Write your own lyrics/rap

Originally posted by Alpha Centauri
"Alpha Centari
he's the pooper of the party
my juice is brand new
his is older than atari"

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! And I said 50 Cent had shit lyrics. But fine, this is the last time I'm gonna pulverise you coz otherwise it'll go back and forth.

I verbally dissect these fake, poser MC's/
Words scorch your skin and torture to the highest degree/
But all my past verses to you have had humour/
This last time I'm delivering death like a tumour/
You lack substance. skill, charisma and genitalia/
There's no other way to describe you other than "The Pill is a failure"/
***** you don't leave the mic frozen, you leave the mic dusty/
Coz you never used one and now I'll make you leave the show rusty/
I'm showing you up infront of the whole damn forum/
Love me or hate me people see my rhymes and adore em/
You're a nothing, a peon, a excrementious defection/
Fool just be thankful I replied and didn't greet you with rejection/
Crush ME? Man you're shit, wack, just plain horrid/
I'll leave you feeling wrecked just like ol' Senator Gore did/
How is the Ace gonna get beat by the Joker card?/
Son, my vocabulary is sicker than Marquis De Sade/
Who the Hell do you think you are to try and touch me dude?/
Jesus Christ I've babysat kids that spit meaner than you/
Everyone can clearly see that I'm just dealing a beating/
This meeting is ajourned so I'll just tone down the heating/
Last but not least, if you dislike me and really mean all your curses/
Why the **** is my name at the top of everyone of your verses?/

You're done. Reply again and you'll get no response after that truly God awful, childish pre-school rhyme you just dropped.

-AC

nice

Thats dope man but here ill kick one up for you guys....
i spit words and ill kick some verbs in every direction and ill make u look bad like a yeast infection,
smack ur ass around so hard *****, ill change ur complection. from black to white faggets i put up a fight to put u down on the ground faster than lighting, shock u like a bullet and ur heart stops to seeze the fighting.
👆

that sucks man. fix your structure like others so it can be easier to follow what you're saying

this is about trying to unwind.. seepin into ur mind like a pestacide, now select a side, or step aside. i do a better job than bonnie and clyde. decide to ride when the shit gets deep. my shit flows over the radio when u cant get sleep.. better than anything uve ever seen.. but so it seems.. that when your growin up your climbin trees, sailin the seven seas. running around like you got seven speeds..sleepless dreams beat them into a whipped cream, of thoughts. growin up i guess you got what you bought and all of thee above for all that your taught. goin through school..goin class to class, nothin inbetween..not even enough time to pass some gas..i bend over for a little bit and tell the whole world to kiss my glass aposed to kissin ass, im goin back with a cd of a couple tracks, so get your gas masks as the world turns, smoke spewin outta the cracks as the earth burns..

that is one of my somewhat good ones
u gotta learn the beat to understand the flow

LMAO you DONT have to listen to the beat to understand the flow

you just suck.

fix up your structure

example:

say you studied my style, it makes me wonder buddy/
cuz your not even good enough to be my understudy/

First rhyme I ever did...I think it turned out okay...don't tear it up too bad though, guys 😮 I know I need to work at this more.

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Watch out, here I come, get outta the way
If you don't look out I'm gonna make you pay
So what if you think that I'm only a girl
Time for you to get out and see the real world
I know who I am, I know what I can do
And if you don't like it then I say **** you
You're all just mindless non-thinking drones
Don't think for yourself may as well be clones
Time to get out, time to rebel
Time to stop taking what they have to sell
May as well be a sheep led to the slaughter
Tryin' to save yourself you give them your daughter
Get out of this mindset learn to think for yourself
Open up your mind with the key off that shelf
The one that says this way to freedom
But beware there'll always be some
Who'll say that people always need to be lead
Don't realize one day they'll end up dead
Run down by us who're sick of it
Don't want to deal with this spineless shit
So what I have to say is throw your fist in the air
Stand up shout out take a risk take a dare.

FREAK.CAL
THAT NIGGA BORN TO KILL
QUICK TO PULL THE TRIGGA
BUT WILL HOLD OFF UNTIL
SOMEONE PISSES ME OFF
TWO GUNNED LIKE LAURA CROFT
THE GLARE OF HIS MUG
MAKES EVEN THE HARDEST DUDE SOFT
THE FLASH OF THIS BURNER
MAKES YOU BECOME A FAST LEARNER
BE SMART *****
AND DON'T GET HIT
LIKE TINA TURNER
LIKE THAT COCAINE
ONE AND THE SAME
NUMBING YOUR BRAIN
I'LL HIT YOU SO HARD
I'LL KNOICK THE LETTERS OUT YOUR NAME
AND YOU DON'T WANNA GET IN THAT FIGHT
CAUSE I'M STACKED LIKE
I'LL SMACK YOU GAY
RETARDED
AND THEN BACK RIGHT
FREAKY CAL FREAKIN IT
AND REPRESENTIN BE MORE
YOU AINT BEEN FREAKY LIKE THIS BEFORE

Lana 😍 😛

freaky cal...that was really bad.

I DON'T PLAY

ok?

your lyrics didn't have a message...or any sort of substance to it.

I DON'T PLAY
CAUSE I DON'T GO BY THE RULES
IM A LITTLE TOO DIRTY
I USE ONLY DIRTY TOOLS
I DON'T FIGHT I PULL MY JOINT AND LET OFF
MY GUNS MY AFRODESIACS
ITS HOW I GET OFF

I DIDN'T NOTICE YOU THERE CRITICISING MY ARTISTIC EXECISE I'M SORRY

artistic? 😆

MR BELVEDER PASS THE CORVOSIEUR
BLACK WATCH THE DOOR LOOK OUT FOR
TANQUERAY
WITH HIS KNOTTY HEAD
SIPPING ON A SMIRNOFF ICE
ABSOLUTELY HYPNOTIQ
AND GETTING YOU NICE
YOU MIGHT BE WRONG IF
BARCARDI LIMON
MADE YOU STEELE FROM BOONES FARM
MR PAUL MASSON
AS YOU SLIPPED ON 99 BANAS
CAPTAIN MORGAN SET SALE FOR LONG ISLAND
LOOKING FOR JACK DANIELS

congratu****inglations on talking about alcohol...i wonder how many other rappers have done that 🙄

I LIKE HENNESY
WHEN I WRITE

RAPPERS HAVE WRITTEN ABOUT EVERYTHING OUTSIDE OF QUANTUM PHYSICS

HERES ONE FOR YOU BABES

U AND I ARE NOT IN LOVE
(L -O- V- E)
IF YOU CAN SPELL IT'S PLAINLY SEEN
FORCE OF TWO LETTERS IN AWORD UNFIT
LEADS TO AN IMPOSSIBLE DREAM

WEBSTER WOULD HAVE A FIT
AND HIS DICTIONARY WOULDN'T MEAN SHIT
IF IN THE WORD LOVE
U AND I WOULD FIT

POWERLESS UNLESS
HE PUT U AND I IN DANGER
BUT THE SPELLING OF THE WORD COULD BE NO STRANGER
TO SCHOLARS OF THE WORLD
THIS IS NO NO-BRAINER
U AND I IN LOVE CAUSING ANGER

I JUST MADE THAT CRAP UP

ARE YO A HATER DOC OCT OR ARE YOU A BITER?