Harry Potter and the Green Flame Torch

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"Hang on," Harry called. "I'm coming down."
And he jumped, praying that the armour would brace his fall enough to save him from a broken kneecap or two. It would not look good for the new hope of the generation to be limping along.

But the armour did not merely brace his fall, it made Harry actually slow down as he touched the ground.

What else can this thing do? Harry vaguely wondered. First and foremost, it was time to leave before any of Voldemort's traps got them. "We'd better go. Where's the way out?"
"We thought you knew." Ron said pointedly.
"Oh, right."
And Harry forced his mind to calm down, to find the way out.
Nothing happened, no matter how hard Harry concentrated.

Becoming increasingly frustrated, Harry opened his eyes to tell them that he couldn't remember, but was amazed as a little glow on his helmet visor indicated the next step.
"Incredible." he muttered.
"Wha' is?" Hagrid said.
Harry snapped back to reality. "Tell you later. This way."

Sure enough, as soon as they reached the blinking spot, another showed up. Without knowing how he knew, Harry understood that the strange arcane map imprint would lead them out entirely.

A spell glanced off his armour, Harry barely feeling a small scuffle. Death Eaters were in an upper passageway raining spells down.
"Selphius!" Harry roared, pointing his wand.

Normally, a standard silver arrow spell would go off with a bang; Harry's thundered like a cannon and a stunningly large arrow more like a ballista bolt struck the very tier where the Death Eaters were. The stone was enchanted and did not even leave a scratch. Nonetheless, the tier shook dangerously and everyone there was either knocked unconscious or off their feet, momentarily stunned.

"Let's go! That way!" Harry said, suprising himself by how authorative he sounded. He didn't want to take any chances; no one else had the advantage he had, so he adamantly refused to go first, lest the Death Eaters recover quickly.

They managed to reach the Hallway of Darkness which Harry navigated once more, and out through the Entrance Chamber.
We're almost home free, Harry thought, his heart leaping. But it immediately sank as an ominous shadow loomed before them.

It was as tall as a giraffe, the width of two automobiles, and had the musculature of a rhinoceros.
A feline cat snarled at them, yellowed fangs dripping saliva which radiated steam when they connected with the ground. Its skin was a deathly, chitinous black. The legs were scaled more and seemed replilian more than mammal-like; the tail was incredibly large and smooth; it seemed more like the tail of an extinct dinosaur.

A Nundu.

Everyone stopped dead in their tracks, fearing to run. However, the monstrosity needed no time, it took a deep breath.
"No!" Harry cried. Expecting something awful, he utilized raw will and threw up a Shield Charm as powerful as any he had ever created.
A huge wave hit them, and the edges of the shiled shimmered brilliantly. It was holding. If Harry had not reacted, the acidic breath would have probably dissolved everyone except for him.

The thing snarled again, no doubt preparing for another attack...

...and growled in outrage as something huge, elegant, and green hit it. Huge glowing golden eyes fixed upon Harry, and he knew that they were to run from the battle.

It was a dragon, but unlike any that Harry ever seen. It far outshone the rest of its species in terms of beauty and sleekness, and he knew instinctively that it must be enchanted as well, and that this was a female. Her name was Nrsera.

And Harry knew that it - she - was bound to him. It would serve him until one of them lef this world forever.

She roared and the nundu responded in kind. Too close to use acid breath or dragonfire, both beastly combatants were reduced to claws, teeth, and wrestling.
"Run!" Harry said. He ran smack-on into a broad figure, and swore. "Hagrid, let's move! You'll see her when this is over! I promise!"

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surprise 👆 Great post. Don't know how you do it.
But keep it going. Don't leave us hanging on the edge
This is torcher. notworthy

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holly freaking crap!!!! i think i'm gonna cry, i've been soooooooooo freakin busy, it's insane!!! i have swimming and so i don't get home till 8 every night, and i got loads of homework, it sucks!!!!! i'm sorry D i don''t even have time to read up on the story, but i'll try to get on this weekend. gosh i miss you guys!!

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The tore through the courtyard, no longer lush but somehow seemed forbidding. No one lagged, with Lupin all but dragging a cursing Moody and his clattering leg. Professor McGonagall was white in the face, and there was a sense of an aura of urgency about Dumbledore; Harry had a very bad feeling, but the way was still clear so far.

However, as soon as they crossed the threshold to the final portal leading back to the transportation current, they encountered the biggest obstacle of all.

"You." Harry said, more exasperated than nervous.
"Me." Lord Voldemort said quietly. "Who wants to die first?"
"None of us will die today." Harry said, jerking his head at his companions.
"Oh, are you so sure?" What served Voldemort for a mouth sneered ever so slightly.

He raised his wand, but not at the group. Voldemort pointed his wand at the entrance behind him, and a shimmering shield sprang into place.
"No one leaves before I do."

Harry gritted his teeth. Voldemort continued, pacing about the group as if not a care in the world.
"So, who shall face me first?"

Dumbledore stepped forward, wand aloft.
"Ah, old Dumbledore. Fancy taking another duel now, are we?"
"Yes, Tom." Dumbledore said. "And by now you should know me well enough to.understand that I will stop at nothing to ensure your downfall. Not even death."
"Oh, we shall see." Voldemort said.

"No."
The word came not from Dumbledore, but from Harry. "You'll face me."
"Ah....finally, a one on one chance with Potter." Voldemort sneered.

Behind his visor, Harry smiled grimly. "You couldn't kill me one on one, without the advantage I have and surrounded by your filthy Death Eaters too. What makes you think you can win with my friends behind me and the Armor to serve me?"
He could see that the comment stung, Voldemort snarled. "Oh, I see. You're trying to protect your 'friends'. But make no mistake....they too will die, after I destroy you."

"Leave us." Harry told the others, who was very reluctant to leave him alone with the greatest foe of them all. They backed off, and Harry turned to his foe, a deadly chill in his voice. To the rest, he seemed taller, older, a hundred times more mature and experienced. "Remember how people used to say that you were afraid of Dumbledore?"
"I fear no one." Voldemort said.
"Yeah, just keep telling yourself that." Harry mocked. "But you'll learn to fear someone else. ME!"

He yelled the last word; everyone was startled, even Voldemort.

Harry continued. "You've killed my parents personally. And your followers have murdered so many innocents and one of them like a replacement father to me. They say that a tyrant creates their own worst enemy, their own nemesis. I am going to make you learn to fear me!"
He thumped his chestplate just for good measure.
"Believe me, in the end it's either you or me walking out from a duel. There's your prophecy for you. That's all it was. One of us will kill the other."

Voldemort curled his lip. "That's the lost prophecy, was it?"
Harry laughed, suprisingly. "That's all it was. Come as a big suprise to you?"
"No, not really."

He raised his wand. "What say we curb this useless banter and get it on with?"

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Couldn't read all of it but loved the parts that I did read! 🙂

But uh...didn't Dumbledore die? 😬

Good post DarkC
Keep it going.
Thanks

Originally posted by BlackC@t
But uh...didn't Dumbledore die? 😬

Yeah I know....I couldn't bring myself to kill the good ol' guy, I'm such a softie.

Are you all shure Dumbledore is dead. think about it.
The spell the snape hit him with. Kills instantly but dose not make
anyone fly up like Dumbledore did. and Dumbledore told drakeo
they could hid him where no one could find him if he switched sides.
rember there is a postion that makes you look as if you where dead
[Draft of death] and did hagred carry Dumbledores body to the lake
or just a empty box. Is Dumbledore in hidding or dead. think about it

And I think harry will go back to school. maybe not for longe.
But I think he will he has unfinnish things to do there first.

omg that was waaay good. and hagrid didnt carry the coffin to the lake, he carried Dumbledore's body. plus, it makes more sense that dumbledore died b/c he was standing in the way of Harry facing Dumbledore but now Harry's going to become a man, so Dumbledore can't shield him and protect him anymore and the only way that was going to happen was if Dumbledore died b/c he was so attached to Harry. and i think dumbledore knew that... 😄 think about that...

and the potion is the Draught of the Living Death.