Star Wars Versus StoryTime!

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well seeing as in the story Tulak had been alive for about 5000 years, he's probably fought guys about equal to Revan before and won.

A MAKASHIMAN story. The Second Round pt. 1

Luke Skywalker and Master Yoda VS. Darth Vader and Emperor Palpatine

This story begins on Dagobah where a young boy named Skywalker feels he has completed his' Jedi training........

Yoda; Luke, not ready are you. Stay here you must and complete your training you must.

Luke; Master Yoda I must go to Endor and help Han and Leia.

Yoda; Anger and fear, I sense in you. Afraid you are of losing your friends?

Luke; Master Yoda, I sense that they are in great danger and will die if I don't go to help them.

Obi-Wan; Luke. Heed Yoda's words and stay here to complete your training.

Luke; Ben, you don't understand I sense the presence of the dark side around Endor. I am going, I promise i'll come back and complete my training.

Yoda; Alone, you will not go. With you I shall go.

Leaving shortly after this conversation Luke and Yoda head for Endor only to find a giant Rebelion fleet preparing to attack what looks like a second Death Star.

Yoda; Sense the Emperor I do.

Luke; The Emperor?

Yoda; Yes. Powerful with the dark side the Emperor is.

Luke then begins to have visions of his' friends.

Luke; Leia? Han? Vader. Master Yoda were going onto that station.

Luke pilots the ship into the docking bay and he and Yoda begin to walking to the Emperor's trone room.

Finally when they arrive they find Emperor Palpatine with Vader at his side.

Palpatine; Master Yoda, still alive?

and with that the battle begins luke charging Vader and Palpatine in a force battle with Yoda.

Yoda; Win, you cannot. The dark side will fail you.

Palpatine; Die, you old fool!!!!!!!! (sends a stream of lighting at Yoda blasting him to the other end of the room. Palpatine then tries to escape but his quickly stopped by a lightsaber wielding Yoda)

Palpatine; What!? I destroyed that infernal lightsaber!

Yoda; Built another I have. (Yoda begins to show off the fancy electrum hilt and the fact that age dosen't matter as twirled his saber around. Palpatine out of nowhere pops out a saber and tries to defend himself from the Jedi's attacks)

Vader; Join me Luke and together we can destroy the Emperor and rule the galaxy.

Luke; I will never turn.

Vader; If you won't, maybe your sister Leia will.

Luke; NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(In a rage Luke thensavgely attacks Vader and cuts off both his hands leaving him lying on the floor)

Palpatine; Yes use your anger boy and strike your father down.

Yoda; Luke concentrate on the force. (Yoda remaining on the offense keeps attacking Palpatine and finds an opening in the defense and uses it. Palpatine kept defending from the attacks from the Jedi but then........he felt a terrible pain in his chest and the next thing he knew Master Yoda was standing over him retracting his emerald saber from Palpatine)

Luke; Where are Leia and Han?

Vader; You will never find them!

To be continued.

I like it. Keep writing.

I wrote this in about ten minutes and I wrote it one the spot, so it might not become your favorite. (Like any of my stuff would be your favorite. lol. 🙂

Canderous vs. Bandon

Hunting. That was his job. He was searching for a Sith. A powerful one. He had followed the Sith, Bandon, from Tatooine all of the way to Manaan. His trusty Repeating balster rifle in hand, and his swords hanging at his sides, he had gotten the Sith right where he wanted him.

Bandon was standing in the central section of the floating city. Bandon was facing the ocean, ready to fight for his life. He had killed Mandalorian’s before, but this was the one who would be Mandalore. He was hiding himself behind a shield in the force. None could see him except for the Mandalorian. The Mandalorian, Canderous, had a rare implant that made him immune to mind tricks. He could see Bandon as if the shield wasn’t even there.

Canderous, yelled at the Sith Warrior, “Come here and fight. I know you are done running from me. You have a fare chance.”

Bandon spit back, “Running? I wasn’t running, I had other tasks more important than a single Mandalrian. You are pathetic. No one not trained in the ways of the force could beat me.”

In a light, almost mocking tone, Canderous replied, “Ya, well we’ll see about that.”

He brought his rifle sight up to his eye and took aim at Bandon’s head, squeezing the trigger and sending off three shots. Bandon doged them, the blast shattering the window. Anyone who was left after seeing a Mandalorian stroll into Manaan was gone when the gun went off.

Bandon dropped him force shield, no longer requiring secrecy. He jumped high in the air comming towards Canderous, all the while the Kath Hound Canderous was firing into the air, trying to shoot Bandon. Every blast that would hit Bandon if not blocked was not able to be deflected back at Canderous, instead hitting the walls sending off pumes of smoke.

Bandon swung at Canderous, trying to remove his head. He swung in a dark fury, but Canderous dodged evey swing. Bandon kicked at Canderous, knocking the rifle from the Mandalorian hands. It clattered to the floor several feet away. Canderous dove for it but the Sith tossed his lightsaber into it, causing the power core to explode, sending shrapnel throughout the room. It would have seriously wounded Canderous if not for his heavy armor.

Rising to his feet Canderous grabbed his double virbo-swords. Now it was specialty time. He loved fighting with swords, but didn’t often get the chance. Swords in hand he walked to ten feet from Bandon. Bandon gave Canderous a mocking smile. Bandon swung at Canderous, who in turn swung back.

They exchanged blows. Bandon thought he had the upper hand but in less than one minute Canderous proved him wrong. Injecting himself with adrenal strength inhancers, he overwhelmed Bandon more as the fight went on.

He landed a square kick to Bandon’s chest, knocking the Sith Lord over a broken support from the ceiling. Canderous gave Bandon time to rise to his feet. The Sith took advantage of Canderous’ honor and force jumped at Canderous while at the same time throwing a large peice of duracrete at him.

It should have been impossible for him to survive, but he did. He jumped over that peice of duracrete that smashed the wall it hit, and the blocked a strike from Bandon then killing the Sith with the very next hit.

Canderous looked at Bandon corpse laying on the ground. Without another glance, Canderous, left Manaan for Dxun.

Please tell me if you like this and if you like the one with Tulak and Revan. I've been asking for days for a response to the Tulak vs. Revan one and I've only gotten two responses.

Canderous killing Bandon? A stretch....

Cool story. Tulak vs. Revan was cool too.

Revalations
A MAKASHIMAN story
Setting is Utapau where Kenobi decides to confront Grievous.........

Kenobi;(descends from above landing before Grievous) Hello there.

Grievous; Ahhh! General Kenobi how nice of you to... drop in.

Kenobi; This war ends now!

Grievous; I will crush you and any other Jedi for their crimes against my people.

Kenobi; The Jedi never did anything to the Kaleesh.

Grievous; The Republic and the Jedi sided with the Huks and helped slaughter my tribe.

Kenobi; We never slaughtered anybody. The Jedi stand for peace and order not death and war.

Grievous; You Lie!!! Count Dooku and Darth Sidious revealed it to me!(and with that grievous drops his cape and ignites his four trophy sabers)

Kenobi;(Ignites his lightsaber) Dooku and Sidious are Sith Lords. They depend on deception to get what they want. Either except that you were fooled by a dark side trick or I will be forced to destroy you!

Grievous; You fool! you will never defeat me!

After having some more words the duel begins. Grievous takes the offense and Kenobi the defense. Grievous lands a square kick in Kenobi's chest throwing his lightsaber up in the air. Grievous catches the saber in his right foot and takes a leap towards Kenobi. Right when he is about to deliver a death blow Kenobi uses the force to freeze the Droid General.

Kenobi; Think Grievous. Think about the logic of all this. The Jedi never did anything to your people. Now will you come quietly or.........(Kenobi drops Grievous when he sees his troops aiming their blasters at him)

Cody; Obi-Wan Kenobi! You are under arrest! You must now come with us to undergo execution for treason.

Kenobi; What!? Treason!?

Grievous; Kenobi! Catch. (Grievous throws Kenobi's lightsaber back to it's owner)

The two begin to take down the Rupublic troops with the help of the Confederate Droids)

Finally when the situation is contained Kenobi approaches Grievous.

Kenobi; Why the change of heart?

Grievous; You preachings finally made sense.

With no more to say at the moment Grievous informs all droid troops throughout the galaxy to protect all Jedi.

Many of the Council members parished and the only remaining members were Yoda, Plo Koon, Obi-Wan Kenobi, and Pablo-Jill with the addition of General Grievous.

This second taskforce met the two Sith Lords on Mustafar.

Sidious; You shall all die!!

The battle then begins with Grievous, Koon, and Jill holding of the clones Yoda fighting Sidious and Kenobi fighting Vader. Sidious unleashes a savage assualt on Yoda with a lightning attack. Yoda knew that only a powerful offense would eliminate Sidious. Yoda then summoned all his force powers and unleashed the most powerfull force push the Jedi or anyone had ever seen. Sidious was thrown back visciously and when he rose shakily back to his feet ignited a lightsaber and lept at Yoda. Yoda yet again used the force and threw his concealed emerald saber at Sidious. Sidious didn't have enough time time dodge and felt the lightsaber pass through his heart, he fell to the ground dead. Kenobi was putting up an extremely good fight against his former padawan but could feel his strength draining. Vader then used all his anger and began to force choke Kenobi but was kicked away by General Grievous.

Grievous; I have been waiting for this for a very long time boy!

Vader; I am more powerful than anyone now!!!!!!!!(Vader takes a savage leap for the General in an atempt to kill him but his met fataly by four lightsabers.

With the Sith threat now eliminated the Jedi began to reform thier order and led the droids to victory over the clones. Not much later two children were born from Senetor Amimdala who died in childbirth and were taken to be trained as Jedi. As for Grievous he repented his former sins and began training under Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi in the ways of the force.

Once more peace reigned in the galaxy........ but there were rumors of an unholy aura coming from the Korriban Sith Temple.............

Nice twist with Grievous. . . good concept, although I don't think a couple of words would have done that; there should be more dialogue. But really, cool twist, and nice story. Would you mind if I borrowed that for my version of it?

Thanks Windu I had to leave and needed a quick ending but ahh what the heck for anybody not pleased with the duels here;

Grievous ignited his four sabers and decided to play the defensive (he had noted Kenobi's cool manner and decided to apply it) and let Vader make a mistake. Vader made wide powerfull sweeps with his saber but the General kept defending.

Yoda the whole while kept Sidious on the defensive. Sidous didn't expect the little Jedi to be as powerfull as he was. Yoda and Sidious kept fighting until they both brought the force into play and blasted each others sabers away. The duel of lightsabers was now a desperate contest of force powers.

Vader had managed to destroy three of the General's sabers and was gaining a lage advantage but the General would not be bested.

Grievous; You have been fooled by the Sith as I was. It is not to late to repent.

Vader; I will not lose to a simple droid!!!

Vader and Grievous locked sabers and Grievous had the obvious advantage with brute strength but Vader used the force to throw him back several yards. Grievous was now unarmed and had to think.

Vader it's over General Grievous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(Vader walked up to Grievous and was about to deliver a death blow when a blue beam of plasma erupted from his stomach.

Kenobi; Forgive Anakin.

Master Yoda in all nine hundered years of his life had learned many force powers some not to be used unless in a desperate situatuion like this. Sidious was sent a savage stream of lightning at the Jedi and Yoda was blasted against a wall. Yoda having made his decision summoned all his knowlegde of the force and threw a force storm of considerable power at the Sith Lord. Sidious had a bewildered look on his gnarled old face as a force power he only ever heard of wiped him from his very exsistense.

Hope you guys like those duels better.

Originally posted by Darth_Glentract
Please tell me if you like this and if you like the one with Tulak and Revan. I've been asking for days for a response to the Tulak vs. Revan one and I've only gotten two responses.

The Fight to be the DLOS. Ragnos vs. Revan

A crowd of Sith encircle the two combatants. Half cheering for Ragnos to win, the others hoping for a victory from the human called Revan. The energy in the room is immense. The ground vribrating with the power, the air tense with energy coming from their bodies. Someone is going to die today.

Ragnos: Pathetic Human. I am the True Dark Lord of the Sith.
Revan: Ragnos, you dictatorship has gone on long enough. You will lose the mantle this day.
Ragnos: We shall see.

Ragnos attempted to grab Revan in a force grip. Revan was caught and lifted off the ground for several seconds befor he was able to break lose. Ragnos flung a massive wave of force energy at Revan’s tiny figure. Revan raised both of his lightsaber, a brillant red and a magnificant purple blade protected him from the more than lethal blast. Ragnos threw aboth wave at him. This time Revan was pushed back slightly.

Ragnos: Indeed you are powerful.

Ragnos ran at Revan, his eighty pound blade a feather in his enormous hand. He brought the blade over his head and swung down at Revan’s figure only for Revan to not be there by the time the blow was landed. With amazing agility Ragnos turned around an swung again at Revan who had moved behind him. This time Revan stopped the swing with a hanging block that almost knocked him over.

Ragnos: You are a worthy opponent.
Revan: The best is yet to come.

Revan back-handed Ragnos’ face and then kicked out at the giant’s knee, hoping to break it. The kick landed solidly, but did little damage. Ragnos punched at Revan with his left hand. But Revan ducked under it and brought his elbow into the Ancient Sith’s stomach. This time the huge figure actually let out a hard breath. Ragnos staggered back.

Ragnos: Playtime’s over.

With the force, Ragnos grabbed one of the onlookers and tossed him at Revan. Revan jumped over the body, letting the him crash into the ground, killing the poor soul caught in the dictators grip. Ragnos then thrust his massive sword at Revan, who again dodged the attack.

Force Lightning rained down on Ragnos as Revan sent tons of energy at the Dark Lord. Yelling in rage, Ragnos jumped into the air, leaving his sword on the ground. He grabbed Revan by the throat and sent force lightning into Revan’s face. He then tossed the human onto the ground, landing a few feet from him.

Calling his sword to him with the force, he stabbed at Revan. Revan used the force to activate a lightsaber and have it impale Ragnos through the back right before the huge sword killed Revan. The lightsaber deactivated, and clattered to the ground behind the beast. Ragnos was victorious. Hurt but the winner. He looked up just in time to see Ludo Kressh charging at him, trying take advantage of Ragnos’ state of weakness.

The Fight to be the DLOS, Part 2, Ragnos vs. Kressh

Seeing Ludo charing him enraged him. He had just killed Revan, that was enough for one day. Suddenly, he wanted to retire from his mantle peacefully.

He raised his sword to fight back. Using a hanging guard, he stopped the oncoming attack. Ludo was dead set on being victorious here, knowing that if Ragnos was able to heal, he would’t get another chance to be DLOS until Ragnos died from old age.

Using his double-bladed sword, Ludo swung the other end at Rangos, who again block the attack. Ragnos then raised him hand and knocked Ludo over. Ragnos tried to stab into the ground and kill Ludo, but was shoved to the side by an unexpected force push from Ludo.

Ragnos yelled: Back down, now!
Ludo: Never! I will be the Dark Lord!

Ragnos jumped at the opposing Sith, somersaulting in the air to gain extra power for another swing. Ludo raised his blade to block it. Even in his weakened state, Ragnos’ almost overwhelmed Kressh with the power behind the attack.

Ludo shot force lightning at Ragnos, burning the Dark Lord’s body. After a few seconds, using his free hand, Ragnos blocked the lightning and sent it back at Ludo, throwing the smaller Dark Lord across the room. Ragnos ran towards him in pursuit, attempting to kill him before he could rise again.

With amazing speed, Ludo moved behind Ragnos and stabbed into the giant’s back. Unable to block it, Ragnos was stabbed in the back a second time. Being impaled twice wasn’t enough to stop Ragnos though. He turned and backhanded Ludo across the face as hard as he could, breaking the bones in both his hand and Ludo’s face. With a thud, Ludo his the ground dead. Moments later, Ragnos fell next to him.

Barely a whisper, Ragnos said, “Rule us Sadow. Take control.”, before entering the abyss.

Some pretty good work in here, not a bad writer's haven, keep up the nice writing.

Good work.

well done

Ragnos vs Tulak Hord Just an intro did this in like five minutes.

The blood soaked sands of korriban swirled in the wind A lone hodded figure made his way through the ancient ruins, crumbling stone structures and broken monuments to long forgoten rulers littered the narrow valley. The figure at last came before a massive door peeling back his hood he read the simple enscription on the door, Here lies Marka Ragnos Lord of the Sith Breathing heavily Tulak leaned against the massive iron door and with a gasp of suprise tumbled into a long dark hallway. The stench of death filled his nostrils and a cold damp wind blew against his face, Tulak gagged and doubled over as the stench of rotting flesh filled his senses he closed his eyes and reached out to the force with all the strength he could muster clearing his mind and senses feeling the energy flow through him the power coursing through him in a wave of exhilaration he felt everything in him quicken as the dark energies of the tomb wove them selves into the fibres of his very being, with a cackle he took off at a sprint eyes straight ahead until he reached another large iron door, he reached out to it expecting it to open for him and was rewarded with the sound of metal on metal but the door refused to budge, Tulak pounded the door with all his might yet it refused to yield and then a dark presence appeared at the back of his mind an undescribable evil surpassing anything Tulak had witnessed slowly he turned drawing his weapons a lightsaber and a short saber each glowing with a powerful crimson light as they absorbed the energy dripping off of the young sith, what Tulak saw next would be eternally burned into his memory facing him was a beast standing twelve feet tall it towered over Tulak. It screamed giving Tulak ample chance to see the razor sharp teeth lining it's mouth at the end of hands that were easily twice the size of his head were long knifelike claws. He was staring at a fully grown male tentarak. Tulaks lip quivered for a moment but then his expression hardened as he reached out to the force channeling his rage he felt power wash over him, with a slight grin Tulak charged the beast was about to find out exactly how good he really was.

good job. better than any of my stuff. (I thought it was Ragnos vs. Tulak. Why is there a Tarentatek?)

This part three of my minicrap series. I tried to write it a little differently than the other two.

The Fight to be the DLOS, Part 3, Sadow vs. Exar

When Sadow first heard the words, he didn’t believe them at first. Was he now the Dark Lord of the Sith? He silently thanked Revan and Ludo for killing the giant.

The first thing that he did as the knew DLOS was order all three of the fallen Sith Lords given a proper burial and their own tombs. The largest tombs on all of Korriban. They were given the largest funerals in recorded Sith history.

Sadow ruled for a decade. He was a good leader, but a challenger was silently rising against him. Exar Kun.

Exar had become very powerful in the decade that Sadow had ruled. At the beginning of Sadow’s rule, he would have been barely a challenge for Sadow, but now he was ready to take the mantle as his own.

He and his follower, Ulic went into the throne room where Sadow was. The Dark Lord was sitting atop a tall chair. The room had a slight gradient, making walking towards Sadow like walking up a slight hill.

Sadow was accustomed to his position. The fact that the title had been given to him, rather than earned didn’t seem to bother him. Exar approached him.

Exar, “Naga Sadow. Dark Lord of the Sith. I challendge you as ruler of the Empire. Will you face me?

Sadow, “Exar Kun. I would not expect such from you. I accept and honor you challenge. We will fight. May the True Dark Lord win.”

Exar, “I’m am sure he will.”

Sadow charged at Exar, weilding duel swords. Exar brought out his double-bladed lightsaber. Exar used a strange form. It wasn’t his usual form. Ulic apparently had something to do with making it. It gave Exar a powerful advantage over Sadow.

After only a few exchanges of attacks Sadow realised this. He changed his form to Ataru and attacked again. Exar was hard pressed to block it. Sadow sent a wave of force energy into Exar, knocking him back. Sadow was trying to finish this fight quickly apparently and kept shooting Exar with lightning.

After nearly a minute of being shot with force lightning Exar saw a opportunity to do Sadow some damage. The throne room was made from a cave. Exar ripped a stalagmite out of the ceiling and tried to crush Sadow with it. Naga barely dodged it, but several large chunks hits him, breaking ribs.

Sadow, “ I’m impressed.

Exar force jumped into the air, his lightsaber flew towards him and was in his hand before he hit the ground a second later.

Igniting the blades, he smiled at Sadow. There were a thousand words in the smile each screaming “Bring it on”. Sadow rushed Exar, forcing him to take a step back.

Sadow, “Never give ground.”

Naga stabbed at Exar with his right sword and used the hilt of his left sword to break Kun’s jaw. Exar swung one end of his lightsaber at the Sith before him, but it was blocked and he recieved a kick to the thigh.

Sadow, “I would have thought that you would have learned from Ragnos. You haven’t built of your physical strength, putting all your reliance on the force.”

Hearing this comment, Exar punched Sadow right below the eye, giving him a nice shiner.

Exar, “I think my body works.”

Howling in rage Sadow picked Exar up in a foce grip and started to crush his body. Bones started to crack before Exar was able to free himself. He used to force to throw his lightsaber at Naga, cutting of his hand at the wrist.

Sadow dropped Exar and gave Exar a look that said he would kill Exar, even if he Exar killed him, he would have his revenge. Seconds later, Exar snapped Sadow’s kneck with a force grip. The Sith fell to the ground in a heap.

Ulic walked over to Exar.

Ulic, “Congratulations Exar.”

Exar, “ This is not good. Something about Sadow when he died doesn’t make me feel right.”

Ulic, “It’s probably nothing.”

Exar, “You right. I think it’s time to celebrate.”

Originally posted by Darth_Glentract
good job. better than any of my stuff. (I thought it was Ragnos vs. Tulak. Why is there a Tarentatek?)

It's his tomb. . .