EARLY HOGWARTS james and lillys story

The first years spent few months enjoying until Lily took over the charge of preparing study timetable not only for herself but for her friends too.
This annoyed two students most- James & Sirius.

"Lily please! Exams are full month ahead. We will have plenty of time even if we start a week later," exclaimed Sirius when Lily handed him his timetable.

"Yes Lily Sirius is right," added James.

"What? Exams are only one month ahead. Only 30 days. Oh my god!
I miscalculated as I thought there are 33 days," an astonished Lily said before burying herself in her Potions book.

I love this story! I know I haven't commented here before b/c my computer wouldn't send the ID code. But this is great I come here every day to read your story thanx for wrting such a great story

Thanks a lot. Iwill try to write soon despite of the stupid exams which are coming near and near.

lol yea i hate tests so much
POST MORE lol well as soon as you can

The next days were spent reading, Doing homework, resting, going to library, learning and practicing various spells.
In Remus's case it was accompanied by his transformation, as full moon was around 20 days before the exams.

The Maraudars and the girls were often found together practicing various spells as it was the only thing in which James and Sirius were interested. Soon it was that the exams were only a weak ahead of them and there preparations were nearly done.

"God I am tired. Lily please don't force me to learn stupid History," Sirius complained.

"Fine. When you will fail then don't say anything to me," Lily answered back.

Oh god. I know it is too little but I am trying my best to write as soon as I can.
Please tell wether you like it or not.

i love it keep going

Yeah, keep it up. It's good!

Here is the next part. Hope you like it. I am not able to write much because of my exams from this Monday.

The exams soon started. The first exam was Transfiguration. The first years were required to change their goblets in rat. This proved easy for James, Sirius, Remus, Lily, Udita; somewhat difficult for Elice and Renee but poor Peter was not able to transform the goblet in a proper rat. The goblet only had a tail and ears which represented a rat.

After their practicals they were having their theory paper.

"Ah it was an easy paper. I knew all the questions," James said delighted with his performance.
"Yeah it was not worth all the revision done by us," Sirius said while looking at Lily pointedly.

"You are acting as though Professor McGonagall would have asked you before making a tough paper. I believe prevention is always better," Lily said sounding a bit hurt.

Soon her mood was lightened by James and Sirius who were telling jokes to Lily to make her laugh.
The first years ate their lunch in a hurry so they can revise for the next paper which was History of Magic.

Please tell if you like it or what can be done to make it better.

good... except all ur talking about is the exams would be better if u had something to do with james and lily (dont be angry at me i know i should be writing but i just to busy) but othere than that i think its great :d

I like it! Really - I do. I love James and Lily together!

More romance dude lol. otherwise i love it. but hes right about the exams thing.

Just wait till the exams finish. And see what happens in the holidays and their second year. I thought that first year was still young for too much romance. 😐
Still Thanks for your ideas.

yea true but just give some clues then you have to do the meaness btw them b/c of snape and all that. Then james gets all show offy and all that jazz. It would be kool for you to do like the scene that was in the 5th book snapes worst memory. but thats like forever from now.

plz post more soon im still waiting i get bored when im on here and just waiting for sumone to post sumthing on my story or on their own.
p.s. my story is harry/ginny hermione/ron it rox ur sox you should check it out everyone should!

Nah, I think you should go about the story in your own way. Don't restrict yourself to what the real books say. Pave your own path with this story and do what you want. It'll be so much more original.

original stories are the best!

Here is the next part.

"James we are having our theory paper of Defence against the dark arts in an hour. Instead of revising you are staring at me," Lily said clearly frustrated.
James had been staring at her from last 15 minutes. This was simply too much for Lily.
James flushed. He had been thinking about Lily. He did not know that he was staring at her. He was thinking what would have happened if Lily not only knew the intensity, the deepness of his feelings but would also have reciprocated them.

"James! Enough! You are making me feel sick" Lily said.

What am I doing? Was I staring at her again? God save me.

Soon the bell rang and they were off to answer their exams. First was theory and then practical.

Sorry have to leave. Study for the stupid exams.actually I had my social science paper today. So I wanted a break.
I know this is not much (especially romance) but I am trying to improve. Moreover I am also working on a story about Harry's 7th year-'Harry Potter and the four horcruxes'.

OMG that was awesome!!!Definately improvment. I just wanted to see some and thats perfect only because i didnt know if James started to like Lily in his first year or not but why wait! That was so good.

According to what Kaz larner had written Jamess had started liking her from their Ist year.
Although I admit that I wanted to start their attraction towards each other in their 4th or 5th year as 1st year is too young for a real love even for James. Rather James. From HP books we have come to know that James and Sirius were both very handsome and they always dated a new girl every month or every week in Sirius' case.
But I am enjoying writing this story.