This one is quite big, so be ready for a long read if you want to read it.
NJO Luke VS Revan.
Revan vs NJO Luke
It was a clear day on Korriban. Weather like this was rare on this ancient Sith planet. Tombs of every great Sith Lord here multiplied the power of the Dark Side and Luke felt the presence of them all as he walked over the sandy desert. He had only one purpose to find the tomb of the Sith Lord Darth Revan. The rumours had reached him just two days. Long after the destruction of the cult of Marka Ragnos Jaden the sole Sith survivor had resurfaced this time not to claim power not to try and conquer the world but to revive another great Sith Lord of old.
He had found the hidden tomb of Lord Revan. Luke had send many Jedi to try and find and stop Jaden but all of them had failed, it was no surprise with Marka Ragnos his sceptor and the time he had to train in the Dark Side he had to be a powerful opponent. That was why Luke had not come alone, he had not heard about Lord Revan much, a lot of his history was lost and hidden by the Jedi. The few bits of information he could find seemed to contradict each other a lot and Luke could find no truth in it. The Jedi with him knew even less then Luke did.
They knew of Jaden and heard that Revan was being revived, but who Revan was, was unknown to them. Still it was Kyle Katarn that found the tomb of Revan.
He was buried under the tombs of the four greatest Sith ever, Tulak Hord Marka Ragnos Naga Sadow and Ajunta Pall. Revan his tomb was not above ground like the others but below it. The small entrance was covered with sand. But the top of it was clearly visible once they knew it was there. Luke used the force to manipulate the sand and he threw it all away. “Remember, I will take Revan you attack Jaden.” He said as he opened the golden door into the tomb of the Sith Lord. The rest nodded.
As soon as the door opened Luke realised why this Sith Lord was being revived. His tomb was decorated by golden statues and wall pictures all in gold telling his life. As they walked further and further down under the ground Luke realised the true story. There was no contradiction Revan had done it all. Saved the Republic almost destroyed it killed the one that was destroying it and he destroyed it. Luke began to realise what he was up against this was no normal Sith. He remembered the power of Exar Kun and what he did against him, he feared that somebody that was no longer a ghost from that time would be even more powerful. He was right. Soon they came near another door. The tomb had stopped going down. The door was a strong golden door, decorated with a picture telling a million story’s. It showed Revan standing on the unknown planet on an alter hundreds of Sith soldiers below him cheering him on, to his right stood a woman Luke could identify as Bastila Shan, Revan for the first time in his life did not wear a mask. Even in a wall decoration the man radiated power.
When Luke pushed the door open he realised he was already to late. Jaden stood to the right side of a small man but well build. He was masked like in most of his story’s and this was no spirit. “So you have come after all, Master. And I see you have brought back up.” Jaden was talking to Kyle Katarn. “Why have you done this Jaden? The Dark Side, its not worth it return to the light Jaden. You are wasting a possible great life.” “You are going to die Master you should not have come.” “Are you even looking Jaden you are impossibly outnumbered you and your friend don’t stand a chance.”
Suddenly Kyle found himself going into the air. Higher and higher his breath started to escape him, he could no longer breath. He tried to use the force to push his attacker away but Revan was not affected by it. “Let him go Revan.” Luke said. “And who are you?” Revan asked still choking Kyle.” “I am Luke Skywalker and the one that will send you back to the place you came from.” “Stupid Jedi.” Revan said he pulled his fist together and crushed Kyle his neck, Kyle his lifeless body fell on the ground as Revan turned his attention to Luke. He started to choke him too, but Luke was far more powerful then Kyle. The force pushed Revan back and launched him across the room until he hit a statue of himself.
When he stood up Jaden was already fighting five other Jedi. “My Jedi will take care of Jaden and I will take care of you Revan.” “You think I care about that worthless fool? He resurrected me and I thank him for that but I had better apprentices in the past.” Revan said as he charged at Luke without a lightsaber. Luke was quite surprised and drew his own lightsaber and activated it, but he did not know where to defend. Just a meter before he reached Luke Revan drew two Lightsabers, he threw one over the ground at Luke and he himself jumped in the air with his other lightsaber. Luke was caught completely off guard and could barely avoid the lightsaber and Revan his attack that came from behind. Revan drew his second lightsaber back to him and charged at Luke.
The power the speed the ferocity Luke was taken aback by it, he had never seen somebody fight like that. The Vong were nothing compared to a real force user he thought as he was pushed back avoiding and blocking every attack that he could, he ducked and rolled away. Doing everything he could to avoid Revan his fast attacks. Luke tried to block his attacks but Revan moved to fast and Luke had a hard enough time following just one of the lightsabers, but Revan realised that this could not go on forever. He jumped back and deactivated one of his lightsabers. “Obviously speed is not the way to take you down.” He said this time charging with only lightsaber. They clashed in mid air. The power that was put into their attacks made the earth around them tremble. The Jedi and Jaden looked at the two great force users pushing each other into a standstill. “STOP IT!!!!” Jaden yelled as he saw dirt coming from the ceiling.
Revan and Luke both jumped back at the same time and through the force at the other. They clashed in the middle their pushes destroying each other. Luke charged Revan as soon as his push had failed his lightsaber swinging from left to right with great speed and power. Revan could hardly follow the speed of the lightsabers but he knew where it was coming and moved his lightsaber there before it was actually there. He realised that Luke was more powerful then him, and he had to be smart about this if he wanted to win. He drew his second lightsaber to his left hand but did not activate it. He made sure that Luke did not notice the attack.
His pre sight helped him greatly in this battle knowing exactly were Luke his attack would be and when. He moved his lightsaber from one side to the other blocking all the attacks that Luke fired at him, until suddenly he activated his second lightsaber and he moved it forward, the lightsaber penetrated Luke his stomach. His eyes looked surprised and scared. “I am sorry.” He whispered as he fell down on the ground. Revan fell to the ground tired and weakened by the fight. “You were a great opponent Luke Skywalker.” He felt his body weakening and his spirit becoming tired. His breath escaped him as he looked up and saw the ghost of Luke Skywalker. A white light radiated from him. Suddenly Revan was pushed back through the force flying across the room. His bones broke as he hit the wall.
Jaden saw what had happened and quickly ran away. He had won, Luke was dead and his new Master was gone before he could take power. No the path for Jaden was free. Smiling he ran outside the temple destroying the entrance leaving the five Jedi trapped inside to die by exhaustion and starvation. He laughed as he walked away, until suddenly he heard a voice. “What are you laughing about.” He turned around and saw a beautiful woman standing in front of him a lightsaber in her hand. “Leia?”
A tear rolled down her face as she saw Luke his ghost behind Jaden looking at her with hope in his eyes. “I will avenge you Luke.” She said as she charged.
I hope it was any good, I didn't really proof read it because well I just decided to write this after Windu said it. I'm to bussy with writing a Tulak Hord story to care that much about something like this.
3 chapters or so, he found out his adopted daddy is a Jedi, what happened to his real parents and is now on Korriban with a lightsaber and just got through the initial training, without any real training... I'm not really sure if I want to keep it that way however. I want Tulak to look like a Natural but I had him kill a few droids and two humans on a battle ground situation. Okay he had a hard time but he did pull it off.
Originally posted by darth-yoda
it was great fishy i really liked it but what pused revan back that was the only bit i didnt get but apart from taht well done fishy
Its not really explained, Luke returns as a ghost and the weakened Revan feels himself getting weaker and weaker and is then just thrown across the room. Its not really meant to be explained.
Darth Revan vs. Count Dooku and Mace Windu
A violet lightsaber flashed, and a dark figure fell to the ground, extruding an odor of ozone and burnt flesh. Another black-clad human leapt at the man with the violet blade, brandishing a crimson weapon of his own. The tall, dark-skinned man who held the weapon pivoted on his left foot, thrusting his saber deep into the stomach of the second figure. Before the body had hit the ground, Mace Windu had drawn his blade of light back into its hilt.
He turned to his right and stepped forward, summoning the Force into his body and waving his hand. A small panel sparked, and a door opened directly in front of him.
Several meters away, another battle ensued. A dark Jedi flew through the air, slamming into the ground at breackneck speed. And his collision accomplished just that. The tall man who'd sent him flying flourished a cyan blade with elegance and ease borne of eighty years of practice. His short white beard glowed an eerie blue as his blade flew across another Jedi's throat, felling him instantly.
As yet another renegade attacked him, this time with a Djem So overhead strike, the Count of Serenno whipped his blade twice; the first strike severed his attacker's hand at the wrist. the second extinguished the fire that was his life. Count Dooku raised his saber once more, and brought it down upon a durasteel door, cleaving it in two. He stepped through the ruined doorway and into the bridge of the starship.
Mace Windu emerged from the doorway on the Count's right, his long, hurried strides and glaring eyes revealing but a hint of the hidden darkness deep inside of him. His shining lightsaber hilt emerged from his dark brown robes, flying past his protective Jedi war robes and into his right hand, where it ignited into a purple flame once more.
Next to him, Dooku's blade glowed blue, as the two walked towards the front of the bridge, approaching the black-robed figure who stood tall there. He radiated power, and as Mace and Dooku stopped not five meters from him, he turned slowly towards them.
Behind the man, a transparasteel viewport gave the Jedi a sight of the battle outside. Explosions rocked the ship, and emerald and crimson and cyan spears of light streaked past, lighting up the black void of space. And silloheutted against it all was Darth Revan.
Clad in flexing body armor, and garbed in robes as black as the void outside, the Sith Lord was a sight to behold. His black and red helmet concealed his features and emotions, and he radiated nothing if not sheer power. His gloved arms moved, and sinewy muscle flexed beneath the dark robes. His right hand slid into his robes, and when it emerged, it grasped the hilt of a lightsaber so intricately designed that it rivaled the weapon of Windu in its glamour. His thumb clicked against a sliding button, and a blade of blood-red light flowed from it.
Raising the weapon in his right and flourishing it exquisitely, Revan beckoned with his left. The two Jedi in front of him could have swore that a smile glowed from beneath the mask. The next second, they leapt at him, engaging in the fight of their lives.
Chapter 1
The dark circular meditating room was dimly lit by small red flames spouting from engraved rocks. In the center of the room sat a robed figure his wore a black and red mask covered in scratches. A voice called out in the mans mind.
“Revan”
“Kriea is that you why have you contacted what do you want”
“Revan don’t talk just listen as you know the true sith roam unknown space freely we must stop them they are coming here there coming to reclaim Korriban and destroy the republic the Jedi and the sith as we know them. And you Revan are one of the only ones who can stop them you and the last few Jedi must join forces once more to stop them.”
“How do you know this? You said we how can you help?”
“Revan for such a educated being you no so little me and my former apprentices have found a way to come back a way of self resurrection we will find you when the time is right but until then you must gather your former companions only the Jedi can stop this threat Revan I must go”
The figure stood up and slowly walked out of the room walking a long the corridors of his ship he entered the bridge and walked over to the navigational computer setting a course for Telos. When the ship landed on Telos the landing ramp hit the floor and Revan slowly walked of it in to and into the hanger bay he continued to walk forward and into the temple training room. Many younglings noticed him and let out a gasp Revan did not have time to pay attention he continued walking until he reached a large stone door walking inside he looked at the Jedi sitting there he looked at them left to right Juhani, Jolee, Atton, Mira, Boa-Dur, Bastila, The Exile, the last of the handmaidens, and a women he had not seen in a very long time Atris. “
So you are the new Jedi council.”
They all rose to the feet Atton, Mira, handmaiden, Boa-Dur and the exile igniting the lightsaber’s
“I do not wish to fight I have came because I need your help and soon you will need mine”
“Who are you why are you here” the exile demanded
”He is Revan” Bastila answered
“Revan why have you came here what is it you want” Bastila asked
“I will tell you on the way to Dxun now come with me to my ship”
The Jedi masters withdrew there lightsaber’s and reluctantly followed Revan
Inside the ships training room they sat there eagerly await the return of Revan.
The doors opened and he walked into the room sitting in a chair that was free across from the masters.
“I have called you here to request your help I recently received a request to gather all my fellow companions for a battle”
“Against what Revan why do you need us you power is far greater than any of us”
Jolee said
It was a request from Kriea my old master she has resurrected her self, Darth Sion and Darth Nihilus they have foreseen the invasion of the true sith”.
”The sith died out long ago Revan one from what I have heard is well educated should know this” said Boa-Dur
“They did not die out but go into hiding” answered Revan
“I have explained enough you should all make your self at home until we land on Dxun.
Revan stood up and walked out of the room followed by the exile as the exile got to revan’s side he spoke.
“Revan would you mind if we sparred I would like to see what power you have”
“no I would not I have not fought another saber user for so long I would in fact enjoy it follow me”.
Revan speeded up his pace turning left and opening a door.
The room was large and well lit chandlers hanging from the ceiling and lightsaber’s mounted on the walls. Revan took his place at the right hand side of the arena and the exile took his at the left. Igniting his blue saber and charging to wards Revan the exile was met by a green saber clashing blades the exile realised that Revan’s strength was far superior to his being pushed backwards and towards the floor the exile rolled side ways only to be meet by another blade a red one held in Revan’s other hand. The exile had never seen so much skill with a lightsaber before as revan and the exile exchanged swings at each other. Revan saw a opening swinging towards it and hitting the exile in his shoulder the exiles blade retracted and his hand clutched the wound as he threw out his free hand force pushing Revan he fell forwards passing out over the pain of the wound. Revan landed feet first on the floor walking over to the exile and picking him up.
The exile awoke in a bacta tank as he floated there it remembered his time on Peragus, 5 years ago he got out and put on his robe walking out of the medical bay and into the training room he seen that Revan was now sat closer to the group than last time talking about his days with Bastila. Laughing heartedly at something Revan said about the time she had tripped mission over. Juhani noticed the exile.
“Has your wound healed?
The exile looked towards his shoulder forgetting that a lightsaber had cut into it now all that remained was a small scar
“How did you know about that” the exile asked Juhani
“I was watching we all were” she answered
At that moment the computer spoke lord Revan we have arrived at the mandolorian camp on Dxun. Repeat lord Revan we have arrived at the mandolorian camp o Dxun.
Chapter 2
As the group of force users walked down the landing ramp of Revan’s ship they were meet by a team of mandolorians
Four in blue armour two in red armour and 1 in golden armour it was decorated with the mandolorian skull insignia and tribal markings. Revan spoke
“Is your leader here Mandalore?”
“The great Mandalore is here and he dose not wish to speak with infidel such as you please leave”
“Tell him that Revan is here”
One of the mandolorians in blue armour ran off towards a large durasteel building a few minuets later the building door opened again and out steeped Mandalore his silver armour reflecting of the sunlight and a aura surrounded him as he walked closer Revan spoke once more
”Candarouse I am here to request the help of you the great Mandalore”
“Candarouse is dead please do not mention his name any more”
“As you wish will you help me?”
“Come with me”
Mandalore turned round and walked towards his house opening the door he walked in and sat down on a round chair signalling Revan and his companions to sit down.
They all took seat and Revan bean to speak “
Mandalore I have received a message from Kriea asking me to unit all of my old companions.”
“Why what are we fighting” Mandalore seemed happy to be by Revan and the exiles side once more,
“We are going to try and sop the true sith from claiming the galaxy for there own.
“Revan as much as I trust and honour you I have to say this sounds observed the true sith died out a long time ago”
”they did not die out but they went into hiding in unknown space”
“I will join you Revan I trust you and it will be and honour to fight beside you once more”
Mandalore stood up walking into his room emerging minuets later with a case full of belongings
“Weapons Revan you can never have to many weapons”
Revan let out a small laugh as they made there way towards his ship.
On board the ship Mandalore sat in the circle as the others chatted Mandalore was silent Revan walked back into the room.
“We will soon arrive at Kashyyk”
“Why are we going to Kashyyk?” asked Atris
“We are going there because there is still more allies that will sever as a help to us”
Revan stood up and walked out of the room,
The group continued to chat until Revan came back into the room
“Follow me” Revan asked as
The Jedi followed Revan into a circular room with a holo projector in the center.
The holo projector came on and there stood a life size projection of Kriea.
“Revan we are on Korriban in the temple of Tulak Hord your apprentice Malak is also here you must be quick the sith are getting closer I can feel it I must go Revan be quick.”.
The ships computer spoke out once more
Lord Revan we have landed on Kashyyk repeat Lord Revan we have landed on Kashyyk.
BTW people I have a question for you all, who feels like writing a fight. Just the fight no story behind it. I've already done that, its just that whenver I read one of my own fights I think it sucks.
For anybody thats interested its a fight with Tulak Hord against his adopted daddy, who is a human... I'll explain it all if somebody wants to do it.