The Official Symbiote Thread

That is indeed mine, and yes, iambic pentameter has alternating syllables, five stressed and five unstressed per line. Now, in what order are they? No idea. I'm not a professional poet, but there's a couple things I HATE in poetry:

1. Uneven syllabic distribution. You know, you've got one really long line and another really short one. Argh.

2. Imperfect rhyme. There is NOTHING more annoying to me than hearing someone rhyme something like "joust" and "blouse." I immediately pick up on the discrepancy and...well, ROAR!

3. Made up words. I hate Dr. Seuss's writing because of this. He can write about the Whimsical Wally-Pa-Dees and Gibber-Magoos all day, but I would rather stick my foot in a blender than resort to such feeble tactics to force a rhyme.

4. Pure rhyme used in conjunction with eye rhyme. Use one or the other. It's great that you know enough about poetry to use eye rhyme, but it absolutely destroys the rhythm when you try to mix the two.

5. Mixing free verse poetry with pure rhyme. Has the same effects as the above.

Oh, and the rhyme of which I speak is all end rhyme, none of this middle-of-the-verse rhyme.

😎 I have poetry in my blood. Check this out:
Burning buldings and a dark soul
evil villains start to rise
Only one thing is their demise:
Justice Knights, let's go!!!

Originally posted by FeceMan
That is indeed mine, and yes, iambic pentameter has alternating syllables, five stressed and five unstressed per line. Now, in what order are they? No idea. I'm not a professional poet, but there's a couple things I [b]HATE in poetry:

1. Uneven syllabic distribution. You know, you've got one really long line and another really short one. Argh.

2. Imperfect rhyme. There is NOTHING more annoying to me than hearing someone rhyme something like "joust" and "blouse." I immediately pick up on the discrepancy and...well, ROAR!

3. Made up words. I hate Dr. Seuss's writing because of this. He can write about the Whimsical Wally-Pa-Dees and Gibber-Magoos all day, but I would rather stick my foot in a blender than resort to such feeble tactics to force a rhyme.

4. Pure rhyme used in conjunction with eye rhyme. Use one or the other. It's great that you know enough about poetry to use eye rhyme, but it absolutely destroys the rhythm when you try to mix the two.

5. Mixing free verse poetry with pure rhyme. Has the same effects as the above.

Oh, and the rhyme of which I speak is all end rhyme, none of this middle-of-the-verse rhyme. [/B]

so we do learn stuff in Skool*.

*XD

I wush homskewld

im homeschooled. 😐

ok fever so you caught me outMAJORLY IMPORTANT NOW I am writing a fan fiction in the fanfic there shll be many fights one of them includes FREDDY VERSUS CARNAGE i need your honest opinions on who will win then i will write it in the fan fic but it may take a while because i need to research freddys fightitng style (only ten votes are allowed so i would hurry if i was you )

Freddy vs Carnage? awful idea, man...

It doesn't appeal to me, but I'll put in 2 cents: Freddy wins. He'd roast Carnage in some nightmare version of Ravencroft- whoa- now there's a concept- Ravencroft as the setting, all warped and its inherent brutality on steroids... Yes, Clete goes down hard, and nasty, probably his mommy shows up for part of it...

Feceman, thanks for the info/response to my ugly child. I had no idea how to shape or nurture it, and still don't, actually! But at least I didn't wing it with a flesh-and-blood baby, as many do.
I'm sure I've read a lot of poems with uneven syllabic distribution, so SOME people must know how to do it so it adds rather than detracts...
What poetry have you read that has informed your tastes?

hm freddy vs carnage? I bet it would be like some crazy nightmare of ravencroft, but the symbiote would give just as big a nightmare to freddy.

No one liked meh poem :: Cries and eats fetuses :: >.> <.<

Informed my tastes?

Errr...

Dr. Seuss, Where the Sidewalk Ends, stuff like that LOL.

Actually, we have read quite a few poems in school and analyzed them and crap, and I've found that many of the famous poets use free-verse. For the rest of it, that's just personal opinion and random facts--I'm kind of like a sponge when it comes to worthless knowledge 🙂.

The iamb is one(1) short syllable followed by one(1) long syllable, or one(1) unstressed syllable followed by one(1) stressed syllable, as in the word above. This is an example of a short four(4) line rhythm:
Me and Superman got in a fight,
hit him in the head with Kryptonite.
Hit him so hard I busted* his brain,
now I'm datin' Lois Lane.
*= Meant to be this word, I don't know why, ask the Military.
If you are going to write something with more than two(2) lines, make sure that there are an even number of lines, not odd like 3, 5, ect...

Originally posted by FeceMan
Informed my tastes?

Errr...

Dr. Seuss, Where the Sidewalk Ends, stuff like that LOL.

Actually, we have read quite a few poems in school and analyzed them and crap, and I've found that many of the famous poets use free-verse. For the rest of it, that's just personal opinion and random facts--I'm kind of like a sponge when it comes to worthless knowledge 🙂.

:cry:

wow just like me...sniff...I can answer almost any video game question..period....so useless...like toxin...

(ok here is a little taster of what is too come)

the whole background shimmered before the four men appeared in a boiler room ahh there's no place like home said Freddy with a cackle

carnage remained silent but glared at Krueger

darthajg clicked his fingers as a microphone appeared in his hand in the red corner weighing in at 150 pounds the spring wood slasher Freddy Krueger

sidderz snatched the microphone out of darthjags hands and then said and in the blue corner weighing in at 190 pounds the crazed symbiote killer carnage

now lets have a clean fight said darthjag winking to both opponents before in a puff of smoke both authors disappeared

carnage wasted no time as his arm shifted not a blade and shot down onto Freddy's arm severing it

not my arm he screamed his gloved hand still connected to the severed arm

carnage did the same with Freddy's other arm causing blood to spray everywhere Freddy didn't seem fazed this time as with a sudden pop he grew two new arms

carnage let ff a growl as he rammed into Freddy knocking him into a pipe

son of a... muttered Freddy before being picked up and thrown around the room he suddenly stopped in mid air he gave off an eerie smile before tapping his finger blades on his other arm in boredom

carnage shot out a bladed tendril Freddy simply sidestepped it your slow said Freddy pointing a finger blade at carnage your stupid he continued and ya got no style

at that comment carnage gave off a feral shriek and dove at Freddy he grabbed Freddy as a bladed tendril ended inches away from his throat

ohh scary said Freddy mockingly as he suddenly vanished

the whole room suddenly blended and changed

what the hell said carnage in awe as the boiler room suddenly changed into a place he would never forget ....raven croft (if you want too read the rest look on fanfiction net a in a few weeks and it should be up

Carnage rambles a lot. Need rambling.

what would you clasifly as rambling

He thinks of himself as quite the witty conversationalist and likes to make a running commentary on things- however- I do think he might drop that in favor of a swift attack, or minimize it, if he knew Freddy by reputation... but he'd get off some kind of one-liner in response to Freddy saying he has no style...
I actually love this scene- it's quite funny, to see Carnage so out-classed.
I've done a bit more thinking. Carnage could survive Freddy, if you look at the canon in Nightmare 4. Freddy's vulnerable to those who have the will-power to own their dreams... Clete Kasady definitely owns his dreams. I still foresee him taking quite the beating before he figures this out, however. Clete is adaptive and inventive, but he's not very metaphysical. He'd cling to a physical strategy far too long.
I LOVE this start. You suckered me in, Fox.

Not bad, Fox. you've got my attention.

grey fox, please.

I am NOT reading anything like that until the grammar is close to proper. Feel free to rewrite it to get my serious and constructive criticism. Otherwise, it just sucks.

😆 😂