Coldfire's Poetry Stuff

Originally posted by Coldfire
I wrote a few poems yesterday night and this morning, just out of the blue cuz I had some thoughts that wouldn't leave my head. I dunno how good they are, so someone please help me out there? And please, tell me things on how to improve on writing, if ya could!!

BETRAYAL

My heart is pounding,
My hands are clenched into fists,
My head is hanging,
My ears are ringing,
My eyes are filling with tears,
My body is trembling.
I walk away.

Away from you,
The one who has hurt me,
Who has caused me all this pain.
My heart has been broken
For the very last time.
Never, ever again
Will anyone make me feel this devastated.

I will lock my heart away,
In the tallest tower,
Of the tallest castle,
On the tallest mountain.
And there it will stay,
Never to be broken again,
Never to bleed like that again.

I just can’t believe it.
I thought that you were different,
I thought that you were my friend,
I thought that you loved me.
But you have shown your true colors,
And now I truly see,
That I have been living an absolute lie.

I’ve only been fooling myself.
I mean, what was I thinking?
I believed that someone really cared for me,
I believed every d@mn word you said.
I am such an idiot.
I let my heart control my mind,
And now I am paying the price.

You used to make me laugh;
Now you make me want to cry.
You used to make me happy;
But thinking of you now depresses me.
You used to be in my dreams;
Now you haunt me in my nightmares.
I’m being destroyed by the mere memory of you.

Now all I wanna do is curl up and cry,
And I am so completely lost.
My life is meaningless now,
‘Cuz you were my love, my life,
And now I am all alone again.
I am fading away, ever so slowly.
You are killing me.

Sinking…

I stand here watching them,
From the outside looking in,
Watching all my friends,
As they joke and talk together,
As they laugh and have fun.
And, once again,
They have forgotten all about me.

Why am I the one left out?
Why am I the one being shunned?
Is it because of the way I am?
Is it because I’m too far gone,
Into my own little world
Of fantasies and hopes and dreams?
Is it simply because they don’t like me?
And that they never have?
And all this time they’ve just been pretending?
Pretending to really be my friends?

Sometimes I wonder,
Sometimes I suspect
That I really am all alone,
Alone in this cold, cruel world,
And that no one will be there for me,
Just when I really need them the most.

So I sink even deeper
Into my own little made-up world,
Becoming lost inside illusions,
Hardly able to tell reality from fantasy.
And every day it stays the same,
Nothing really changes,
And so my little world becomes
My refuge from everything and everyone else.

And so I block everyone out,
Locking up my tortured heart,
Sealing it away in walls of stone,
So that it cannot be hurt like that again.
I begin to drift away from them,
Those I once called my friends,
Those who laugh and joke without me,
And make me feel so discluded.

They finally see my withdrawal,
And now it is too late.
I am just too far gone,
Too far over the edge,
To even think of turning back now.
I become as I am named:
Coldfire, she with an icy, uncaring heart
And a fire that burns within her,
Burning with her hate and rage and pain.

I feed that fire within me,
Each hurtful word, each scornful look,
I put them all in the flames inside,
Until the fire burns like the sun itself.
And it tries to escape me,
Tries to get back at those that have done this to me;
Coldfire wants their blood.
And even though revenge would taste so sweet,
I do not let the rage consume me utterly.

I dampen the fire with the coldness in my heart,
Not knowing, that in doing so,
I am burning myself away,
Day by day,
Hour by hour,
Minute by minute.
I am being consumed by my own hatred and pain.
Coldfire is starting to take over.

I realize this too late,
There is nothing I can do to stop
This pointless self-destruction,
This suicide of mind and soul.
Oh, my friends finally see the truth now,
And now they are all concerned,
But it’s too late now;
Far too late.

I am fading,
Being replaced by something that I wasn’t;
Coldfire, she who has no cares or worries,
She who does not love,
Or feel any emotion at all.
She has taken over me.
Amber is no more;
Coldfire reigns.

i want this to happen already

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Originally posted by Tha C-Master
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Originally posted by Coldfire
Tonight

All I want to do,
Is be here with you,
Be held in your arms,
Seduced by your charms,
Dancing in the sand,
To an imaginary band,
Stealing a kiss or two,
Never feeling blue,
When you’re here with me,
Looking out at the sea,
We need not make a sound,
A blanket wrapped around,
Our bodies so close together,
Enjoying this beautiful weather,
I want to be with you forever,
Stop loving you I will never,
For the love we share is so strong,
Though we’ve not known each other that long,
I pray to God that from me you never leave;
My heart so deeply would grieve,
But I have faith in our love, I do,
And someday soon hope to prove it to you.

That was beautiful. 😄

Originally posted by Coldfire
No More

The mage had tracked her down.

In the infinitesimal space between,
One frantic heartbeat and the next,
She had gone from safe and free,
All the way to cornered and trapped….

He reaches his slender hands toward her,
And she utters a scream,
Of heart-stopping terror,
Of soul-wrenching fright,
Scrambling backwards, away from him,
She can’t go back to him,
She can’t let him do those things to her,
Can’t go back to being his slave,
She can’t, she can’t, she won’t…

He laughs in amusement,
While magical ropes bind her tired and weary body,
And she is lifted into the air,
Floating on an expanse of nothingness.
“Naughty, naughty girl,” he chides,
Shaking one long forefinger at her,
His dark eyes dancing in his beautiful face,
Betraying also his lust and scorn,
Along with his good-natured humor….

Taking her delicate face in his strong hands,
He put his sensuous lips against hers,
Kissing her deeply, wildly, passionately,
She shivers in a complex combination,
Of flaming desire and bitter disgust,
Hating herself for feeling this way,
Hating him for doing this to her,
Hating just being with him,
Yet aching with her need for him all the same….

He had spirited her away,
Away from everyone and everything,
That she had ever held near and dear,
And made her into a thing,
An object to be used whenever he fancied.
She had had enough.
No more would he use her,
No more would he hurt her,
He would pay the ultimate price,
For all of the things he had ever done:
Death, a horrible, painful death,
Or she herself would die trying.

Wow, that's really good! Honestly, you just keep getting better..🙂

Originally posted by snehin
i want this to happen already

Originally posted by snehin
i want this to happen already

Originally posted by Tha C-Master
damn sexy poem!!!!

Originally posted by Tassie
That was beautiful. 😄

Wow, that's really good! Honestly, you just keep getting better..🙂

Originally posted by Fëanor
and what exactly do you want to happen....already? 🤨?

Originally posted by Coldfire
Muchas gracias 😊

That's what I'm wondering 🤨

Huh? 😕

eh? 🤨

Lol nvm I confused myself 😛

Originally posted by Coldfire
Lol nvm I confused myself 😛

Shush you're making it worse! 😂

😇 whaat?

hahaha you know you're not an angel 😛

what?!? 😱 I am soo an angel. 😛

I beg to differ 😛

But I finally got this poem typed up lol so here it is:

I'm Sorry

This is all my fault,
I let it go too far,
Letting it get out of hand,
That was a big mistake,
I can’t do this anymore.

You say that you love me,
But I know it’s not true,
What you feel for me,
Is merely a little crush,
Though you may not,
See that it is true,
And I’m sorry to say,
That I don’t feel the same,
For I already have,
Someone in my life,
And he means the world to me,
Don’t know what I’d do without him.

And I know that this,
Will hurt you quite a lot,
But you have to realize,
That you and I are,
Not destined for one another,
Hopefully you will see this,
And not hate me for it,
Because I would still love,
To remain friends with you,
For you’ve always been loyal,
But in the end,
The decision is up to you.

Originally posted by NunYahBidness
Odd thing to say.

Originally posted by Fëanor
and what exactly do you want to happen....already? 🤨?

Originally posted by Coldfire
Muchas gracias 😊

That's what I'm wondering 🤨

Originally posted by Coldfire
I beg to differ 😛

But I finally got this poem typed up lol so here it is:

I'm Sorry

This is all my fault,
I let it go too far,
Letting it get out of hand,
That was a big mistake,
I can’t do this anymore.

You say that you love me,
But I know it’s not true,
What you feel for me,
Is merely a little crush,
Though you may not,
See that it is true,
And I’m sorry to say,
That I don’t feel the same,
For I already have,
Someone in my life,
And he means the world to me,
Don’t know what I’d do without him.

And I know that this,
Will hurt you quite a lot,
But you have to realize,
That you and I are,
Not destined for one another,
Hopefully you will see this,
And not hate me for it,
Because I would still love,
To remain friends with you,
For you’ve always been loyal,
But in the end,
The decision is up to you.

Originally posted by snehin
u wont get it

u wont either

erm the thing tht happened last night!

briliant amazing awsome

Thanks, but it's not that great lol