Why is it so F#$#@@@!!! hard to live in this world?

Started by Elessea69 pages

^_^ awww...that was about *her* wasn't it 😛 It was AMAZING DW 😊 *claps*

Originally posted by justjakk
willie mauz.!!!! the best dude

domo, JJ-san. notworthy

Originally posted by Elessea
^_^ awww...that was about *her* wasn't it 😛 It was AMAZING DW 😊 *claps*

thank you El. I thank anyone who views these works, as well! notworthy

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Here are 2 new ones I wrote on break last night, one at midnight, one at 5 a.m., so technically, I wrote em today, but whatever....

I want to break myself,
I want to rip me away,
I want to shred my soul,
And destroy all I say.

I want to achieve chaos,
I want to explode into flame,
I want to burn my body,
And forget all my shame.

I want to rise from the ashes
Of a wasted squandered life,
I want to show my blood
And finally pull out the knife.

Let me fall away from me,
Like a dress on prom night,
Let me linger in the darkness,
And stay out of the damning light.

Pull me apart with your claws,
Grasping my heart, my soul, my mind.
Rend me, slashed from face to feet,
Take my eyes, the eyes of blind.

Let me rest, on my dirt bed,
Let me lay asleep, not dead,
Don't wake me from my nightmare,
This is the only thing I cannot share.

I give my breath, my money, my love,
I give my heart, my spirit too,
But these dreams of horror that I hide,
I could never share them with you.

Wow! Omg, this has the same concept of one that i'm writing 😱 Haven't finished it, b/c I fail to piece the words together so naturally as thou can droolio

Remeber your world is yours alone,
We share it but briefly, then it is gone.

👆

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
I can't read you like anyone before,
I wish to see you walk back in my door.
You are so wonderful to me,
Smile, scent, hair, eyes, and your reality.
Damn me I feel like a fool indeed.
I don't know which advise I should heed.
My mind screams to let and leave you, go.
My heart however, say just one thing: "No!"
You showed me your world, and told me your tale,
You shared with me a night, and in the morn you set sail,
Now I am left wondering how you think about me...
I guess only the future will show what will be...
You killed me with you sweet sonorous voice,
Your eyes left me without a chance or choice.
You touch lit up my smoldering heart inside.
Your laugh made all my fears and doubts hide.
And now I sit and think about our night together,
Flying on my last feather...
I blew off the world to stay with you and wonder was it worth it?
I think I am sure of it!
I want now to return to your world and,
I want now to run with you hand in hand.
What did you see in me last night?
Hopefully a gentleman, who acted right.
I don't know when to kiss or kill but I think that I did well,
I want to see now whether or not, but only time shall tell.
And with my last two lines I write, I can tell you this,
Last night with you was awesome, I was in complete bliss!

Had fun, did ya ? 😄

Ohhhhhh yeahhhhhh..... hahahah! *sits back with a VERY content smile.....* ahhhhhh..... hahhaaah!~!

As I walk my path, I see you laying down,
Giving up.
So I turn and run and kneel to the ground.
"Get Up!"
I grasp your hand and urge you to stand.
So come on.
I can only do so much as a man.
Fight on!
I can cover you with my wings but for a time.
Too slow.
I can see you though I see with eyes of blind.
Even though.
So please, come with me, follow me this way.
Hold on tight.
I'll clasp you to my breast, hold you all day.
Just right.
I can fly you into the sunlight and out of this pit.
Stand please.
I dont care if you dont want to hear this sh#t.
Off those knees!
I will not, can not let you go so easily into the night.
Not my way.
I must stay until you wish to see the light,
Of a new day.

You know who you are, this is for you.

I'd read all this but I prefer to procrastinate for now. Maybe later. Looks interesting.

haha thanks... 😉

Nice XD

hahah XD? you and my brother....
hahaha ty.

I know when you look inside you can see,
I cannot hide from you.
I feel when you look you can understand me,
My heart still beats true.
You want to play the field a bit,
And all I can do is fight.
While typically I don't get into this s##t,
I think for once this is right.
I believe I can do it, win you free,
I know I can be the best,
But in the end what will come, will be?
Just me, or the rest?
While you are there and having fun,
I am going to bid my time,
And when this race has been run,
I may be first in line,
Just being myself and true to me,
All I can ever do.
And when it comes down to I and thee,
Will I be with You?

wow great peom warrior 😉 i hope that gal sees what you want her to good luck

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
wow great peom warrior 😉 i hope that gal sees what you want her to good luck

hahahaha I dunno, I hide my eyes so much that even when I look dead into someone's eyes unless I really really force it out, you can't see em well. Deep set and dark they are... haha eh, what ever you know? I am glad to have met an awesome lady, and if naught else hanging with her is groovy. Yes, cause I am a guy alone, I would like something a bit more romantic, but I can also deal with being friends. Hhahahaha amazing how you ladies make us guys go completely off our respective benches.

dude, good to see you have found someone. hope it works out. now its my turn.. haha. im jealous

You know, I was afraid someone certain might read some of these, then I realized a simple truth: If you did read these and got scared, how could you ever handle anyone? I mean, eventually you see into a person's heart and soul and they show you what they are all about, and I KNOW that some works here are a bit intense, but that IS my soul, not something that I show to everyone, and typically not something I show at all... so I hope that if you read this and you feel strange, you will just remember that you have seen something that a handful of people near me typically get to see: me as I really am, no mask, no shell to hide in, just pure William. Can you handle it?

Originally posted by justjakk
dude, good to see you have found someone. hope it works out. now its my turn.. haha. im jealous

haha dunno man... wishes and crap, take one in each hand and see what is heavier.
Bro, you shall have yours. I shall eventually also have mine. Just gotta put in the freakin time.... and that is hard.

everything takes time.....but they should hurry up hahahaha

I don't care what you think
I don't care what you say.
I don't care enough to blink,
I am always gonna be this way.
I was born to be a man,
A knight and a "nice guy"
When I tried to be bad, damn,
I always ended up wanting to die.
You can say that I am weird,
You can say that I suck,
But this is how my spirit's geared.
And I just don't give a f@#$.
What can you say, what can you do?
Can you change who I am ?
I will never be changed by you,
Only if I want to, I have MY plan.
So if you can't handle me then leave,
If you don't like what you see.
I never rest or get reprieve,
I am always one person: ME.

Originally posted by justjakk
everything takes time.....but they should hurry up hahahaha

seriously...
😄