whispered softly another insane grin on his face .

So far so good Fox

Originally posted by Dazzler619
So far so good Fox

Not really... 😘

Um who is this Nathan guy in your sig? To stay on topic, symbiotes are cool. Yeah Toxin.

FOX- NO FAN FICTION IS TO BE POSTED HERE. I'm not shouting- just want to be sure you notice this. It's Paola's decision, and I support it. Discussion of fic is still go. Fan fic can be posted elsewhere, and a link provided. As for discussion- I like it; interesting idea having the two of them imprisoned again in close proximity. However, if this is after Avengers, then you're ignoring both Kasady's li'l accident and Eddie Brock's li'l accident. Why not set this at an earlier time, then?

__FREEZEDOOM- It is widely considered beneath contempt to use another ficcer's OC (original charactor) without permission. I'm p!ssed off by it, myself. If you post the story, that is. If it's your own play-thing, no harm, no foul. But be VERY sure you think ahead before deciding to include Koto's OC- you have NO excuse for deciding, later, that you "have" to post it.
__In the past, your treatment of Koto has been disrespectful. It was so continually rude, I believe it was a big part of his decision to leave- and Koto is/was well-liked and respected here. In short, you've harmed this community with past behavior that was NOT well-thought-out. I urge you to use more discretion in the future, and be more considerate of other board members.

__ 😱 NEMO! Ohhhh, yeh! I remember! D@mn, I'm torn, too. I love Atropos- and the last I saw of her, she had been VERY naughty, hadn't she? Disregarding explicit and WRITTEN directions, oh, tsk... However, I love this alien resurrection plot...

Originally posted by fever red
FOX- NO FAN FICTION IS TO BE POSTED HERE. I'm not shouting- just want to be sure you notice this. It's Paola's decision, and I support it. Discussion of fic is still go. Fan fic can be posted elsewhere, and a link provided. As for discussion- I like it; interesting idea having the two of them imprisoned again in close proximity. However, if this is after Avengers, then you're ignoring both Kasady's li'l accident and Eddie Brock's li'l accident. Why not set this at an earlier time, then?

__FREEZEDOOM- It is widely considered beneath contempt to use another ficcer's OC (original charactor) without permission. I'm p!ssed off by it, myself. If you post the story, that is. If it's your own play-thing, no harm, no foul. But be VERY sure you think ahead before deciding to include Koto's OC- you have NO excuse for deciding, later, that you "have" to post it.
__In the past, your treatment of Koto has been disrespectful. It was so continually rude, I believe it was a big part of his decision to leave- and Koto is/was well-liked and respected here. In short, you've harmed this community with past behavior that was NOT well-thought-out. I urge you to use more discretion in the future, and be more considerate of other board members.

__ 😱 NEMO! Ohhhh, yeh! I remember! D@mn, I'm torn, too. I love Atropos- and the last I saw of her, she had been VERY naughty, hadn't she? Disregarding explicit and WRITTEN directions, oh, tsk... However, I love this alien resurrection plot...

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!! ❌

He FINALLY wrote another entry.
http://www.livejournal.com/userinfo.bml?user=cletus_kasady

Add Texan accent:

Well, kiddies, ya'll are a bunch of livering babies
like I never seen 'fore.

So, as for ya Fever Red: that all is nothing
but filthy like phrases that are comin' from
ya'll mouth 'bout yours truly. 😖hifty: 😇

Guys I just need 1 more opinion.I made my symbiote host hispanic instead of white.Is that ok?

Don't see why not.

fever- i did it so kassidy keeps the inital fact that he got his ass handed to him by a super team so he gets a super team idea.

Dazzler: Use it in the story! My advice on ethnicity is not to give characters any unless it works into the story (my experience is that people normally just assume characters are of their own race unless otherwise stated).

Grey Fox: Compile the whole story and post it somewhere. I really like the idea of Carnage wanting his own 'super-team'.

[email protected]

Mmmnadafaru.

Nanananalolode.

GREY FOX, PLEASE LISTEN TO FEVER RED'S WORDS, AS THEY ARE FULL OF WISDOM.

FEVER RED, PLEASE CHANGE YOUR SIGNATURE/AVATAR BACK TO ITS ORIGINAL; IT WAS VERY COOL.

GREY FOX, IF YOU WANT TO POST FAN FICTION, PLEASE DO SOMETHING WITH YOUR GRAMMAR THAT DOESN'T MAKE ME WANT TO BEAT MY HEAD AGAINST A WALL.