anybody ever try to write rock lyrics?

Started by Fearnix5 pages

I have wrote two songs they are pretty shity and make no sense to other people

I only read the first page of this thread, but from what I did read, loserib, your lyrics are awesome! ✅

I've written tons of songs...I don't know if they're any good or not...I'll post some of them later. I don't have time right now.

i have but putting to paper what you invision in your head is hard.it never comes out right.

loserib, cool lyrics, you got talent!
I only read the first page of this thread, but from what I did read, loserib, your lyrics are awesome!

thanks to you both it really means alot we should have mp3s up by the end of next month it been taking a long time to get everything set up for recording

fuct_up_kid and tabby999 you guys got some good shiy working out there keep it up and dont quit no matter what anyone tells you

loserib whats the name of the band?

in order to get your band noticed you have to know someone in a high place. a friend of mine knows yellow card

the name of the band is Nothing but Losers
i know a few people nobody big my freinds band thr3efold is sponcerd by yagermiester
we are just planing on making so much noise everybody will have to take notice

loserib read your pms

i allready replied

woopsy..........i didn't write predictable.
just so ya know..i posted it in the wrong thread. sorry. 😮

Originally posted by loserib
the name of the band is Nothing but Losers
i know a few people nobody big my freinds band thr3efold is sponcerd by yagermiester
we are just planing on making so much noise everybody will have to take notice

Sweet name, loserib 😉

yeah, that's a cool name...at the moment my band is called the cool chihuahas 🙄

this is a song thats not finished but i like none the less, its about how bands in australia are coming out and sound like americans, act like americans, look like americans and give me the shits, cos theres nothing wrong with being australian, and thats whats making out music industry wack, the record companys dont want someone who sounds like 50 other bands in america. oh and "occer" is a word for a chauvinistic male aussie, but most of the time they're pretty funny

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V.b, thongs, barbeque,
You hear people talking with a Yankee accent,
Blowing all the money the record company sent,
Occer, occer, speak aussie mother ****er,
Keep talking like that and they’ll find your body in a locker, ****er,
Tune your guitar down, mumble out your words,
You’ve got to remember, you cant polish a turd,
Throw in a machine, another member or two,
Why not use 12, even though 4 will do?
Sing about lost girlfriends, even though your 24,
Even if you don’t get asked for id anymore,
Remember ac/dc, or INXS?
They made aussie classics, don’t expect to be the next,

Occer, occer, speak aussie mother ****er,
Keep talking like that they’ll find your body in a locker ****er,

New york baseball caps, American flags,
What about a flannelette and a packet of fags?
Cos man, its well and good to wear fubu,
But do it around me and I’ll try and kill you,
Cos the the brand name and acrylic, it just isn’t real,
Your fubus got a z, how smart does that make you feel?
Rappin about all the bitches you shot,
Why try to be this when we all know your not,

Occer, occer, speak aussie mother ****er,
Keep talking like that they’ll find you body in a locker, ****er
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heres two more that im working on the first one is called
death romances and the second is your lies

Death Romances

Theres a woman in a black dress
Face pail white like a beautiful actress
For me she holds all the answers
Intoxicated by the way she dances
as you drift away
as you fade away
will you decide to stay
when she comes your way

in her arms theres no second chances
some she chooses and some she passes
eyes cut like knifes when she glances
in her beauty death romances
as you drift away
as you fade away
will you decide to stay
when she comes your way

taking all that she embraces
so many people and difrent places
disregarding all age and races
most come easy but few she chases
as you drift away
as you fade away
will you decide to stay
when she comes your way

Your Lies

i can see the truth in your eyes
when you ****ing lie to me
every time you open your mind
im surprised to see
something that i had missed
that weve been divided by
somthing i could not see in
your lies
your lies
your ****ing lies
i can feel the hate in your heart
that you've shown to me
you always try to tear me apart
with every word you say
no way i can hold back
the ****ing rage in me
no way i can ****ing take
your ****ing lies
your lies
your lies
your ****ing lies

*claps* 👆

thank you Fearnix you are very kind

Brilliant, loserib ✅ I wish I could hear your songs instead of just reading the lyrics 😕 .... I'm sure they're awesome, though 😛

hey loserib, dude ur lyrics rock!!! i hav recently joined a punk rock/metal band, i play bass guitar and sing.........but the prob is i cnt rite lyrics at all, i find it so hard!!! i woz wonderin if u cud giv me any tips?, how do u rite lyrics sooo good? i like wot u rite em about aswell, goverment n shit!!! if u cud giv me a few tips if possib i wud rely apreciate it!!! fanx

I don't really write rock lyrics. I write lyrics whenever I feel like I have something to write about. Since I can't sing I'll compose something on piano or keyboard that I think would compliment it.

-AC

murderous jim just write whats on your mind and look for insperation everywhere and i try to apraoch writing lyrics like peotry
its allways good to have a subject for each song