Coldfire's Poetry Stuff

Started by snehin90 pages

Originally posted by Coldfire
oh ok I see

Thanks, but it's not that great lol

i love it

Originally posted by snehin
i love it

Well thanks 😊

And here's another one:

Taken

Darkness surrounds,
Evil abounds,
They’ve trapped me here,
And at me they leer,
With lust in their eyes,
They don’t try to disguise,
But me they cannot touch,
They’d displease the Master very much,
He wants me for himself,
Another trophy for his shelf,
Close comes he to where I lay,
And no word or scorn can I say,
For I seem to be under a spell,
He has planned this out quite well,
I am covered with a shield,
My own magic I cannot wield,
He says that I now belong to him,
That he can control me on a whim,
I know it’s true, it scares me so,
And he can see just what I know,
His grin it freezes me to the core,
But his wide, mad eyes frighten me more,
Large, groping hands burn my skin,
I know there’s but little chance I can win,
And now I must face it, must be level,
I’ve now been taken by the Devil.

Originally posted by Coldfire
Well thanks 😊

And here's another one:

Taken

Darkness surrounds,
Evil abounds,
They’ve trapped me here,
And at me they leer,
With lust in their eyes,
They don’t try to disguise,
But me they cannot touch,
They’d displease the Master very much,
He wants me for himself,
Another trophy for his shelf,
Close comes he to where I lay,
And no word or scorn can I say,
For I seem to be under a spell,
He has planned this out quite well,
I am covered with a shield,
My own magic I cannot wield,
He says that I now belong to him,
That he can control me on a whim,
I know it’s true, it scares me so,
And he can see just what I know,
His grin it freezes me to the core,
But his wide, mad eyes frighten me more,
Large, groping hands burn my skin,
I know there’s but little chance I can win,
And now I must face it, must be level,
I’ve now been taken by the Devil.

i love it yet again damn im runnin outa comments exitin!!

Originally posted by Coldfire
Well thanks 😊

And here's another one:

Taken

Darkness surrounds,
Evil abounds,
They’ve trapped me here,
And at me they leer,
With lust in their eyes,
They don’t try to disguise,
But me they cannot touch,
They’d displease the Master very much,
He wants me for himself,
Another trophy for his shelf,
Close comes he to where I lay,
And no word or scorn can I say,
For I seem to be under a spell,
He has planned this out quite well,
I am covered with a shield,
My own magic I cannot wield,
He says that I now belong to him,
That he can control me on a whim,
I know it’s true, it scares me so,
And he can see just what I know,
His grin it freezes me to the core,
But his wide, mad eyes frighten me more,
Large, groping hands burn my skin,
I know there’s but little chance I can win,
And now I must face it, must be level,
I’ve now been taken by the Devil.

why if I didn't know any better, i think you were talkin' bout me...remember I had devil under my sig name? sweat

Originally posted by Fëanor
why if I didn't know any better, i think you were talkin' bout me...remember I had devil under my sig name? sweat
she is talkin bout you!!{maybe}{lol}{perhaps}

Originally posted by Fëanor
why if I didn't know any better, i think you were talkin' bout me...remember I had devil under my sig name? sweat

Oh I remember that... but it's not you of course 😛 Not with the lines "His grin it freezes me to the core,
But his wide, mad eyes frighten me more," lol

great stuff coldfire and there is a new poem on my thread so check it out

Originally posted by Coldfire
I beg to differ 😛

But I finally got this poem typed up lol so here it is:

I'm Sorry

This is all my fault,
I let it go too far,
Letting it get out of hand,
That was a big mistake,
I can’t do this anymore.

You say that you love me,
But I know it’s not true,
What you feel for me,
Is merely a little crush,
Though you may not,
See that it is true,
And I’m sorry to say,
That I don’t feel the same,
For I already have,
Someone in my life,
And he means the world to me,
Don’t know what I’d do without him.

And I know that this,
Will hurt you quite a lot,
But you have to realize,
That you and I are,
Not destined for one another,
Hopefully you will see this,
And not hate me for it,
Because I would still love,
To remain friends with you,
For you’ve always been loyal,
But in the end,
The decision is up to you.


Wow. ha. You been writing alotta these lately. Wondering who they're about... hahaha you make me think, Lady Cold.

And hey, very nice work on these latest ones. Hope to see some more. Like tonight? ha! 🙂

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Wow. ha. You been writing alotta these lately. Wondering who they're about... hahaha you make me think, Lady Cold.

Lol is that a good thing? 😛 😉
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
And hey, very nice work on these latest ones. Hope to see some more. Like tonight? ha! 🙂

Thanks 😊 I don't really have any more for ya tho

hey sweets tis like i said before left me speechless!!

Originally posted by snehin
hey sweets tis like i said before left me speechless!!

Gracias 😊

Dude, I really like them...😄 Especially the last. 🙂 It just flows so naturally... XD

Originally posted by Tassie
Dude, I really like them...😄 Especially the last. 🙂 It just flows so naturally... XD

Thankies Tass 😄

Originally posted by Tassie
Dude, I really like them...😄 Especially the last. 🙂 It just flows so naturally... XD
she no dude she a dudet!

any new pems sweets?

Love your poem

Originally posted by snehin
she no dude she a dudet!

any new pems sweets?

Seriously I know she is, I just call everyone "dude". 😛

Originally posted by snehin
she no dude she a dudet!

any new pems sweets?


Lol nope I have none at the moment
Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
Love your poem

Thanks 😊
Originally posted by Tassie
Seriously I know she is, I just call everyone "dude". 😛

Lol I do sometimes too 😛

Originally posted by Tassie
Seriously I know she is, I just call everyone "dude". 😛
oh ok!!

Originally posted by Coldfire
Lol nope I have none at the moment

Thanks 😊

Lol I do sometimes too 😛

aww ok

u call everyone dudes?thts sounds srange to me!

Originally posted by Coldfire
Lol is that a good thing? 😛 😉

Thanks 😊 I don't really have any more for ya tho


heh. yeah? hahaha. yes, that is a very good thing. too many ditzy gals who are boring. you are many steps ahead of the game, babe.

Hey sne, you been using MY syntax bub! hahaha callin her sweets. I see how ya are, wordthief. 😂