Star Wars Versus StoryTime!

Started by Darth Windu34 pages

Father and Son

"Father," whispered Tualk Hord, in a moment of weakness. His lightsabers fell to the ground as his hands went limp in shock. He knew that this moment would come. But he wasn't prepared for it. His eyes widened, and for a moment, he looked like a lost child again.

"Tulak," nodded the Jedi. Noting his "son's" sudden weakness in character, the Master tilted his head mockingly and said "It appears you haven't grown up as much as you'd thought."

Hearing these words seem to shake the Sith Lord out of his stupor. Regaining his composture, Hord spoke out, his voice once agin full of the icy power and hatred that he'd exhibited earlier.

"I've grown far more than you can ever imagine."

"Why? Why did you choose the path you chose?" said his father, suddenly showing the same weakness that Hord had previously been possessed by.

"Because it is the path to power, to success. You cannot be so arrogant as to pretend you know not of the rising power of the Sith. Even as we speak, the last of your Jedi accomplices are being destroyed. Coruscant will belong to the Sith again. We will once more reign supreme."

And with that, his father straightened up once more.

"So you choose to fight me yet again, Tulak? You cannot win."

"If we fight, you will be rid from this world in an instant!" spat Tulak. "You cannot hope to comprehend the power of the Dark Side of the Force!"

Bowing his head in sorrow, the Jedi Master said three words. "So be it."
And with that, he flew at his son, at the same time igniting his own lightsaber. As the blade of blue fire scorched the air, the Jedi Master's feet hit the ground, and he lunged at the Sith Lord with Force filling every particle in his body. Spinning like a top, Tulak's black robes were a whirl of storm clouds, and the next moment, a bolt of red lightning flew from them, crashing into the blade of the Jedi Master. Hord's red lightsaber glowed with the bloodlust that only a Sith Lord could possess, and his eyes glowed with that yellow flame once more.

"You will not survive to see tomorrpw Jedi! This was your final erring!"

And with that, Tulak Hord became a whirlwind of dark chaos. He lunged to the right of his adopted father, thrusting ferociously at the Jedi's lungs. The Council member deflected the blow, sliding backwards under the force and momentum of his foster son's blow. The two engaged in a flurry of attacks, blocks, and counterattacks, turning the room into a kleidoscope of blue and red and purple. It was a fierce engagement. But it was obvious who had the upper hand.

"You disappoint me, Jedi" sneered Tulak, as he shoved his father from him with a push of his saber.

The Jedi rolled and gave ground as Hord pressed the attack with a flurry of fire. He was toying with his father.

The Jedi Master dodged and weaved and blocked, almost running backwards. Suddenly, the blade whisked through the sleeve of his left robe, cutting into his arm. He snarled in in a burst of pain, and extended the very same arm as he powered himself with the living Force. The mystical energy flowed through his wound, nullifying the pain, and an instant later, it fired from his hand and careened into the Sith Lord.

Tulak brought his saber in front of him, protecting him from the sudden burst of Force from his father's hand. But the blast did little more than slow him down. He pushed the attack away with a Force defense of his own, and struck out at his father once more, this time putting all his rage and frustration into the blow. The Jedi put his saber up to parry the blow, but it was knocked aside as the blazing lightsaber burned into his ribs, slicing all the way through and burning his right lung. He screamed iin pain as he fell to the ground, writhing.

Tulak stood above his father, his face a mask. His lightsaber glowed like fire, and he could have then killed the man with a single, easy stroke. But he didn't.

"Leave. Before the rest of my forces get here. They won't be as merciful as I was."

Struggling to his feet, the Jedi looked at his son.

"You're an abomination! Kill me now, and spare me the misery of living, knowing that I raised a Sith!"

And suddenly the Jedi was bowled over, swept of his feet by a wave of Force energy.

"I am no abomination." said Hord, his voice filled with sudden rage, malice, and. . . confusion? "I do what is necessary. Perhaps you should too."

And with that the Dark LOrd of the Sith strode away, leaving his father to fend for himself.

A foolish bit of mercy, he thought to himself. Next time we meet, he won't be so lucky.

Tulak Hord, Dark Lord of the Sith, walked to the end of the catwalk, the sun setting on a plane of destruction, death and malice.

On the ground, far behind him, the Jedi rose to his feet.

"You have power my son. But you cannot keep it," He whispered. The Sith Lord stopped.

An icy reply rang out. "Such is the way of the Sith."

An icy reply came from the figure far away.

Not my best work. Hope you like it Fishy.

another good story

And Fishy, this was your story in my words, so I want to know what you think about it.

I like it, not quite how I imagined it, but it will work. You have a way of writing, i'll change some minor things in the dialogue but thanks for writing that. Its great

Sorry, lol. Like I said, it's not my best.

No not that its bad, I just invisioned the fight going another way. Or actually what lead up to the fight, but this will do just fine 🙂

How did you envision it?

Less Sith dying and Tulak walking away leaving Coruscant completely retreating because he felt he wasn't ready... But I can put that in myself if I still want too... I'm not even close to putitng this fight in the story yet.

I just sometimes start writing completely different things because I think of something that would make it seem better and just want to get it on paper. But I can sure as hell do a lot with this, even if I change it a little.

I could help you re-write through PM or something, lol.

Lol, well i'll contact you when I start working on it... Or maybe not if I can work it out. But any help is always appreciated.

It would be fun. I have nothing else to do really.

In that case, I have about a dozen other fights planned out 😛

🙂

Any of them about more ancient Sith Lords?

All about Tulak 😛 Seriously though you are a great writer, and I think my way of writing fights sucks so if you are intereted in doing it and you have the time and I know of somebody great that Tulak is going to fight i'll pm you about it.

Cool. Just give me a basic layout of what you need so I don't mess up your story like I did with the battle.

You didn't mess up... Small changes are to be expected you can't write what I have in my mind. You can still write whatever you are writing a lot better then I can however 😛

🙂 Okay. I'll add modifications to make it interesting, but I wouldn't want to change the story. So, if you ever have anything you want me to write, give me frame and I'll fill it in.

I will, i'm working towards Tulak Hord his first real war battle right now. But I can do that myself, maybe he will face some powerful enemy there. I want him too but I don't know who yet and entering somebody without introducing that person doesn't really make him look impressive so I have to work all of that out first.