Star Wars Versus StoryTime!

Here is some more of the story of my version of right after TUF and leading up to 7 8 and 9.

Luke telling about Revan visiting him and giving him a holocron. Luke is having a meeting with some of the Jedi. He is telling them about the visit from Revan.

It was two minths to the day after Revan had visited him. Luke had been hesisantent to share his meeting with Revan to everyone else. Finially he decided that everyone needed to know what had happpened. Some people had wondered how he got the nasty bruises, but no one asked him about it. They figured he would tell them if they needed to know.
He asked the more capable Jedi to come to a meeting in a room in this one part of the Temple that was not often used. He asked his Wife, Mara, one of his first students who was very capable at some more exotic techniques, Corran Horn, one of his most powerful students, Kyp Durron, a combat instructor, Kyle Katarn, and his Sister Leia, who had restarted learning the ways of the Jedi. When they all had gathered Luke began.
Luke, “Two months ago, I was visited by a force ghost.”
They all looked surprised to hear this, Leia the most, because Luke had told them about Obi-wan telling him they would no longer be able to come back.
Leia, “But how did this happen, I thought they were no longer able to return.”
Luke, “I don’t know many of the details, but I was told something about their “reunition” in the force. It get stranger still. He was able to visit in a corpereal form.The bruises that I had were a result of a sparring match with the one who visited me.”
Kyle, “Who in the galaxy managed to do that to you. I’d figured you had gotten Mara angry.”
Mara sent a menacing, but playful glare at Kyle.
Leia, “So it wasn’t Obi-wan who visited you?”
Luke, “No, it was someone from several thousand years ago.”
Kyle, “It wasn’t Ragnos was it?” Kyle looked startled.
Luke, “No, don’t worry, it wasn’t him. It was someone called Revan. He is from about four thousand years ago.”
Kyp, “I bet I could take him.” Kyp said playfully.
Corran, “Don’t count on it. No offense, but anyone who could do that to Luke would kill you.”

Luke, “He wasn’t here to kill though. He did win our match though and at first I didn’t know he wasn’t trying to kill. When he attacked me I went as hard as I could.

Everyone in the room went silent. Could it be. Was it possible for there to be someone more powerful than Luke out there. It was silent in the room for over a minute. Kyp was the first to talk.
Kyp, “But how did Revan beat you. You have to be way to good for a four thousand year old ghost.”
Luke, “Revan had extreme power. I am pretty sure he didn’t even try his hardest against me. He said that something is coming. I know that we need to prepare ourselves for whatever it is.”
Mara, “Another fight. This shouldn’t be happening. We just fought the Vong. Why must we go through more war.”
Corran, “Lets not assume from the start that this will end in conflict.”
Mara, “You know it will.”
Leia, “Then it is our destiny. We must fight. We must make the galaxy a better place for our children and our children’s children.”

Kyp, “What is this new thing.”
Luke, “None of this is known for sure, but many of the Jedi in the force believe that a New Chosen One is coming.”
Kyle, “A New One? I thought that your Father was the only one.”
Luke, “I thought that also until I met Revan. He said that he was one of them. That there have been many of them throughout history. He said that my Father had the most potential.”
Corran, “Well these guys are supposed to help, so I don’t see what the problem is.”
Luke, “Revan didn’t say, but I am certain that he was holding back a lot of what he knows.”
Kyp, “Well what are we supposed to do to prepare then?”
Luke, “We overall need to grow in the force, especialy in lightsaber combat. Apparently we are very far behind the old Jedi in this reguard. All of you need to egin learining this.”
Luke handed them are datapad that had information he recorded fromthe holocron about form one in it.
Luke, “We need to teach as much of ther Order this lighsaber form. It is called form one. It is the most basic to start of all of the form. In a few months, once you know the form better, begin introducing it to the other students. Mara, you already know much of this form from your time as the Emperors Hand. I would like you to begin teaching it to these people as soon as you can.”
Luke handed her a peice of paper with the following names on it. Jaina Solo,
Dorsk, Jaden Korr, and Saba Sebytne.
Mara, “Will do. Is that all?”
Luke, “For the moment yes, but we will meet again in a few months when I know more about what we are supposed to do.”
Without another word, they all left the room and returned to their jobs at the Academy.

Originally posted by Darth_Glentract
How about Ragnos instead. He is still alive as a spirit right?

Here are some more idea’s. Please tell me how you like them.

•Kyp during his exile finds many traces and legends about Ancient Sith. He discovers much about Adjunta Pall through a journal Adjunta wrote. It was all in Ancient Sith of course, but Kyp was able to translate it over the course of many months. He later learned something that is very important, but I don’t know what it is yet.

•Tahiri was killed by Corran Horn when her Yuuzhan Vong/Human mind decayed over time and she ran through the streets killing people. She then attacked Corran and was killed during the fight.

*Yuuzhan Vong student is Nom Anor’s son. Nohg Anor becomes very powerful and Revan realizes that there a two “Chosen One’s” alive at the same time. Luke is brokken up about having to fight his own son and won’t attack him. He defends, but Ben with all of his Sith Artifacts, is eventually able to hit him. Nohg sacrifiaces himself in a fight with Ben and holds Ben off until Mara is able to get over there with her ship and take Luke off planet.

Have not read your second part that you posted but here are my comments...

First, please dont feel like you have to change it just cause I post some constructive criticism. It is your story and this is just my opinion..

That said, I like the three bullets you posted in the quote above. I am not sure what the relationship between Corran and Tahiri is... Dont really remember much about that story line but if there is a connection between the two then I think you should play out his sorrow in her death and how hard it was to kill her. Maybe have him become a hermit for a while or something depending on the depth of their relationship.

Since Kyp has tasted the dark side with his little Sun Crusher temper tantrum you should play out his conflict about the info abou the sith that he is discovering.

About the chosen one... I think you should uncover some sort of negative truth about the chosen one. I never liked that crap to begin with... And after Lucas basically told everyone that it was either Palpentines old master or Palp himself that used the force to create life (Anakin) I think that kind of blows any "chosen one" legend out of the story... You should make the "Chosen One" be something completely different than what everyone thought it should be. Just like Yoda hinted about the legends being read wrong... Have it be something completely unexpected...

Originally posted by Darth_Glentract
Here is some more of the story of my version of right after TUF and leading up to 7 8 and 9.

Luke telling about Revan visiting him and giving him a holocron. Luke is having a meeting with some of the Jedi. He is telling them about the visit from Revan...

...Without another word, they all left the room and returned to their jobs at the Academy.

Okay... I like this... This is pretty good. I am guessing that this is just a draft of the dialog.?. Its not bad but could be refined more and include more detail... but I like how you put it together.

This was the second story I have written(or atleast began to write). It is about Boba Fett. Still a wrok in progress. Probably my longest story so far except for the one I’m writing right now might eclipse it soon. Tell me how you like this please.

Boba Fett. Clone, and son, of Jango Fett. Once the most feared bounty hunter in the galaxy. His father was killed when he was ten. His father had hidden several messages around the galaxy. In ROTJ, he fell into the sarlacc. He escaped and was nursed back to health by fellow bounty hunter Dengar. He found the first message nine years after ROTJ. In the message, his father revealed that He, Jango Fett, was Mandalore, leader of the Mandalorians. He passed this title to Boba when he died. He learned that the mythological Mandalorian Clans still existed in the galaxy, though they were no longer united.
Boba asked the message what he should do next. Should he reunite the Mandalorian Clans? Should he give up his position as Mandalore to some other Mandalorian who actually lived with the Mandalorian Clans? Jango’s image said, “No, don’t step down from your position. There is none as capable as you. And do not reunite the Clans until after the war between the Empire and the Rebellion is over, or at least when it has settled down a lot.”
Boba asked his father’s image, “How do you know of these things. These things of which you speak all happened over a decade after you died.” Jango smiled and replied, “I trained for some time with Echani Generals. They, like the Mandalorian Clans, still exist in some places. In the message was also the locations of several planets with Mandalorian Clans on them. This list of planets included Dxun, which was where the Clan Ordo had been located several thousand years earlier by one of the greatest Mandalores in history. Clan Ordo was the most powerful of all the remaining Clans. They were one of the few Clans that still had their weapons, armor, and even two Basilisk droids. If he could get the Ordo Clan to support him, many others would follow suit. Boba also learned that this is his Clan. All the Fetts have been from there, including Jango and Cassus Fett. This may sound like an easy task, but there is a problem. The Clan has gone into a civil war. Boba decided to set out for Dxun as soon as possible and watch the rest of the recording on his way. He now had four days to learn.
Jango showed Boba a few moves. Some of them were really helpful. He also learned a lot of the Mandalorian laws. One thing he learned was that before the Clan would follow him, he would have to defeat their Champion in one-on-one combat. He would also have to fight by the terms of the Champion. The rules were pretty much the same as the battle circle, except it would be to the death if that was chosen by the Champion.
Anyone had reason to be scared. He was after all flying onto the middle of a war zone between people who turn continents in to glass for fun. But he was ready. His entire life had been preparation. He knew he was ready to take his throne as Mandalore again. He is the most feared bounty hunter in the galaxy. He is the one who fought Luke Skywalker, the son of Vader, and survived. He is the Son of Jango Fett.
When he arrived at Dxun, the planet was ablaze. Entire square miles of land had been turned into glass. When he first looked upon it, for a moment, he was scarred, but he quickly became focused again. His Slave transport descended through the atmosphere. It was at about forty thousand feet in the air that the welcoming party arrived and began shooting. It was two ships that Boba couldn’t name. He accelerated so fast that the inertial compensators lagged a little and he was pushed back in his seat. He shot past his adversaries and dropped a concussion missile at one of them ending him quickly. Now one -on-one Boba switched back to lasers. He jerked to the left to doge an incoming shot. It missed him by far, he is the better pilot. He fired four shots at his target with his twin forward lasers. Two of the shots hit and the Mandalorian’s shields were down. He flew past his target, swung around and another two lasers finished him.
He continued towards the landing area he had chosen from orbit. It was a small clearing about five miles from where the fighting was fiercest. It would also blend in more with the surrounding area because what looked like a ship had apparently crashed there and looked as though it had been there for some time, meaning it had probably been logged, and a ship there hopefully wouldn’t stand out as much to a passing scout.
He was a few hundred feet from landing when a anti-air trooper apparently saw him and began firing. Boba subconsciously wondered why these guys were shooting him without knowing who he is. At least he didn’t think they would know who he is because if they did, he didn’t think they would be trying to kill him. An AA round exploded near him, but he finished the trooper before he could report to the others.
Boba landed without futher incident and spent about five minutes getting his jetpack on and checking that his blasters were charged and he had plenty of extra power cells. He guessed that with his jetpack, he could make it through to the command area in about ten minutes. All of the tress would slow him down a lot.
He first encountered a small group of Mandalorian recruits about two minutes in. He brought one of his many blaster pistols to bear on the target and fired three consecutive shots his target. All of them his square in the chest. Five more to go. Now that he had some time to think about it, he realized one of them was actually a full trooper. They were above recruits rank-wise, ,and wore a heavy armor. He decided to put the legends about Mandalorian armor to the test. He brought two heavy pistols to bear on his target and fired two shots from each gun. At a range of one hundred and ten feet, all of the shots did little more than scratch the armor. He flew in closer and dispatched another two recruits with his heavy blasters, wanting to save his rifle ammo for the heavy armored Mandalorians. He knew how to fight these guys, Jango had taught him that, and he was capable of doing it. He tossed a grenade at one of the recruits and killed the other with a short burst from his wrist mounted flame thrower. He was dodging shots the entire time that he was doing this, but had little difficulty with the help of his jetpack.
The troop that was left was shooting at his with a heavy rifle that could blow holes in the surrounding tress a foot deep. Boba put his rifle on rapid fire and pulled of a second long burst at the Mandalorian. Even Mandalorian armor of this grade couldn’t withstand that many shots from Boba’s customized rifle. After finishing the Mandalorian scouts he went on toward the command area of this place. He made it to there untroubled, but the trooper at the front wouldn’t let him in. They were going to have to fight.
He was a big guy, a Sargent from the look of his armor. He had some big guns and armor heavier than some light vehicles. The Sargent attacked first sending three blaster bolts at Boba who ducked, rolled, and fired a shot from one of his heavy blasters at his attacker. The blots contacted his leg, but the armor was only lightly scratched. It was obvious to Boba that his blasters wouldn’t work so he pulled out a heavy repeating rifle that could put out four shots per second. The Sargent kept dodging the blaster bolts, a feat many people would not have thought possible, especially in that heavy armor. Boba flew in and flamed the Mandalorian with his wrist mounted flame thrower, but it only melted the surface layer. He decided that he should fly right above the Mandalorian and see that is he was at real close ranges the pistol might go through. He flew right over the guy, but six shots from a heavy pistol capably of doing more damage than most blaster rifle’s could couldn’t go through. He flew away from the Mandalorian to about a hundred meters and then turned around and plunged at the guy at high speed, ripping of his helmet and directly afterwards shooting a kyber dart at his exposed face.
He felt the rush of victory take over him but he knew that, that fight wasn’t the last he would have to fight to reclaim his position as Mandalore. He preceded into the main area without further incident. He saw the two fake Mandalore’s having their troops fight in the battle circle. Boba was actually angered when he saw them. It was his title, he would reclaim it.
Boba knew that when that when one side gained enough honor, the other Mandalorians would follow them. Or at least some should. The fighting outside will probably continue for weeks even if the war ends.
He would just have to get enough honor. He walked up to the Mandalores and said, “I am Mandalore. Son of Your former Mandalore, Jango Fett. I do not appreciate either of you trying to take my position in my absence. What will you say for yourselves?”
Mandalore to the right, “ I do not believe your claims and will make you pay for them. Jango left years ago, why would you return now?”
Boba Fett, “Because he left to kill Jedi. I doubt any of you would stand against even some of the weakest Jedi he fought and killed. I will also remind you that he was the template for the Clone Army of the Republic. When he died he passed his title to me”
Mandalore to the right, “How did he die?”
Boba, “It was in combat. He fought against who some believe to be the strongest Jedi. Mace Windu. Mace was so powerful, he was able to beat Emperor Palpatine even when Palpatine was at his strongest. In one-on-one though, he was defeated.”
Mandalore to the right, “I am glad to hear that his death happened in that way. Any other would have been unworthy of such a powerful Mandalore.”

Mandalore to the left, “I have not seen you fight. I do not think you are worthy of being Mandalore. I doubt you claim to be Jango Fett’s Son.”
Boba Fett, “I will fight you. What are you terms?”
Mandalore to the right, “You will fight both of us at the same time. There will be no restrictions, other than the most important rule in the fight circle, no killing. I do no you must be at least somewhat capable of a fighter because you made it through the fighting outside. You also killed the door guard, who was pretty capable.”
Mandalore to the left, “I agree to those terms.”
Boba, “ What will keep our weapons from killing?”
Mandalore to the right, “An energy suppressor will be activated. We also have plenty of onsite med-kits. It will not weaken you weapons against armor, just places where armor has been destroyed.”
Mandalore to the left, “Let us begin.”
Boba didn’t wait. He used his jetpack and flew to about eight feet from his opponents. He raised his rifle and fired. At this range, his gun barely scratched their armors. The Mandalores had heavy rifles. Boba saw the one on the right was a much better fighter. He wondered how the other had stood against him. He was probably a really good leader or something. He would take the one on the left out first. He flew at him with his jetpack at over two hundred miles per hour. The inertial dampeners in his armor where obviously much better than the ones in the Mandalores. Boba was relatively un-hurt, but the Mandalore was very dazed. The Mandalore to the right fired eight shots in his direction. Boba dodged every shot and fired back when his heavy blaster pistol. This time, at the closer range, it left some carbonization marks. He them emptied his power cell in a rapid burst from his pistol at the Mandalore who had been on the left. He switched power cells. And flew up two about a hundred feet.
He tossed three grenades at the Mandalores, who fired about forty blaster bolts at him. He was hit twice in the legs, but his armor held. He was dripping in sweat now. He needed to think of a plan to get these guys. There looked to be no way to hurt them enough. His grenade has just left burn marks on their armors. Then, a plan came to him.
He flew down and used his wrist cable and wrapped it around the left Mandalores legs. He then flew us to about three hundred feet and then dropped him. He really helped the fall wouldn’t kill the guy, the less dead Mandalorians, the better.
Luckily for the left Mandalore, his inertial dampeners kicked in and saved his life, but he was knock unconscious, because his dampeners had been damaged before this fight in an earlier one.
There was only one of the Mandalorians left. Boba fired upon this one while the Mandalorian fired back. Boba fired a rocket from his wrist launcher. It knocked the Mandalorian a few feet back. Before he could even get up, Boba was hovering above him. Boba switched his rifle to rapid fire and put four second burst out.
The Mandalorian wasn’t out yet though, and he picked up his gun and managed to hit Boba in the chest twice before Boba hit him with another rocket that knocked out the Mandalorian.
Boba lowered him self to the ground and yelled out a Mandalorian war cry. All of the surrounding Mandalorians followed their new leader and yelled as well. The Clan Ordo, was reunited under one banner. His banner.

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The Ordo Clan spent the next few years building up there forces. They knew that a war was coming. They knew that they had to be ready or they would be destroyed. The Mandalore who had been on the left was named Xurga, a common name in Mandalorian society, and the one on the right was named Kelborn, or at least that was his honor name. It was given to him by Jango when he became the Champion of the battle circle.
There was one Kelborn about four thousand years earlier. The Kelborn from long ago was around during the Mandalorian Wars. He was one of the survivors of Malacor V. He single handedly killed six Jedi and destroyed a Republic Cruiser during the battle. His name was later decided to be an honor name given to some of the best Mandalorians and was a great honor to receive it.
When Boba took over the Mandalorian Base on Dxun there was only seventeen Mandalorians there. Half of them were recruits and the Mandalorians had been growing weaker over time. Before the Civil War there, there had been twenty-nine. The Mandalorians it seemed would go down not in a magnificent battle, but die a whisper so faint the most caring ears wouldn’t hear it.
With Boba Fett as Mandalore, thing would change. He ordered eight of his troops to go find possible people to recruit into their ranks. Boba hoped for them to find at least one person good enough to be trained as a Mandalorian per month. He would never let their quality be lessened though and so they usually got about five per month.
Dxun was a large world with many resources that were untapped. Thus began the construction of large construction yards. There was a guide written by a Mandalore four thousand years earlier, this Mandalore was actually there when the Kelborn that had his named forever honored by Mandalorians had been on Dxun. He had put in there the location of several underground storehouses full of tons of things that they could use.
They found another seven Basilisk War Droids in one of them, bring their total up to nine now. They also found the proper technical readouts for building more Basilisk War Droids and droids that could make them. When they made they got the droids running, they were able to make six per month.
War Droids weren’t the only things that they found in the caches. They found forty sets of Mandalorian Combat Armor, fifteen sets of Mandalorian Heavy Battle Armor, and five sets of Assault armor. The regular troopers wear the Combat Armor, the Sargents wear the Heavy Battle Armor, and the Captains wear the Assault Armor. Like in the Basilisk Cache, there was technical specifications for making more of the Armor and there was the droids to make it.
There were hundreds of these Caches all over Dxun, but Boba only decided to open three of them. The rest could be used later, or be backups if the Mandalorians were ever restarted like they were being now.
In the third caches was a large power generator, three hundred and forty Mandalorian Assault Rifles, thirty Mandalorian “Rippers”, three hundred Mandalorian pistol, one hundred Mandalorian heavy pistol, six hundred mines, and four-hundred cortosis-weave vibro-blades.
Now they could focus their energy outwards towards the rest of the galaxy. It took them a month to get all of this equipment ready and there was now twenty-two of them all together, fifteen on site because of the eight recruiting. Boba decided to send ten of them out as bounty hunters to hone their skills and make money. Sure the jungles of Dxun provided more than enough to fight, but they were also going to reestablish the Mandalorian reputation in the galaxy.

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Boba left Xurga in charge of the encampment and brought Kelborn with him to Tatooine where there was another Mandalorian Clan. He was hoping to get at least fifteen Mandalorians from this place and bring them back to Dxun. They simply weren’t going to get enough troops through the recruiting process they had right then.
It was a two day trip in the Slave Two and they had an uneventful trip. They arrived there late at night and chose to land on the outskirts to avoid drawing a lot of attention. The second the left the ship Boba knew something was wrong. He couldn’t tell what, but he knew there was something wrong.
They had the map to the encampment and it was about three hours from where they were, but the chance to walk around was welcome.
Boba told Kelborn that he wanted to go check something out and gave the map to him and told him to continue ahead. Kelborn would be the first to meet this knew Clan and hopefully they wouldn’t get violent. If they did though, Boba wouldn’t be surprised if Kelborn managed to kill them all by himself.
He flew for about ten minutes on his jetpack and then he saw it.

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The Sarlacc. He was now out for revenge. It was time for that stupid thing to die. He hovered over it and “accidently” dropped a full grenade sack. Ten Grenades in the belly doesn’t help with digestion. He then took out his heaviest rifle, put it on full automatic and pumped several thousand shots into it. He then flew in with a vibrosword and cut off it’s beak. Almost none of the Sarlacc was left when he was done. It was almost completely vaporized. The Sarlacc died.

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Boba, now reinvigorated by his revenge, flew towards where he guessed Kelborn would be by now and flew there at top speed. It took him a few minutes to get there , and Kelborn was close to where he guessed. He decided to set down and change out blaster packs for guns and stuff like that.
Kelborn, “Where have you been?”
Boba, “Out doing a few errands. The Sarlacc it dead.”
Kelborn, “Haaaahahahahahaaha! That’s the thing that ate you right?”
Boba, “Yes it is. But won’t be eating anyone else.”
Boba suddenly stopped walking.
Kelborn, “What is it?”
Boba, “Krayt Dragon ahead.”
Kelborn, “Looks like we’re going to get a warmup.”
Boba, “Yes I think we are. And Krayt pearls also make nice trophies. Come on.”
They broke into a sprint and ran towards the Dragon. It wasn’t a huge one, but is was still very deadly, to a non-mandalorian that is.
Kelborn, “You fly in around to the back of it’s head and I’ll distract it from the front.”
Boba, “Copy that.”
Kelborn brought his heavy rifle to bear and started hacking away at it. The shots had to hit the same place a few times before they started to take effect, but when they did the Dragon was not happy. He ran towards Kelborn fast, but Boba brought out a flame thrower and distracted it. Boba was shooting it in the face to try and keep all of the air away from it. Krayt were large beast not capable of holding their breath for very long and after about thirty seconds it was dead.
Boba, “Since I made the kill, you get to retrieve the crystal.”
Kelborn, “Fine, I’ll do it.”
Kelborn pulled out a vibrosword and got the crystal in less than five minutes. It was a big pearl and would do nicely in a trophy room. After a few minutes of looking at it. They continued on and Boba decided to give Kelborn a lift so they could get their faster. It wasn’t particularly comfortably for Kelborn though because he had a wrist cable around his legs and was hanging upside down for a good ten minutes.
Boba set down about five hundred feet from the encampment and they walked the rest of the way.
Boba went in first and introduced himself. The Mandalorians here were all Sergeants or below but they were all at least troopers.
Boba, “I am Mandalore. I have come here to bring some of you back to Dxun and Reunite the Clans under one banner.”
Captain, “I am not convinced that you are who you say you are.”
Boba didn’t want to have to kill anybody so he tried to think of an alternative. After a second he got it,
Boba, “I have hear a fresh Krayt Dragon Pearl. Me and my companion recently killed a Dragon on our way here. I trust this is proof enough.”
Captain, “Killing a Krayt Dragon is no small task. We will follow you, but we wish to stay here. We can do plenty of things from here though.”
Boba, “Well, the main thing we need now is troops and credits. How many of you are there here?”
Captain, “There are fifteen of us including myself.”
Boba, “Then I want five of you seeking out new troops and I want another five of you working as bounty hunters for the local Hutts. If they try to give you any trouble just tell them I sent you. I want the rest of you to take over some of the surrounding moisture vaporators. Just the abandoned ones though, we don’t want to attract any attention. I do want you to try and drive the price of water here up though, but don’t kill anyone doing it. And I want you to take over this Sand People encampment. There are about a hundred of them in their but they shouldn’t be much of a problem. I have great plans for this place, but they will take time and dedication to carry out.”
Captain, “It will be done Mandalore. Is there anything else?”

Boba, “Yes. I want you to take over the Bomarr Temple. It is what used to be Jabba’s Palace before he died.Make money in anyway that you can here. Kelborn and I will be heading over to Mos Eisly in a while and will destroy the main water tanks. That should really drive up the prices. I need you to take as much water from the surrounding area, but don’t destroy the tanks, we want to be able to take money from here more than once.

Kelborn, “Won’t the people just leave here until the water is back. It would probably be cheaper.”
Boba, “We’re going to disable the hanger and some of the ships. If this goes as planned, we could have an extra hundred thousand credits within twenty-four hours.”
Captain, “Hundred Thousand you say? Seems like a lot,”
Boba, “People like to live and they need water to do it.”
Captain, “Good point.”
Kelborn, “We should head out Mandalore.”

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Disabling the ships was very easy and it took them less than fifteen minutes. Security did show up at one pint, but they weren’t there for long. Boba actually decided to steal water directly from the main tank. This was harder than disabling the ships, but not a whole lot harder. Security on Tatooine is light to none and isn’t a challenge for a real warrior.
At dawn the next day they blew up the main water tank. They also destroyed all of the vaporators in the city to keep their monopoly over the city. They also set a fire to one of the small buildings. A fire caused panic which wasted water. The less water in the city, the better for them. It took about six hours for the water to short and everyone freaked out. People tried running to their ships, but they had all been disabled.
Kelborn came up with a great plan to significantly drive up the prices. Because Tatooine is a desert planet it loses it’s heat very quickly. Therefor they have heaters on almost every building. They began enabling the heaters and making them stay on forcing everyone outside into the heat.
It took a while for word to spread that there was water somewhere. When it really got around though, they were making tens of thousands an hour. After a couple of hours the croud began to get ideas about killing Boba and his comrades and sharing the waters among themselves. Boba just pulled out some of his weapons and that was quited real fast.
About mid-day the next day they began packing up. They also used a remote to disable all of the modifications they had made to the buildings and moisture vaporators. The ships were also shortly working again. Boba and his comrades then left with an extra several hundred thousand credits. They had made a lot of enemies, but his father had always told him, “money is power”, and Boba held true to that fact.
He then returned to Dxun and continued doing what was necessary to bring the glory of the Mandalorians about once again. This would be his task for the next several years.

Im making a story. Well, you could say Im making episodes 7,8 and 9. I've started on episode 7, its called The Empire a New. It features some of my made up characters and mentions alot of the ancient sith. The non-made up characters in it are Luke, Han Solo and the gang, The droids, Leia, Bobafett (Lucas said he escaped the Sarlacc pit, I'll explain all that later on this thread and my story), and Sidious' spirit.

The Bounty Hunter Files

Bobafett
A faceless enforcer, Boba Fett's distinctive Mandalorian armor strikes fear in the hearts of fugitives. He is a legendary bounty hunter, accepting warrants from both the Empire and the criminal underworld. He is all business, laconic, and deadly.
Fett has carefully guarded his past, cultivating a curtain of mystery around his origins. He is in truth a clone, an exact genetic replica of his highly skilled "father," Jango Fett. From Jango, Boba learned valuable survival and martial skills, and even as a child he was proficient with a blaster or laser cannon.
Fett was raised in isolation in the hermetic cities of Kamino, where he was protected not only from the ceaseless storms, but also the harsher elements of his father's career. Young Boba's life changed when a tenacious Jedi Knight, Obi-wan Kenobi, came looking for his father. Sent to apprehend the bounty hunter for the attempted assassination of a Naboo Senator, Kenobi brawled with Jango as the Fetts sought to escape from Kamino. Young Boba helped his father by pinning the Jedi down with explosive laser fire from the Fett starship, Slave 1.
Fleeing from Kamino, the Fetts journeyed to Geonosis, where Jango's benefactor resided. Boba watched as his father's enemies were sentenced to death, but Jedi prove very hard to kill. A huge battle erupted as Jedi reinforcements stormed Geonosis to free their fellow Jedi. Jango entered the fray, only to be killed by Jedi Master Mace Windu. Boba was shocked to witness his father's swift death, and he quietly cradled Jango's empty helmet as Geonosis erupted into all-out war.

During the time of the Empire, Boba Fett emerged as the preeminent bounty hunter of the galaxy. Boba Fett's armor, like his father's, is a battered weapon-covered spacesuit equipped with a rocketpack. His gauntlets contain a flamethrower, and a whipcord lanyard launcher. His kneepads conceal rocket dart launchers. Several ominous braids hang from his shoulder -- trophies from fallen prey -- that underscore this hunter's lethality.
Shortly after the Battle of Hoth, Darth Vader desperately wanted to capture the fugitive Rebel craft, the Millenium Falcon. To that end, he hired a motley assortment of bounty hunters, including the legendary Fett. Vader specifically pointed out to Fett that the Falcon's passengers were to be taken alive. "No disintegrations," rumbled the Dark Lord, obviously familiar with Fett's reputation.
It was Fett who successfully tracked the Falcon from Hoth to Bespin. Arriving at the gas giant before the Falcon, Fett and Vader sprung a trap on the ship's hapless crew. Fett, a shrewd negotiator, received his bounty for capturing the crew, but also was given custody of Han Solo. The bounty hunter was set to collect the reward on Solo's head placed there by the vile gangster Jabba the Hutt.
Whisking the carbonite-frozen form of Han Solo away from Bespin, Fett eventually arrived on Tatooine aboard his starship, the Slave I. Fett delivered Solo to Jabba, his some-time employer, and was many thousands of credits richer. Fett stayed at Jabba's palace, and was present when Solo's friends attempted to rescue the carbon-frozen smuggler.
Jabba, enraged at the attempted prison break, brought his captives out to the Tatooine desert, to execute them in the Great Pit of Carkoon. In the sandpit lay the immense Sarlacc, a vile creature that would digest its prey over thousands of years. Rather than let themselves be thrown in the Sarlacc's maw, Solo's friends, led by Luke Skywalker fought against their captors. In the chaos that followed, Fett entered the fray.
Solo, free of the carbonite and suffering blindness from hibernation sickness, wildly swung a vibro-axe into an inattentive Fett's rocketpack. The pack activated, and the bounty hunter soared into the air, out of control. The airborne Fett slammed into the side of Jabba's sail barge before tumbling into the Sarlacc's mouth. With a sickly belch from the desert creature, it seemed as if Fett's career as the galaxy's most notorious bounty hunter was brought to an end, or so they thought.
After Jabba's fight, Fett escaped from the Sarlacc pit and tracked down Han Solo. Fett managed to knock out Chewbecca and easily through Lando into a pillar. Solo could do nothing except pull out his blaster but unfortunetly, Boba yanked it out of his grip using his grapple. Just before Boba Fett was going to burn Han with his flame thrower, Luke came and threatned him with his light saber untill the hit man was forced back and flew away in the Slave 1.
Ever since, Boba Fett and Han Solo have been life long rivals and will stop at nothing untill onof them have the satifaction of their enemies' death.

obviously familiar with Fett's reputation.
It was Fett who successfully tracked the Falcon from Hoth to Bespin. Arriving at the gas giant before the Falcon, Fett and Vader sprung a trap on the ship's hapless crew. Fett, a shrewd negotiator, received his bounty for capturing the crew, but also was given custody of Han Solo. The bounty hunter was set to collect the reward on Solo's head placed there by the vile gangster Jabba the Hutt.
Whisking the carbonite-frozen form of Han Solo away from Bespin, Fett eventually arrived on Tatooine aboard his starship, the Slave I. Fett delivered Solo to Jabba, his some-time employer, and was many thousands of credits richer. Fett stayed at Jabba's palace, and was present when Solo's friends attempted to rescue the carbon-frozen smuggler.
Jabba, enraged at the attempted prison break, brought his captives out to the Tatooine desert, to execute them in the Great Pit of Carkoon. In the sandpit lay the immense Sarlacc, a vile creature that would digest its prey over thousands of years. Rather than let themselves be thrown in the Sarlacc's maw, Solo's friends, led by Luke Skywalker fought against their captors. In the chaos that followed, Fett entered the fray.
Solo, free of the carbonite and suffering blindness from hibernation sickness, wildly swung a vibro-axe into an inattentive Fett's rocketpack. The pack activated, and the bounty hunter soared into the air, out of control. The airborne Fett slammed into the side of Jabba's sail barge before tumbling into the Sarlacc's mouth. With a sickly belch from the desert creature, it seemed as if Fett's career as the galaxy's most notorious bounty hunter was brought to an end, or so they thought.
After Jabba's fight, Fett escaped from the Sarlacc pit and tracked down Han Solo. Fett managed to knock out Chewbecca and easily through Lando into a pillar. Solo could do nothing except pull out his blaster but unfortunetly, Boba yanked it out of his grip using his grapple. Just before Boba Fett was going to burn Han with his flame thrower, Luke came and threatned him with his light saber untill the hit man was forced back and flew away in the Slave 1.
Ever since, Boba Fett and Han Solo have been life long rivals and will stop at nothing untill onof them have the satifaction of their enemies'

death.

Bossk
"Bounty hunters. We don't need that scum," was a sentiment quietly expressed by Admiral Piett when Lord Vader recruited a group of six elite hunters to track down the Millenium Falcon.
Piett thought he was out of earshot, but the disparagement was still heard by Bossk, a towering reptilian humanoid and skilled predator. Though Boba Fett ultimately bested the other hunters and collected Han Solo's bounty, Bossk is nonetheless a fearsome and heavily armed tracker.
Bossk's vehicle, the Hound's Tooth, has served this brutish Trandoshan well even though it was destroyed after trying to kill the compotition.
Bossk returnd to his planet shortly after the Han Solo bounty and even found himself a mate.

IG-88
Much of the anti-droid sentiment existing in the galaxy is unwarranted bigotry, but even pro-droid activists will find it hard to defend the rights of droids bearing arms. The memory of droid armies is still fresh in many minds, and the legions of mechanized troops used by the Trade Federation and other corporate interests paved the way for legislation that eventually did away with the soulless infantry.
Relics from that era still exist, such as the battered chrome war droid known as IG-88. The tall, cylinder-headed and heavily-armed mechanical bounty hunter responded to Darth Vader's call to capture the the Millenium Falcon during the events surrounding the battle of Hoth.
IG-88's vehicle, the IG-2000 was the contraption used by the soulless droid to track down Solo. Unfortunetly, it was destroyed by Boba Fett in attempt to kill the faceless hit man. This action cost IG-88 his artificial life.

Dengar
Eluding the Imperial starfleet after the Battle of Hoth, the Millenium Falcon and her crew demanded the personal attention of Darth Vader. Disgusted with the fleet's inability to capture a single smuggler vessel, Vader turned to the shadows of the Empire, the galaxy's fringe. He hired

six elite bounty hunters, offering a substantial reward for the capture of the Falcon. Answering the call was the grizzled human hunter known as Dengar.
Dengar was born in Corellia as was his vehicle, the Jumpmaster 5000. Very little is known about his origin or as a matter of fact, everything besides what he did in the fifth episode is unknown.

Durge
The bounty hunter known as Durge had weathered centuries of violence and warfare, emerging as a merciless and nearly unstoppable warrior driven by ancient vendettas. Though he identified himself as a bounty hunter, he held no guild allegiance, answered to no benefactor, and seemed to have no need of riches. He hunted for the pure sport of it, to feed an insatiable bloodlust that spanned literally hundreds of worlds and almost two thousand years.
When completely encased in his battered high impact armor, Durge's true alien heritage was obscured. Though humanoid in appearance, Durge was a Gen'Dai, a rare species with an unusually long lifespan -- some Gen'Dai reportedly have lived for over four thousand years.
The peculiar nervous and circulatory systems of the Gen'Dai makes them extremely resistant to physical injury. The Gen'Dai physiology boasts millions of nerve clusters throughout the body, and a vascular system that distributes blood without the need of a central heart. Lacking the vulnerable vital organs of most humanoids, a Gen'Dai could sustain multiple lacerations and even, it is rumored, complete dismemberment and yet still survive. In addition to these extremes of endurance, the distributed neural network gives the Gen'Dai phenomenal reflexes. Should a Gen'Dai sustain too many injuries, they are capable of entering into extended periods of hibernation, during which they can heal wounds, recover from disease, and slow the aging process.
With such formidable physical abilities, it is fortunate for the galaxy at large that the Gen'Dai are, by nature, not an aggressive species. They are nomadic, and their home world has been lost to the ages. Due to a low birthrate, the Gen'Dai are very rarely encountered, and they usually avoid confrontation if possible. Though the Gen'Dai are physically suited for long life, their minds weaken with age, and the species is susceptible to depression, hysteria, and other forms of psychosis.
The Gen'Dai that would become Durge was born two thousand years before the fall of the Republic, and was regarded by his elders as an exceptional physical specimen at a young age. A predilection for aggression, coupled by witnessing bounty hunters in action, forever

steered young Durge into a lifetime of violence. The lure of the blood trade drew Durge away from his tribe and into the rest of the galaxy. For centuries, he studied under the most experienced and dangerous bounty hunters he could find.
About a millennia before the Battle of Naboo, when the galaxy was wracked by warfare waged between the Jedi Knights and Sith Lords, Durge was in the employ of one of the few remaining Sith. In this time, he squared off against many a Jedi, learning their fighting techniques, and developing weaponry and combat tactics to counter their moves. When the Sith were finally wiped out at the Battle of Ruusan, Durge went into hiding to avoid Jedi reprisals. He adopted dozens of different aliases while continuing his career as a hunter, amassing a sizable fortune.
Nine hundred years later, Durge was hired to kill the leader of the Mandalorians. Though he succeeded, the Mandalorians struck back and managed and subdue Durge. Leave it to the Mandalorians to devise a means of restraining a Gen'Dai. They turned Durge's longevity against him, finding ways of inflicting pain throughout his scattered nerves. He was a victim of unspeakable torture, unable to die.
Durge was able to escape the Mandalorians, and retreated to parts unknown to hibernate and recover. It took nearly a century to undo the damage the Mandalorians wrought. Though his physical body had healed, Durge's already dangerous psyche was pushed further past the brink of sanity.
When Durge emerged from his slumber, he sought vengeance on the Mandalorians. He was cheated of his revenge as he learned they were all but extinct. He soon found purpose, though. He had awakened to a galaxy at war, a galaxy where the Jedi Knights led clone soldiers in battle against the automated troops of the Confederacy. The charismatic Count Dooku lured Durge into his ranks, and the ancient bounty hunter relished an ironic twist in his quest for retribution.
The Republic clones were cast from a Mandalorian genetic template. Though the galaxy may be bereft of true Mandalorians, their legacy lived on in the form of clone troopers. Durge would take great satisfaction in being able to kill legions of his sworn enemies.

In becoming Dooku's henchman, the bounty hunter was teamed up with Asajj Ventress, a Dark Jedi and commander within the Separatist military. The two were formidable adversaries for the Republic, and Durge took the lives of many Jedi with great zeal. Alongside Ventress, Durge unleashed a horrible chemical weapon attack on the Gungan colony moon of Ohma-D'un. The Jedi were shocked to discover Durge, a warrior like no other on an increasingly deadly battlefield. Durge and the threat of chemical weaons returned on the Separatist outpost of Queyta.
Durge was also dispatched to bolster the security of Muunilinst, the homeworld of the InterGalatic Banking Clan. He organized and led a droid army of IG lancer droids, creating an elite rapid deployment military force to protect this key world of the Confederacy.
Durge led his droid forces in defense of Muunilinst when a huge Republic taskforce attacked the planet. Durge's army inflicted great damage to the armored vehicles of the Republic army, but Durge was ultimately bested in one-on-one combat with General Obi-wan Kenobi.
In addition to Durge's frighteningly powerful physical abilities, he was a walking arsenal. He was proficient with ranged weapons like his twin blasters, melee weapons like a spiked flail, and thrown weapons like a set of energized bolas. Durge's heavy armor included wrist darts and forearm-mounted energy shields that let him parry lightsaber attacks for short periods of time. Durge often used an agile rocket pack as well as an extensively modified swoop speeder bike.

Jango Fett The name Fett carries with it a cold air of dread and competence. To those with the credits to hire him, it is synonymous with success. To those with reasons to fear, Fett means capture or death. The name and reputation are just two of the many things Boba inherited from his father, Jango. In the final years of the Republic, Jango Fett was regarded as the best bounty hunter in the galaxy.
A proficient marksman and unarmed combatant, Fett was covered in a sleek armored suit that concealed his scarred visage and strangely tattooed forearms. His combat gear featured an arsenal of weaponry, including retractable wrist blades, a snare, dual blaster pistols and other more exotic tools of the trade.
In combat, Jango used his harnessed jetpack to gain the advantage of speed and height over his enemies. The backpack also carried a nasty surprise -- an explosive rocket could be launched from it. For interstellar travel, Jango traveled aboard his well-worn starship, Slave 1.
About a decade prior to the outbreak of the Clone Wars, a man named Tyranus approached Jango on the moons of Bogden with an intriguing proposal. In exchange for a sizable fee, Jango would become the template of a clone army. Fett agreed, but with an unusual stipulation in his contract. In addition to his fee, he would be awarded an unaltered clone of himself. Unlike his other duplicates, this clone would not undergo growth acceleration or docility tampering. It would be a pure replica of Jango.
The Kaminoans provided Fett with private accommodations in their hermetic Tripoca City, and Jango dropped out of the bounty hunting limelight. He concentrated on teaching his son, the unaltered clone he named Boba, the ropes of survival and combat while the Kaminoans extracted genetic material to build thousands of clone soldiers.
While serving as Tyranus' enforcer, Jango was approached by Viceroy Nute Gunray of the Trade Federation. Gunray wanted to eliminate Senator Padme Amidala, who had long been a thorn in the Viceroy's side. Fett subcontracted the job to an assassin named Zam Wesell, and armed her with poisonous kouhuns to finish the job.

A pair of meddling Jedi got in the way of the hit, and Jango was forced to kill Zam lest the trail lead back to him. Fett hadn't counted, though, on the resourcefulness of Obi-wan Kenobi. Jango had used an exotic weapon, a Kamino saberdart, to eliminate Zam. No one should have been able to trace that weapon back to its source, but Obi-Wan's underworld contacts were able to point him in the right direction.
Kenobi arrived on Kamino, and learned of the clone army. He met Jango, and the two had a tense, yet civil, discussion, neither revealing their true motives. Fett nonetheless decided to flee, and ordered Boba to gather their belongings. Kenobi, working on orders from the Jedi Council, attempted to apprehend Jango just prior to Slave I's lift-off, which led to a water-logged melee atop the rain-swept landing platforms of Tipoca City. Jango escaped aboard the Slave I, and he and his son journeyed to Geonosis, to reunite with their mysterious benefactor, Lord Tyranus.
En route to Geonosis, Jango and Boba realized a homing beacon was placed aboard their vessel, and found a pursuing Jedi starfighter on their tracking screens. The tenacious Obi-Wan Kenobi was back, and a daring game of cat and mouse played out among the rocky debris of the Geonosian rings. Despite the barrage of Slave I's seismic charges, laser cannons and missiles attacks, Obi-Wan survived and continued shadowing the Fetts as they arrived on the barren planet's surface.
Kenobi and his compatriots were captured on Geonosis, which was revealed to be a Separatist stronghold. They were to be executed in grand Geonosian fashion, but their deaths were stalled by the sudden arrival of Jedi reinforcements.
Tasked with protecting Lord Tyranus, Jango entered the fray against the Jedi. His blaster skills killed several Jedi, but Jango was not quite prepared to face off against Jedi Master Mace Windu. Windu did not break stride as he deflected Jango's incoming blasts and swiftly cleaved off the hunter's head with a single stroke of his luminescent blade.
Jango's battle-dented helm bounced along the dusty ground of the Geonosian arena, to be picked up by a stunned and newly orphaned Boba Fett.
Jango's parents where killed along time ago by a rampaging legion

fighting the Mandalorians. The Mandalorians took Jango in and eventually made him commander of the army. Hence the armour.

Is this just a background for your story? Because if it is, it's very good, but it also means that your story will probably be far to long to post here. But I anxiously await.