USH'S STAR WARS GAME- Character Creation Mark II. Interested players please come!

Try keeping it simplistic. You can describe that there was a horrible incident in your life, but no need to go fully into it. ✅

Lance looks good.

And... that doesn't look like a Renegade bio, is the main problem there, Kiu!

Ties to the Senate is very hard for a Renegade, because Ties imply actual membership.

Rest of it:

I later dropped out of the Order, and went on to train bodyguards for Senators.(Hence the ties to the Senate and Senatorial Guard). After awhile, I went back to my ways. I went out to the outer rim to help the people there.

I came across a man by the name of Jace Onderon. He was a former student of the Jedi academy, but lost his connection to the force later. I trained him the arts of unarmed fighting, melee fighting, and blaster fighting. He is my current companion.

My brother and my other 2 sisters along with my father are all Senatorial bodyguards. I nkow the Senators from Dantooine, Onderon Coruscant, and Naboo personally.

Just Tie to the Senatorial Guard, then. 😉

Ties to the Senatorial Guard will mean that there is a Senator to whom you are actually a member of his bodyguard! Presumably with a rather discretionary attitude to the job. Care to define which Senator? Try not to pick a major one, because that is too much of a Tie otherwise.

I'd try the Senator of Onderon, if you want one from your background. *shrug*

I will give one warning though- Renegade-centric missions will tend to be not near the centre of the Republic, and so heavily Republican ties might not always be useful for Renegades.

I am not saying it is no good at all, but I wanted it said in advance that when you are a long way out, they won't do much for you.

I'll think about it. But I'm trying to go on a family tradition kinda thing.

Hey Ush, here's my Background:

Lenikan was born in Tatooine, he was a slave until the age of 12 when Hilv-Ja Vilder bought him and accepted him as a son, he went back to Naboo with Lenikan where he trained him, he hired a Human a Bothan and a Zabrak to train him.

Lenikan always knew he'd join the Dark side, but Hilv-Ja insisted that he has to be full trained before joining any force.
At the age of 17 Lenikan decided that he was fully trained, he asked permission to leave to Hilv-Ja and he denied it, Lenikan was angry, he knew that he had to join quickly so he took out his lightsabre, which was a gift by Yarek, his Bothan trainer, and he killed Hilv-Ja.
He stole some money from Hilv-Ja and he bought a ship, he went through the Galaxy searching for expirienced darksiders who he could team up with.

Is there room for me and if not is anotherone starting up soon?

Wow, we're getting a lot of publicity. Freakish. 😖

what does that mean ?

Bart's been here for years. There used to be a lot less people signing up for the RPG. We have tons of Jedi, and a handful of Dark Jedi, which is perfect...I suppose...

yeah no kidding, I joined and everybody just followed me 🙄 😛

Err, if you take a look at the rules, Darkdeth

Sorry to be a pain, Ice, but way too many people have been born on planets seen in the films. I'll have to draw the line at Tatooine! You will have to have been born somewhere else.

hehe Marcus his planet hasn't been iseen in the films 😄

Originally posted by Ushgarak
Err, if you take a look at the rules, Darkdeth

Sorry to be a pain, Ice, but way too many people have been born on planets seen in the films. I'll have to draw the line at Tatooine! You will have to have been born somewhere else.

Heh, I just picked Bespin because it was the first planet name that came to mind...*shrugs*

You could make one up, or use one from the books...

Originally posted by Ushgarak
Err, if you take a look at the rules, Darkdeth

Sorry to be a pain, Ice, but way too many people have been born on planets seen in the films. I'll have to draw the line at Tatooine! You will have to have been born somewhere else.

Is it alright if I change my birth planet to the one Mace is from? I forget the name of it, but I know it starts with an S.

Originally posted by Lan©eWindu™
Is it alright if I change my birth planet to the one Mace is from? I forget the name of it, but I know it starts with an S.

It's Haruun Kal according the databank thingy on the OS....which doesn't have an S in it at all.....😛