USH'S STAR WARS GAME- Character Creation Mark II. Interested players please come!

Started by Captain REX29 pages

That too, but Galder hasn't experienced that yet. 😄

Never mind the artificial arm, huh? 😛

It's better than my original arm. It's got a knife, a secret compartment, and a gun! 😛

Still counts as having been maimed 😛

Maimed implies that I didn't recover... 😗

Not according to dictionary.com 😛

maim
tr.v. maimed, maim·ing, maims

1. To disable or disfigure, usually by depriving of the use of a limb or other part of the body.
2. To make imperfect or defective; impair.

Therefore, I am right. Hah!!

...is it possible for us to NOT hijack and totally drag threads off topic? 😂 😮

Now you talkin' about vocabulary. Are You guys messed up or somethin'?

No, no it's not, Lana.

And no, we're not messed up. Why would you think that? 🤨

Hey Ush,

Is my build for my character alright?

Looks mostly fine, but you broke the pilot limit (your final skill total is 15)

1. Light Side or Dark Side? Light Side

2. Name (harder than you might think) Kiu Dun of Coruscant

PHYSICAL
Strength 6+1=7
Agility 6
Dexterity 6+2=8
Speed 7

MENTAL
Charisma 5+2=7
Intelligence 5+1=6
Willpower 7
Perception 5+3=8

FORCE 12
Force Attack: 12
Force Defence: 13

Add three points amongst physical stats; add six points amongst mental stats.

All Attributes have a maximum of 8

SKILLS

Lightsabre= 14
Combat +4 (Max 13)
Pilot +3+2(Max 13)=5
Guns +3 (Max 13)
Jedi Lore +3+1=4
Fix-it +4
Intrusion +0
Languages +4
Intimidation +1
Sabotage +0
Savoir-Faire +5
Medicine +2+2=4
Observation +2

You may add six points amongst these skills.

Merits: 4
Ally
Ties

Blade Tricks: 6
Carnival of Carnage level 2
Strike to Subdue
One With the Blade
Bodyguard level 2

Pilot/Gun Tricks: 4 split how you like between the two
Dogfighter level 2
Gunslinger level 2

Combat Tricks: 3

Disarm
Surprise attack
Hold
Force Training: (25)
Stage One: Choose one of Traditional, Rebellious, Adept or Physical

Physical

Stage Two: Choose 10 powers of your choice

Lift
Bash
Combat Push
Grip
Sipdestep
Defensive Leap
Cleave
Scan
Empathy
Leadership

All Renegades get -2 on all reaction rolls from Jedi Knights

Is my pimp complete now?

Fixed Pilot issues.

You might want to explain your Merits. For example, who is your non-Force-using Ally? And who are your Ties to?

I was going ot do that in my bio. Nut oh well. Here it is:

I have ties in the Senate and the Senatorial Guard.

My companion is Jace Onderon, who wanted to become a Jedi, but was not force sensitive. So I took him in as my apprentice and showed him the way of non lightsabre melee weapons.

I'm going to change my ties to knowing Republic Commandos.

So your Ally is a melee guy with swords and spears and stuff...

Eh...if you mean the Republic Commandos from the game, they don't exist yet. Ties in the Senate would be more useful to a Jedi, perhaps.

FINAL DRAFT

1. Light Side or Dark Side? Light Side

2. Name (harder than you might think) Kiu Dun of Coruscant

PHYSICAL
Strength 6+1=7
Agility 6
Dexterity 6+2=8
Speed 7

MENTAL
Charisma 5+2=7
Intelligence 5+1=6
Willpower 7
Perception 5+3=8

FORCE 12
Force Attack: 12
Force Defence: 13

Add three points amongst physical stats; add six points amongst mental stats.

All Attributes have a maximum of 8

SKILLS

Lightsabre= 14
Combat +4 (Max 13)
Pilot +3+2(Max 13)=5
Guns +3 (Max 13)
Jedi Lore +3+1=4
Fix-it +4
Intrusion +0
Languages +4
Intimidation +1
Sabotage +0
Savoir-Faire +5
Medicine +2+2=4
Observation +2

You may add six points amongst these skills.

Merits: 4
Ally= My companion is Jace Onderon, who wanted to become a Jedi, but was not force sensitive. So I took him in as my apprentice and showed him the way of non lightsabre melee weapons and blasters.
Ties=I have ties in the Senate and the Senatorial Guard.

Blade Tricks: 6
Carnival of Carnage level 2
Strike to Subdue
One With the Blade
Bodyguard level 2

Pilot/Gun Tricks: 4 split how you like between the two
Dogfighter level 2
Gunslinger level 2

Combat Tricks: 3

Disarm
Surprise attack
Hold
Force Training: (25)
Stage One: Choose one of Traditional, Rebellious, Adept or Physical

Physical

Stage Two: Choose 10 powers of your choice

Lift
Bash
Combat Push
Grip
Sipdestep
Defensive Leap
Cleave
Scan
Empathy
Leadership

All Renegades get -2 on all reaction rolls from Jedi Knights

Is my pimp complete now?

Fixed Pilot issues.

Doubly so as a Renegade, I would be interested to know what your Ties to the Senate can be.

Biography

Lance was born to the sister of powerful Jedi Master Mace Windu. His father was of noble descent on the planet Dantooine. Lance was born on Coruscant like most of his family. At the ripe young age of 2 he was chosen by his uncle to join the Jedi Order. He studied under Master Jeqaur Rar, a Twi'lek male.

Halfway through his training he got word that his father was murdered. Lance then left the Jedi Order to extract revenge on his father's death, but he was tracked down a few months later by his master. He was told that revenge and anger would eventually lead to the Dark Side. He was told many stories of fallen and dark Jedi. He didn't want to become one of them. He started back on track to the light and re-joined the order of the knights.

When he finally stoped growing he stood a tall 1.9 meters tall. He has fairly dark skin with large brown eyes that cut straight through you. His dark hair is cut short so as to not get in the way when training with weapons.

He was a youthful energetic young man who always did what he was told. He then began training with a lightsabre. He showed exceptinal skill with weilding his weapon. Like his famous uncle he became a swordsman. He would train nearly night and day in between lesson's from his master.

His 'sabre is a light blue. The hilt of it is made from a light weight material. He even marked his name into it so whenever he had to strike someone down they would know the name of the man that had to defend and honor himself. He wouldn't kill unless he had to, which wasn't many times.

At the age of 22 he and his master were sent on a mission to Hoth. During their time there his master was encountered by a Dark Jedi. The duel between the two of them lasted for about an hour, but in the end Master Jequar lost. Lance then retreated back to the Jedi Temple and told the story to the council. They assigned him to become a Jedi Knight, saying he had passed his trials, since he was nearly done with his training anways.

After becoming a Jedi Knight, Lance spent many days in the Jedi Archives, learning as much about known Dark Jedi as he could. On one of these days he came across a short biography about a Dark Jedi by the name of Galder, Gald to his "friends". He happened to be the same Dark Jedi that killed Master Jequar Rar. Lance swore to uphold his master's name and encounter Galder again.

He got his chance not long after. Lance was sent on a mission with a group of Jedi. There were Renegades, Padawans, Knight's, and a couple of Masters. During this mission Lance Windu encountered Galder again, the two fought profusely. Starting a sort of rival between them. Galder with his cunning evaded Lance time and again. They have yet to duel again.

In the years that have passed since we've last seen Lance, he has been going on small missions to Republic worlds, being the peacekeeper he was meant to be. These involved border disputes, small rivalries between races, a couple between entire worlds. Nothing too exciting. He has been looking forward to one day picking up the trail to Galder. Not for revenge, no, for the sport. He knows a trained fighter when he sees one. He wants to test himself against evil, against everything that he believes is wrong.

This is where we find him today, awaiting a true mission that will put him to a much better use as a fighter.

And here are his stats...

Lance Windu, played by LanceWindu

Swordsman (Type C)

PHYSICAL
Strength 6+2=8
Agility 6
Dexterity 6+1=7
Speed 8

MENTAL
Charisma 5+2=7
Intelligence 5+1=6
Willpower 7
Perception 5+2=7

FORCE 10
Force Attack: 12
Force Defense: 12

SKILLS
Lightsaber= 14
Combat= 14
Guns +3= 10
Jedi Lore +3= 9
Leadership +3= 10
Languages +0
Observation +2= 9
Fix-it +0
Intrusion +0

MERITS
1 Merit to Famous Master (Jequar Rar, Twi’lek Jedi Master)
1 Merit to Ally (R4-K8, droid)
1 Merit to Starship (the Freelancer)

FORCE POWERS (22)
REBELLIOUS
THE KINETIC TREE
Push/Pull
Lift
Bash
Combat Push
THE AGILITY TREE
Jump
Master Jump
Flying Charge
Dodge
Fall
THE MARTIAL TREE
Draw
Blur
Blow
Sword Whirl
Twirl
Cleave
Spin
Defend
Reflection
THE COSMIC FORCE TREE
Intuition
Dreams
THE LIVING FORCE TREE
Sense
Scan

BLADE TRICKS (9)
Carnival of Carnage Level 4
Strike to Subdue Level 3
One With the Blade Level 1

COMBAT TRICKS (6)
Channel
Surprise Attack
Hold
Disarm
Parry
Coupe de Grace

XP
4 XP to new Skill at +1(Guns)
4 XP to increased Skill (Guns)
5 XP to increased Skill (Guns)
2 XP unused

BUYBACK

I'll start some of my bio:

I am Kiu Dun of Coruscant. My family immigrated here after living on Dantooine for 20 years. My father came to Dantooine from Naboo and my mother came from Onderon. My great Grandfather had been the bodyguard of the Senators from Onderon, and from that point on, my family has been bodyguards for the Senators.

I started training to become a Jedi when I was 4. My family celebrated, for I was the only the second one from our line to become a Jedi.(I was named after him. He served during the Jedi Civil War and was killed) Many were reluctant to take me as their apprentice, but one did. Her name was Master Renna Jace, who was also born on Coruscant. My master taught me of the Jedi for years. But then a very unfortunate thing happened.

My Master fell to the Dark Side after her family was murdered by a prominent smuggler organisation. I followed my master when she went to kill them. She quickly dispatched the guards and attacked the leader. Renna was filled with hatred and used the force to torture him. I saved the man by knocking my master unconscious and subduing him. After I had talked to the masters at the Jedi Temple, I walked back to find my master. But alas, she had gotten way.

When I came back to Coruscant, I went to visit my sister. I opened the door and there was Renna, my former madter, with a blaster pointed aty my sister's head. Before I was able to do anything else, she shot my sister." You will feel the suffering I did, my padawan. Now, let your hatred fill you." I jumped at her with my lightsabre drawn, but she pushed me back wiht her Force Push. Master Renna walked out of my sister's apartment and to this day I hunt her for on that day, she made a powerful enemy.

After the incident with my master, the council decided that I was ready for idivindua duties, and gave me the rank of a Jedi Knight. My first mission was to escort a Senatr along with his bodyguard to his home planet. I went to the Senator's room and found out it was my brother who was protecting this specific senator.

I'll finish later