hey Amber 😄 um... hehe i need help. 😮 My teacher in English class asked everyone 2 write a poem. um I tried n this is how it turned out. Is it ok??
Unhappiness
Some nights i stay up late and cry,
Other nights i feel as if i could die!
In my life i feel not loved,
I always get kicked around and shoved.
but why sould i be happy?
How could i be im treated so crappy?
Everyday seems like a battle.
I get thrown around like a baby's rattle.
Sometimes everything can be so scary
Why can't i just be happy?
for all my faults, i am to blame
I am the one to take all the shame.
Alone
I didn't want to admit it,
It was earier to lie
and hide the hurt and emptiness
To smile instead of cry
I didn't want to face the fact
my life is full of pain,
and maybe smile again
cause i feel oh- so -forgotten
So betrayed and so alone
Without a trace of forgiveness
and no soul to call my own
I cannot spread my wings
and my happiness has malted
Into tears and other things
Its hard for me to hide the fact
My wishes have no home and
return to anquish,
Bow my head and cry alone
Originally posted by Xirius
Nice work, I didnt read all 88 pages, but what Ive read, Ive liked!