Originally posted by fever red
You're crazier than Kasady eating Froot Loops- you KNOW that story does not suck. Man, I love that story. The dialogue is perfect, charactorization is d@mn good, and the descriptive passages are a tense, hard style that is reminiscent of true crime or detective genres. Really appropriate, very masculine writing style that I enjoy. Also, it had Cletus Kasady in it. And, oh, man, the rape scene dialogue- I know it was villainous, but it was also kind of...funny. One of the things about Kasady that I enjoy (as a fictional charactor) is that he's full of sh!t. I just love a charactor that can be so banally evil- he's outright majectically diabolical one moment, then he's clumsily, foolishly, humanly, stupidly evil the next. Not everybody can get both aspects of Kasady up and running.
__Now stop your nonsense, or I'll write you into my fan-fic...
I really don't deserve the kind words, but I appreciate them all the same. 🙂
Truthfully, I think everything I've ever written sucks in retrospect. I've been trying to learn some writing techniques and teach myself to be a better storyteller so I can hopefully get a job. Also, in retrospect, I can see that I didn't give enough focus to the fight scenes in my story. A battle between Spidey and Carnage should be epic, so I gotta work on that.
People in your fan fics tend to die. Whatever you do, please don't make me Carnage's newest victim in one of your stories. 😉