Coldfire's Poetry Stuff

Started by Sveny90 pages

That was Beautifull *Crying*LOL

Aww really cute 😊

Originally posted by Oiram62205
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Coldfire you must have been bitten by the love bug.

lol yeah

Originally posted by Oiram62205
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Coldfire you must have been bitten by the love bug.


Omg I didn't see you posted! Lol yeah I did 😛

Originally posted by Sveny
That was Beautifull *Crying*LOL

Hey don't mock me 😛 lol

Originally posted by Tassie
Aww really cute 😊

lol yeah


lol ✅

LOL LOL LOL 😆 😆 😆 😂 🐰

Originally posted by Sveny
LOL LOL LOL 😆 😆 😆 😂 🐰

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Funny 😆 💃 🧑‍⚕️ :bunny 😇 😎

Originally posted by Coldfire
With You

I see you there,
My eyes light up,
I smile in delight,
My heart speeds up,
Beating loudly in my ears,
Thudding against my ribs,
My breathing quickens,
As my chest tightens,
Butterflies move around,
Inside of my stomach,
I tingle all over my body,
And every single moment,
That I spend with you,
Just feels so incredible,
Is such wonderful bliss,
And these memories,
I hold so dearly to me,
When you are away,
So although you’re gone,
You’re very much remembered,
And I hold you,
And you memory close,
Praying that soon,
You’ll be back again,
Here once more with me,
Together we are one,
We belong together,
And as much as you,
Say you love me,
I love you just as much.

New muse, eh? Great poem.

Originally posted by Sveny
Funny 😆 💃 🧑‍⚕️ :bunny 😇 😎

Sveny why don't you write some poetry or something? 😛

I personally suck at it 🤨 🤨

Originally posted by Sveny
I personally suck at it 🤨 🤨

Hey, it's all subjective, no one sucks at poetry no2

I do ask my teachers 😖mart: 😖mart:

Originally posted by alcoholicpoet
New muse, eh? Great poem.

Yep new muse 🙂 Thanks 😊
Originally posted by Sveny
I personally suck at it 🤨 🤨

That's what I thought before too 😬
Originally posted by Tassie
Hey, it's all subjective, no one sucks at poetry no2

can u give me some advice on poetry writing
plz Hun LOVe ya James

Originally posted by Coldfire
Vanyel's Ice Dream

**Character borrowed from Mercedes Lackey and her 'Herald's of Valdemar' series for the purpose of this poem**

Snowflakes fall all around,
Mounds of snow surround me,
Covering the treacherous ice,
It is so cold here, oh so cold,
I walk to try and keep warm,
Stumbling through the ice and snow,
My teeth chattering loudly together,
And I just can't seem to stop shivering,
I look up and suddenly realize,
That I cannot go any further ahead,
I have wandered into a canyon,
And the exit has been blocked up,
Trapping me inside its heart,
I try to climb up and out,
But I jump back in a hurry,
As I slice my hand on the ice,
I watch as the blood flows sluggishly,
Then stops coming out altogether,
As the wound starts to freeze over,
I gasp as the ice moves up my arm,
I am turning into an ice statue,
I feel it creeping into my cold body,
Trapped, afraid, frozen, lonely,
Oh so very much alone am I now,
And I put myself in this position;
I have sealed my own fate.

And here's one for William, since he's the one who is always calling us women evil 😛 I hope you knew this was coming hun 😂

Evil Hmmm?

You've probably heard tell,
That women are supposed to be,
The more evil of the sexes,
Though it's really not our fault,
That we were given all the tools,
In order to control the men,
Curves and roundness and softness,
Are enough to bring a man down,
And turn his brain into mush,
An advantage well used by females,
To see that their wishes are granted,
And why not use what we're given,
It shouldn't be left to waste after all,
And men don't seem to mind much,
Sometimes they look to even enjoy it,
So we shouldn't be called more evil,
Because men don't use their heads,
While women were given the ability,
To think with clear heads for a reason,
So that they can cover situations,
Where a man can't think at all,
Because he's too preoccupied elsewhere,
To see there's trouble afoot.


hehehehe nice... evil, but nice. hahahha
I like protectress very much. hahaha i like. 😉

Awesome. Just plain fantastic! clap I really enjoyed and look foward to more of your prose, M'lady. Keep it up. And do tell, who is the crushy? heh heh heeeee! sly hahahahahah!

Very spiffy

Originally posted by Tassie
Hey, it's all subjective, no one sucks at poetry no2

srrry to inform u but absolutly suck at writing poems, but ill give it a try. 😮 😆 ✅

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Awesome. Just plain fantastic! clap I really enjoyed and look foward to more of your prose, M'lady. Keep it up. And do tell, who is the crushy? heh heh heeeee! sly hahahahahah!

Gracias 😊 Lol well if you really wanna know, PM me bout it and I just might tell ya 😛 heh heh heh heh
Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
Very spiffy

Gracias 😊
Originally posted by supernovadragon
srrry to inform u but absolutly suck at writing poems, but ill give it a try. 😮 😆 ✅

Give it a try and we'll be the judges of whether they are good or not 🙂

HEY CF!!
did you read my poem i sent you? 😄