well lets keep this thread going heres another one i wrote titlled L.S.D
L.S.D
come with me
and ill take away
all your pain
make your feel free again
close your eyes
count to ten
come with me
feel it deep within your spine
peace has been denied
slowly your brain fries
deeper and deeper you fall
so you convince your self your allright
that everything is fine
nowing damn well your lifes a lie
but no ones there to hear your calls
so you hide away from your self
slowly turning away everyone else
fear is all that you have left
all you left is to pray for death
lost slayer of decency
drugs replace our familys
caged in my insanty
untill the day i die
feel the sting
watch it bleed
tap the vayne
lost slayer of decency is me
to fast to think
strung out on crank
just cant sleep
in me you will find your end
see weak
see you crumble
brings me joy
seeing you in pain
hearing you scream
is how i feed on you
a part of you left behind
suffering so divine
lost with in a ****ing line
deeper and deeper you fall
now your all out of time
kiss your ****ing ass goodbye
one last twist of my ****ing nife
but no ones there to here your calls
slowly you fade away
seeing it on your ****ing face
such a dirty discrace
but that the price we pay
now you wonder endlessly
between a dream and reality
never ending tragidy
following you till the end of time
feel the sting
watch it bleed
tap the vayne
lost slayer of decency is me
to fast to think
strung out on crank
just cant sleep
in me you will find your end
see weak
see you crumble
brings me joy
seeing you in pain
hearing you scream
is how i feed on you
now im done with you
move on down the line
find another one
just like you
one more time
one more time
sorry i have this thing for guitsrist and drummers 😂
my friend and i wrote this he said it was sorta morbid so i bit him 🤪 im so strange
Watching over my shoulder
fearing what following me
it just keeps getting colder
my legs are numb
and i cant see
bite into your skin
make you bleed
carry home
cut in you
barrel the blood
they bathe you in
time comes with wisdom
life comes with pain
wanting and needing
feel just the same
chorus
heres another loserib nothing but losers original its shorter then the other ones but when its got the music behind it
it hits hellsa****ing hard
HATE/LOVE
the lies we breed the hate it will last us for ever
the pain we share the love that keeps us together
what we have done can never be forgiving
all the way to the grave is where are secerets stay hiddin
all take and never no give
pushed to the piont where i have no will
a seceret we keep thats all to real
something that we can never tell
a lie we take all the way to hell
a debt that never can be paid
intertwined our paths our laid
by each other we been betrayed
till death we'er together we can never leave
with in a secreret that we both now
traped in a lie that cant be told
a painting of a picture that cant be shown
stuck in a torment tha we face alone
face alone
face alone
down to the mask that we both where
srouded in a lie that we both share
the cards we were delt were just not fair
dont ****ing lie cuese we were both there
death becomes a welcomed guest
just for a little escape from this
gone are the days of chiledhood bliss
a life i lost that i still miss
so we keep this to our selfs in a seceret we both vowed
wile taking part in the ultamet sin
i cant believe what we just did
to our kids
what we did
what we did
the lies we breed the hate it will last us for ever
the pain we share the love that keeps us together
what we have done can never be forgiving
all the way to the grave is where are secerets stay hiddin
This is a "piratecore" song I wrote.
Blackheart's Lore
I looked out to the sea afar, just over the horizon.
A scary sight I saw, indeed. A black flag, it was flyin'.
I'd caught a glimpse of the depths of hell, it's been downhill ever since.
But it still brings a snicker, every time i reminisce.
[Music]
That fateful day had started out much like all the rest
We drank and ate and drank again with nothing to protest
A ship sailed up and off they came, their leader in plain view
He said to me, 'Boy, don't you see, I really could use you.'
I need a man for my first mate, and you look like a nice young lad.
yes, you're just the type of person who could lead my scurvy band.
With that, my head was struck with lead and I fell onto the floor.
When I woke up the next morning I could barely see the door.
In walked the man who'd taken me from the haven I'd once known.
He told me I was on his ship, and my life he did own.
[Music]
Oh, many a day was spent with him, and his trust was quickly earned.
We pillaged by day and dank at night, but for something more I yearned.
I concoted a scheme to take his life, for I wanted my own ship.
And it was only fair, 'cause he had taken my life, and brought me to this shit.
For months I planned, and when the time was right, I had to make my move.
I had all the women and money I could want, but I still had something to prove.
So one day we plundered a village, and a great bounty we did find
And at this moment, after very deep thought, I decided it was time.
[Music]
The captain drank late into the night, and fell into deep rest
It was then I grabbed his sword from his sheath and plunged it into his chest.
When the morning came, I had donned his cloak, and that captain was no more.
Blackheart was here, to instigate fear in every part of the world.
The black sails that had scared me once have since become my friend.
And I will worship them, and all their glory, until my tragic end.
But my story will live on and on in hearts forevermore.
And I swear to you, it all is true, this thing called 'Blackheart's Lore.'
okay, these are the first lyrics i wrote...they sound very very avril lavigney so tonight i'm gonna scrap them and write them again. it's not my fault though...the stupid radio kept playing 'my happy ending' so it affected me!!
Standing against this cracked street light
My tears hidden by the rain
I watch another drunken fight
Don’t wanna feel this pain
Did you realize how much I loved you?
You don’t realize I still do
Still can’t believe we’re not together
Still can’t believe you left
Maybe I’ll just drown my sorrows
Maybe I’ll break all the promises we kept
Wouldn’t care if there was a gun to my head
I’d pull the trigger myself
Don’t want this, rather be dead
I’m hoping you’re hating yourself
Did you realize how much I loved you?
You don’t realize I still do
Still can’t believe we’re not together
Still can’t believe you left
Maybe I’ll just drown my sorrows
Maybe I’ll break all the promises we kept
Still standing here alone
You’re not coming for me
Can’t stay here on my own
But you’re not gonna save me
Did you realize how much I loved you?
You don’t realize I still do
Still can’t believe we’re not together
Still can’t believe you left
Maybe I’ll just drown my sorrows
Maybe I’ll break all the promises we kept
its a work in progres, so i hope you guys think its good, but there is no real chorus, but who needs them i say, just wack in a break down in the gaps!!
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Speedster
metallica said it best, cut your breakfast on a mirror,
i hope your not religious, cos boy your now a sinner,
adictive, preplexing, the want, neverending,
theiving, misleading, undying, you stop trying
see your face, staring up, shaking fingers, as you cut,
exspensive habit, you cant stop,
your gonna end up dead, as quick as if you were shot,
steal from an old man, those bags so easy to snatch,
do whatever you can, to get a little cash,
your car, something you dont need, sell your second kidney,
to buy a little speed,
inside your blood, is running devils seed,
thinning out your blood, eating away your brain,
nothing left to lose, but no more will to gain,
rehab dosn't matter, when you dont want to try,
your mother dosn't give up,
but you see desperation in her eye,
could it be the next line your snort,
or next needle you stick in, your red bloodshot eyes,
matches your perferated skin, you could die tommorow,
but of that your rather not think, so you do another line,
as your brain shrinks
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Predictable
something isn't right
i can feel it again, feel it again
this isn't the first time
that you left me waiting
sad excuses and false hopes high
i saw this coming still
i don't know why i let you in
i knew it all along
you're so predictable
i knew something would go wrong
(something's going wrong)
so you don't have to call
or say anything at all
you’re so predictable
(so predictable)
everywhere i go, everyone i meet
everytime i try to fall in love
they all wanna know why i'm so broken
why am i so cold
why i'm so hard inside
why am i scared? what am i afraid of?
i don't even know
this story never had an end
i've been waiting, i've been searching
i've been hoping
i've been dreaming you would come back
but i know the ending of this story
you are never coming back, never, never....
i knew it all along
you're so predictable
i knew something would go wrong
(so predictable)
everywhere I go for the rest of my life
everyone I love everyone I care about (so predictable)
you all wanna know what’s wrong with me
but I know what it is (so predictable)
I’m ending this right now
If I try and write songs, I'm going to be really careful about it.
Most bands seem content with writing whiny, pathetic diary-account crap (I saw you, you hate me, I cried etc).
Writing songs that sound even remotely similar to others is to me, incredibly redundant.
If I were to form a band, it'd most likely be with my brother, with me doing vocals and/or rhythm guitar. I'm not quite confident, or good enough to be a full on lead guitarist yet, and I have a friend who could come in handy for a lead guitar anyway.
I'd most likely write the songs. I have loads of subjects, but I'd definitely try and stray from most of the stuff out there. I'd try and write imagery, try and be poetic (I think I'm good at that), without being whiny, yet still tackle subjects such as depression.
I'd take a lot of inspiration from Curt Cobains writing I think, without plaigerising any material. It's tough, but I know I can do it.