Trapped

okay well.. it's been a LOOOONG time since I've posted a poem so here goes nothing... it's only as far as I've gotten but o well 😬

You're taken,
Yet you tell me you like me.
All I hear are promises,
Promises that fade into lies.
The phone rings and it's you,
you telling me that "it's all going downhill",
Giving me false hope.
I try to be a good friend,
Try to comfort you,
I listen to how you feel,
And yet I try to be distant,
Try not to let my feelings show,
Feelings of being played,
And let down.

Ouch..... ouch... and yeah frikkin frakkin time! hahaha good work.

thanks 😛 like I said.. it was a long time since I posted anything 😮

Originally posted by bordom
okay well.. it's been a LOOOONG time since I've posted a poem so here goes nothing... it's only as far as I've gotten but o well 😬

You're taken,
Yet you tell me you like me.
All I hear are promises,
Promises that fade into lies.
The phone rings and it's you,
you telling me that "it's all going downhill",
Giving me false hope.
I try to be a good friend,
Try to comfort you,
I listen to how you feel,
And yet I try to be distant,
Try not to let my feelings show,
Feelings of being played,
And let down.

thanks and you also know what it's really bout 😉

Originally posted by bordom
thanks and you also know what it's really bout 😉

hahah great, more "secret girl stuff.." hahaha...

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hahah great, more "secret girl stuff.." hahaha...

Originally posted by Coldfire
😂 No it's more of "you have to live here to know what we're talking about stuff" 😛

haha whatever..... hahahaha!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hahah great, more "secret girl stuff.." hahaha...

Originally posted by Coldfire
😂 No it's more of "you have to live here to know what we're talking about stuff" 😛

Originally posted by bordom
okay well.. it's been a LOOOONG time since I've posted a poem so here goes nothing... it's only as far as I've gotten but o well 😬

You're taken,
Yet you tell me you like me.
All I hear are promises,
Promises that fade into lies.
The phone rings and it's you,
you telling me that "it's all going downhill",
Giving me false hope.
I try to be a good friend,
Try to comfort you,
I listen to how you feel,
And yet I try to be distant,
Try not to let my feelings show,
Feelings of being played,
And let down.

Interesting poem, keep up the good work. *Applauds* Very good poem, indeed. 🙂

😮 thank you

Your very welcome..

😛 I just don't think it deserved applause 😄

Originally posted by bordom
Of course... 😂

naaah... it's more like "OMG KILL ME NOW!" stuff 😛

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hahaha weiber....

Originally posted by bordom
Okay well ummm... my friend told me to post my poem on here sooo..... here it is... it's not really that good but o well....

Trapped

Why must you look at me?
Must your eyes stare at the body that encloses my internal and emotional insecurities?
Am I the one who you feel needs this punishment after I abandon my life just for your perfect 30" waist and cleavedged breasts to judge.
I gave up everything I had..... my love from my family which was taken for granted, my long lasting health, and most of all my self esteem.
All this was captured from me, all for you.
Do you not see my body deterriating infront of my deceiving eyes?
Can you not fell my pain and frustration?
What have you done to me and why?
You can't see this can you? You're only a mirage, a figment of all teenagers' minds.
Do you beleive I deserve this... this... this horror?
The horror th not know if I'm going to make it to my next birthday.
Must I relive a nightmare most would only need to open their eyes in order for you to disappear.
Why am I the one to be tortured of your presence?
But I am the only one aren't I?
I'm your main target, a target that can't save itself from your claws of illusion.
I'm trapped.

Ya so there it is... tell me what you think and please be honest

Thanks 😮

Okay so here's my newest one🙁it's a riddle see if you can guess it 😛 )

It's something we can't avoid,
And something we can't live without.
Falling deep inside it's black holes,
And trying to fight our way out is useless.

Hearts are ripped from chests,
Emotions are tortured,
Eyes turn red,
And tears release the evidence.

The evidence of:
Heartache,
Loneliness,
Decaying souls,
And loss of the internal flame.

It's powered by passion,
And trust.
Lies,
And betrayal,
Are the kryptonite.

wow. neat.

😮 I wrote it last night while I was listening to The Doors 😂