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Count Dooku vs. Darth Maul

A short time after the events of the Phantom Menace...
- ''Count Dooku, I sense fear in you, anger !''
- ''..Who are you ? Show yourself !!"
- ''I will not show myself, you will show your lightsaber.''
Lightsaber igniting.
- ''It will be done then..!''
The mysterious warrior ignited his lightsaber and did a 360 turn towards Count Dooku. Count Dooku was looking at the handle of the lightsaber, it was goldish, like none other he had ever seen before. The blade was red.
- '' Who are you ?''
The cloaked warrior striked Dooku and they began swinging their sabers to each other. Dooku was using his form 2 of lightsaber technique. This other warrior faught aggressively. Count Dooku was severely outmatched. The cloaked warrior jumped back in forth. Dooku was amazed, he had not seen such speed since his sparring lessons with Jedi Master Yoda. The mysterious warrior began to confuse his opponent from one side of the area to the other, from wall to wall he jumped with impressive speed. Count Dooku then ran towards the warrior, the warrior blocked and jumped. Count Dooku tried to perform force push but it would'nt work.
- ''The force is strong with this one'' thaught the mysterious warrior
Count Dooku faught very well, he kept up quite well with this man or thing. The warrior then used the force to push Count Dooku towards the wall. Count Dooku was then knocked through the wall as the boulders collapsed on top of him. The warrior closed his saber and went on his way. He still felt a strong presence. Count Dooku had gotten up, ignited his lightsaber and went towards the mysterious figure. The mysterious figure dodged and used a sort of magic. Darth Sith magic. Lightning came out of his fingers. Count Dooku then fell, half dead.
- ''Very well, you will do."
- ''Who are you?''
- ''Soon you will know, the mysterious warrior known as Darth Maul is approaching. Kill him!''
The mysterious figure went to greet him, he ignited his lightsaber and struck.
- ''What is thy bidding my master?"
- ''You we're a mere puppet, kill him Dooku!"
Lightsaber ignites.
- ''I should've known..''
- ''Do It Dooku''
Lightsabers clash.. The mysterious figure and Count Dooku we're know against a Sith Lord. This Darth Maul creature was very well trained indeed.
- "Dooku, he killed your apprentice !''
- ''Qu...ii..Quiii...Ggo...Gonn..Qui Gonn Jii..Jiinn''
Without doubt Count Dooku swung his saber with great anger towards Maul. Maul was using his double-sided lightsaber. He was holding on Dooku and the mysterious warrior for much time. The mysterious warrior was anticipating the moment of death for this Maul creature. Count Dooku swung back and forth, fighting off the creature alone.
- ''You will pay!''
The mysterious warrior closed his lightsaber and awaited slowly with a slight smile on his face. Maul kept on keeping up with Dooku. Count Dooku was very well trained. He was 2nd to Jedi Master Yoda, his master. Count Dooku jumped off the wall, ducked, did a 360 twirl and went to stab this Maul creature. Maul dodged it and struck Dooku's lightsaber handle. It went flying in two different pieces. Dooku was cornered. The mysterious stood there in amazement. Count Dooku then grabbed the mysterious' warriors lightsaber by using the force. Dooku rolled backwards when Maul tried to stab and did it again another two times. On the second time he rolled and flipped up cutting Maul double sided lightsaber and immediately cut his head off. Dooku looked upon the face of who he had killed.
- ''Excellent work!''
Lightsaber ignites!
- ''You used your anger. Very well done, Dooku!''
- ''It wasnt proper, it wasnt the way it was supposed to be!''
- ''The Republic is behind Qui-Gon's death. I have tooken control of the Senate to enable peace and prosperity to the galaxy.''
- ''Chaancellloo...''
- ''No. Darth Sidious''
- ''Hmm, i knew about the Senate being corrupt and that the jedi have been clouded by the dark side of the force.''
- ''Which is why I found you here, correct ?"
- ''Yes.''
- ''How would you like to reconstruct the republic?''
- ''Take Maul's place at my side, together we can build a newer,stronger republic.!''
- ''I slayed him like I was a tyrant. I was using my anger, I have been vanquished by the dark side. I will take Maul's place!''
- ''It will be done then... Darthh..... Darth Tyrannus...''
- ''Yes, master''
And there they gazed upon the remains of the sith lord Darth Maul... and then came the infamous laugh ;
- ''Ha,Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha!!!''

is NActous Looking for me

Yoda and Cin Drallig entered the Hangar, lightsabers ignited. A voice rang out- "I'm surprised you've come, Master Yoda. And I see you've brought one of your pets along with you." Count Dooku stepped out of the shadows, the light from the electric machines in the room lighting his face, revealing his sneer of arrogance. "A fine hole you have found to hide in, my old Padawan", replied Yoda, a mocking smile appearing on his lips. "You'll be in no condition to exchange words with me when we're through, you old fool. And he ignited his crimson blade, and leapt at the two Jedi.

Cin leapt forward, spinning into a powerful stroke against Dooku. But the blade passed right over the Sith Lord's head, as he landed in a roll, thrusting at Yoda and forcing the Jedi Master to leap off the ground. Cin sent another blow towards Dooku; this time it was blocked by the Count's blade of fire. Dooku threw Cin off of him and twisted his saber, twirling Drallig away from him. Cin spun around and gained footing in time to see Yoda's blade land where Dooku had stood but a moment ago. As Yoda landed, Dooku swung at him, from behind, only to be blocked by Yoda's saber. In an expert moved that had not been predicted, Dooku spun his saber faster than the eye could see, catching Yoda off guard and leaving him open to wicked kick to the face. Yoda was thrown several feet, landing on his back dazed. Cin took the moment to rush at Dooku, striking hard against him. Their blades met, and the two combatants looked furiously into eachother's eyes. With a heaving push, Cin pushed Dooku backwards and leapt at him, ready to meet him with a kick. The blow caught Dooku in the chest, knocking his blade out of his hand. But Dooku had braced himself; he was pushed back a step, but retaliated with a ferocious barrage of lightning with his other hand. The blast hurled Cin into the air, crashing him into a large console that lined the wall. The lightning coursed through the Jedi's body and into the console, spreading like blue fire through every single system in the room. In unbearable pain, Cin blacked out.

Dooku lowered his hand, having sufficiently incapacitated the Jedi. But as he turned around, Yoda hurtled into him, throwing him to the ground.

The Jedi Master raised his lightsaber, standing atop the Count's chest, and an instant later, was blasted off of the Sith Lord by a wave of Force enrgy. Dooku flipped up to his feet again and snarled, calling his saber to his hand, but not igniting it. Seeing that Yoda was out of range for a saber duel, Dooku threw a barrage of lightning at Yoda. The Jedi Master leapt through the air, landing on a large console, an instant later being chased off of it by another bolt of Force energy. Yoda landed in a roll on a catwalk. Dooku, concentrating hard, closed his eyes, focusing on his enemy. A second later, he opened them, unleashing another bolt from his hand toward the small Jedi. The blast struck the small "bridge" and flew across the surface, causing sparks to fly and shattering metal as his lightning was conducted along the catwalk, straight towards Yoda.

Yoda leapt off of the catwalk he had landed on mere moments ago as it erupted in sparks and Force Lightning.. His emerald lightsaber glowed in the darkness of the room, all of the lights having been extinguished by Count Dooku's lightning. As the diminutive green Jedi landed, another bolt of lightning flew his way. This time, Yoda could see the expression on his former Padawan's face, illuminated by his lightning- it was one of pure malice, hatred, and . . . fear? The blast of Dark Force energy drove into Yoda's lightsaber hard, as he raised it up to protect himself, struggling under its power. As he blocked the lightning with his blade, he saw the crumpled form of the Jedi tutor Cin Drallig rise behind the Count. The long-haired Jedi Master extended a hand, and Yoda felt the Force energy wash over him as Dooku was thrown through the air, slamming hard into a wall on the opposite side of the room.

Cin Drallig stood up shakily, still reeling from the effects of Dooku's lightning. He looked at his former comrade's body, lying on the other side of the room. The Sith was unconcious. The room was surrounded by a wall of solid rock, with complicated wiring and electronic mechanisms lining the wall. A large panel to Cin's left was sparking tremendously, almost on fire. The electric lights were out, the only source of light now coming from the sparking metal and flickering blue data screens. Cin saw Yoda glide to the form of the Count on invisible wings. He heard murmurings from the Jedi Master, as the small green form raised his blade to strike down his new enemy. Suddenly, Cin cried out a warning as Yoda looked to his left. A second later, a fuel tank that had been dislodged in the fight came hurtling into Yoda's small frame, throwing him across the room. Using his mastery of the Force, Yoda pushed his body under and away from the tank just as it slammed into the rocky wall in a fiery explosion. Yoda was thrown to the ground. As Cin ran to his friend and ally, he saw Dooku begin to climb to his feet. Cin stopped next to Yoda and helped him up, all the while keeping his gaze on Dooku. As the old man raised himself to his feet, another dark form entered the room. It was tall, and in its hand gleamed a violet lightsaber blade. "No!", whispered Cin in shock, as Mace Windu took his place next to Count Dooku, who now stood tall next to his former enemy. He picked the hilt of his lightsaber from the floor and brandished it in a blazing crimson Makashi flourish. The next second, Yoda and Cin brought out their emerald blades, staring down their former friends. "End this we must", said Yoda, and the next second, the four combatants leapt towards eachother, engaging in a battle born of betrayal.

In an act of ferocity never before exhibited, Mace unleashed a barrage of lighting swift strikes against Yoda, forcing the Jedi Master to use all of his skills to evade, block and counter-attack his former confidant. Windu's ferocious attacks were powered by his mastery of Vaapad, the form he'd created as a teenager. The eccentric, unpredicable strikes confused even Yoda, the greatest of the Jedi, battering him and pushing him back, away from his compatriot Cin Drallig. A strike from the left swung at Yoda, and he leapt over it, lashing out with a back-flipping strike. But his saber met air, as Mace's lightsaber flew in from under Yoda, catching his saber in mid-air and sending him toppling to the floor. Already tired out by his previous duel with Dooku, Yoda struggled back as Mace unleashed his most powerful assault yet. how this had come to happen, Yoda still pondered.

Cin Drallig hit the ground hard as his lightsaber went skidding across the floor. He'd had the wind knocked out of him by a fierce spinning kick from Dooku. As the Coount stepped toward him, saber raised, Cin summoned the Force into himself and called a sparking metal cable from the ceiling. The wire wrapped flew at Dooku like a whip, only to severed into ribbons by the Dueling Master's well-placed strikes. But this distraction gave Cin the time he needed to summon his lightsaber to his hands and leap up at Dooku, showering his former comrade with emerald blows of his own. Finally, the Sith Lord fell back under the barrage of attacks from his enemy. A Makashi thrust from below, curving into Dooku's saber, followed by a Djem So blow from overhead, only to be supported by a Juyo leaping slash; Dooku was being overwhelmed.

But even in the thick of batlle, the Count was incredulous stupefied by the though of losing to a fool like Drallig. Taking a great step backwards, the Sith Lord dodged the Jedi Tutor's next attack, and stepped in with a Makashi flourish and strike. The first motion twisted Cin's blade aside. The second grazed his saber arm, causing him to draw back in agony. Dooku smiled inwardly; the battle was only just beginning.

Mace Windu's mind had only one focus- to destroy Master Yoda. Ever since Dooku had told him a week ago that Yoda was plotting against the Republic, to have it taken over and controlled by a new generation of Jedi Knights, Mace had begun to question his place in the galaxy more and more. After all, Dooku had been a mentor and friend to him his whole life. But then again so had Yoda. However, anything and everything in the galaxy was second to him when it conflicted and endangered the Republic. So, Mace had turned on the Jedi, joining Dooku in his quest to establish a stronger Republic, an uncorrupted one. With these thoughts fueling his rage, he attcked Yoda with fresh resolve, switching between Vaapad and Juyo in an attempt to overwhelm his former ally. It was all in vain. He saw the look of concentration on Yoda's face, and came to the realization that he'd lost a second before he was thrown across the room, straight into the electric fire of the shattered panel; he was killed instantly.

Yoda looked sadly upon the body of his former comrade, his dead form now still. But then he came out of his second-long trance and looked to his right to see Cin Drallig on the ground, dead. Dooku stood over him, sneering at the corpse that now carried a hole in its stomach. And a sudden rage filled Yoda, a rage that had never before existed. The man before him had caused so much strife and pain; his betrayal, his leading of the Separatists into the Clone Wars, his turning and murdering of so many friends. . . and suddenly, Yoda broke. Throwing aside his lightsaber, he raised his hands, and his eyes begun to glow with a yellow glare. Energy began to crackle around his fingertips, and as Dooku looked to him, the dawning horror in his eyes, he screamed a plea, a final cry of surrender. But it was too late. Blue and white waves of energy erupted from Yoda's hands, encasing the Count and throwing him straight through the wall of stone, incinerating his body as the heat and power melted the walls. There was no comprehension to the power that a 900 year-old being could possess, and no measure to the wrath he could unleash. And then, Yoda's eyes returned to their original hue, and he fell to the ground on his knees, his head bowed.

Had to do it in two pages; it was too long.

awsome story DRATH WInDU i really rally like it i have a story its qui gon mace and windu vs obi wan and plo koon but qui gon only looks on

Plo koon looked towards master Kenobi and spoke in his native tongue at that moment the doors opened and three Jedi walked in mace windu on the left hand side, Cin Drallig on the right hand side and behind the two a Jedi in a black robe. Obi Wan rose to his feet and ignited his lightsaber. The Jedi behind the two master’s walked forward obi wan felt a presence that he had not felt in a long time “Master Qui Gon is that you how can it be” the Jedi took of his hood and stared at Obi Wan “you have became powerful Jedi since we last meet but I still am stronger”
“I sense a difference in you, you seem more powerful darker”
“I have embraced the darkside join me or die”
“Master Windu master Drallig have you also joined the dark ranks”
“We have” Mace and Cin spoke in unison
The two Jedi ignited there lightsaber’s and jumped over Qui Gon’s head Plo koon jumped to his feet and ignited his golden saber he blocked a incoming strike from Cin Drallig he threw one back at him cutting the front of his robe, Plo Koon continued to strike at the dark Jedi threw blow after blow in every direction towards him Drallig firmly stood his ground until he seen an opening he took he force pushed Plo into a wall. Plo lay in a heap against the wall, Drallig walked over to him to end it but suddenly slipped over he look at the floor it was covered with ice he lay on his back trying to get up but only slipping over again, Plo raised to his feet and walked over to him raising his golden blade into the air at that moment he sensed something he looked around just in time to see a chair been flung towards him he dived out of the way. Drallig knew this was his only chance
He force pushed him self of the ice into the air diving at Plo Koon he swung his blade towards the Jedi masters head slicing it off. The head rolled along the floor and hit of the wall before coming to a stop.
Drallig dusted him self off and walked back towards qui gon as he resumed his place next him he spoke.
“Thank you for distract him master”
“Next time be ready” qui gon said harshly
Meanwhile mace and obi wan were swinging there blades at each other
“Stop this foolishness master windu the darkside only leads to death” obi wan demanded
“Some one will die here today but it will not be me” mace screamesd as he leaped into the air landing behind obi wan spinning round to be meet only be another swing from the Jedi master aimed at his legs he leaped off the ground kicking obi wan in the face as he back flipped across the room as he landed he seen obi wan running towards him he also started to run as the two Jedi meet they each swung there blades maces aimed at obi wans stomach and obi wans aimed at maces head mace seen this coming and sidestepped as he struck his middle cutting him in half. Obi wan disappeared in a white light and the mace also resumed his place at the side of qui gon jinn.
You have done well my apprentices the sith rule of two has been broken and now us three shall rule the galaxy master and apprentices. The three Sith turned and walked out of the door down the corridor and out into the temple garden a Jedi jumped to his feet and ran over to them “master qui gon is that you” qui gon ignited his green blade and sliced the Jedi in two.

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cool story

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Who would be interested in a Revan vs vong story?

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I have a question, i'm writing something about Tulak for me... And I wanted to know what you people felt of the intro... Yeah its just something I wrote really quick and it will probably have some spelling and grammer errors and will need a lot of things changed, but just in general what do you people think of it?

Ziost - Capitol
Korriban - Tomb
Malachor V - Library

The history of Tulak Hord

The year 4050 BBY

“Tulak Hord described as the greatest Sith duellist to have ever graced the Sith Worlds. I agree with this my young apprentice he was something special something amazing, the tomb you see before you is his. Inside are tools of incredible knowledge and power. A Holocron which describes the form he used. Its not one of the forms that are known today and it will probably never be known again. That is why you are my apprentice, that is why the Jedi may never know. Tulak his form was perfection none had seen it none could use it. He was so brilliant only to die in a way… unbecoming of a Sith.” “Please tell me Master, why is this Tulak Hord so great?” The female voice answered slowly “Kreia, I will tell you something you must never tell anybody else but the most powerful of your apprentice, so that he can tell others or use the knowledge for himself until finally one day the word of Tulak Hord will be returned to another great lightsaber duellist. This is the story about Tulak Hord, a great Sith Lord who’s memory is lost with time because the Jedi exterminated it.”

The year 4800 BBY

House Hord, it was raining hard like many other days on Korriban. It was a small planet but with great importance to the Sith. The burial planet of there most powerful leaders. The sandstorm outside combined with the rain made the weather seem even worse then normally. But outside the screams of a woman in pain could be heard over the weather. It was a perfect night to give birth to somebody like his child her mentor thought as he was sitting in his office watching the Tomb of Marka Ragnos.

He should have never allowed her to do what she did. He turned his head and looked back into his office. It had wooden walls and was decorated lightly, he was sitting behind a desk with one chair behind it and five in front. It had a few Holocron projectors and receivers hanging in several places of his office and a water machine to make sure he could always call and get something to drink, normally his office would be empty and dark at this time but today the lights were on and he was still sitting inside and he was not alone.

Three people were sitting on the chairs and two were standing at the entrance, when he looked back at them he just nodded. The two dark armoured people at the door immediately turned around and walked away. The other three stood up, the one in the middle just stood there while his companions started walking to the door “You made the right choice.” He said before turning around and walking too.

Twenty minutes the scream of a woman were heard by the dark armoured man walking towards the house. The mansion just next to the Academy was only a few minutes away from the Valley of the Dead. And just meters away from the Academy. The dark man ran towards the house when they came close, the boots of them and their companions hitting the ground making it sound like the thunder in the sky.

The gate to the compound was pushed away with one attack and the man started pounding at the door. “In the name of the Emperor open the door. In the name of the emperor…” Inside they heard the gate fall and the screams of the man. “Honey please don’t…” the woman said screaming in pain. “I have to, I will be back.” He said drawing his lightsaber towards him from the table. “Take good care of her.” The man told the doctor who nodded in agreement.

Tears rolled down from her face as she saw the love of her live walk out the door his lightsaber in his right hand and his head held high. She had failed him. Twenty minutes and a lot of screaming later she cried out in a pain unheard in these parts of Korriban. Outside the lone warrior turned his head around. His world turned into slow motion. Quickly he avoided another lightsaber and cut away at a soldier in front of him, with one quick turn and sprint he started running towards the house. But he did not reach it on time. 100 soldiers had already aimed and shot. Dozens of lasers hit his body.

His face fell in the mud as he screamed in pain, he tried to crawl to his house. Blood came running from his body, tears from his face. He moved his hands forward and pulled himself forward leaving traces of blood. The two dark armoured man walked forward and activated their lightsabers. “It was an honour Amarus.” One of the two turned his attention to a few of the surviving Lightsaber wielders and he send them inside. “Find the wife find the child kill them both, I want the child dead.”

Ten minutes later the two man were smiling everybody in the house was dead, it had been confirmed.

Well well. Nice work, guys. Windu, love it, but try breaking up the paragraphs a bit for user friendliness. otherwise, great. Fishy, nicely done, but I am thinking we could use more descriptions of the characters themselves. Give this picture some color, so to speak.

I thought I did; each paragraph has a POV of a different character. But good point, I'll keep that in mind.

janus wjhat do you think of my story and great work fishy i like the story alot and opening with kriea genius