one by me!!!!!!!! with made a couple made up caracters
'as bundin!!!!!!!!"
the figure kneeling in the black altar stood up his black robes looked as if it was coming from the shadows its self his face covered by a mask for his face waws deformed.
" As Bundin is dead Windu im Darth Kuro!!! i new type of Jedi i have reveild the power of a force hidden from the Sith and the Jedi and now its power will be realsed into this world my old freind"
"you will not realse what ever is in there!!"
Mace knew his old freind was twisted and manipulated by this new force for a youngling who killed his master and inpressend master yoda, ypda was all he needed to open the seal Kuro needed a strong jedi.
"you can still join me freind so that thos who survive this night will be part of the living force"
"what happend to you i will not help you!!! youve betrayed me and plo koon and Kit Fisto you will never be allowed in the temple again"
Kuros red eyes grew with dark fury as he ignited his now black lightsaber
"i found a new crystal it sutes my new power well my freind prepare to die!!!" as he said these words he started to run at Mace with incredable speed but before he could strike Windu down. He ignited his saber and blocked the blow.
"you are completely lost old freind and now your time has come I did not think i was the one to do this"
"be quiet and stay silent forever!!!". Kuro used his new found ablites to throw windu threw the wall.
Windu open his eyes he was in a new chamber and he looked threw the hole in the wall and there standing was Kuro. Kuro ran again at Mace and Mace jumped to soon they collided in mid air and landed on the ground Mace fell on his back but Kuro just landed on his feet. "know you know my true power you can still join me"
mace looked up slowly "i will never join you!!"
he jumped and the two began there fierce battle the two threw blows but bloacked them it seemd as if Kuro was having the new force guiding his lightsaber. mace jumped in the air and used the force to make a impact on the ground Kuro went flying but soon got back up "my turne!!" said kuro srry i cant finish it g2g
pm me if you want the ending
Originally posted by Darth_Glentract
Sorry for the double post.It has to do with a story, so don't flame me.
Wikipedia at least says Tulak was after Ragnos and Sadow and that whole deal. Is this canon or Wikipedia junk? Also, who succeeded Tulak as DLOS?
Tulak had to be post-Hyper space war, or else why would he be the greatest of the Sith -lightsaber- duellists?
My newest story. Please tell me if you like it.
Tulak Hord vs. Revan
Tulak was old. Very old. He should have died thousands of years ago in his own time. He appeared to be completly human, but that was impossible, he had been alive for over five thousand years. Or perhaps he was human, but how he had lived so long only he knew and he planned to take it with him to his grave. He hadn’t always been Tulak though. As the teacher of Ajunta Pall, he had been known as Ukan Opaak. Tulak Hord was his true name though, or at least he thought. After so long, he was forgetting everything. It was all in his journal. If he could find his journal he would be able to remember all that he had forgotten. But, like the person it was about, it was old and lost among the sway of the galaxy.
Tulak wasn’t even able to get back to Korriban anymore. He had left over a century ago when he began to lose his memory, but had maintained communication with some of his most trusted followers up until a few years ago. He probably would have been killed in some sort of political maneuvering by now if he had stayed. The only thing he could still do was fight. And he could do it better than anyone in the galaxy. He had made a holocron during his self imposed exile about his lightsaber form, but doubted anyone would ever learn if fully. It contained more moves and details than all of the Jedi forms known at that time. Unless the reader had a very extended life like Tulak’s and was extremly gifted with a lightsaber and in the force in general, they would never be able to master it.
This is not to say that he was unable to do common things to keep himself alive, just that he was no longer a master tactician, and that he was less perceptive than his youthful self. Dring his exile he went to Taris. He brought with him only the clothes on his back, and his lightsaber. For money, he fought in the dueling rings. Even though they were death matches he never killed his opponets. Appearing as a crippled old man, he would duel, always under a different name. Purposly winning by just a little, not wanting to create a conspiracy against old men. He hunted bounties and sold his skills as a fighter for higher to the local crime lords. If was pathetic, a Sith Lord working for a Crime Lord, but he didn’t care.
One after noon he was walking with his friend Res Kang. They were talking about a local sports game. He was feeling much better recently. His exile was doing a world of good for him. His memory was coming back a little. Res was a doctor and had managed to repair some of Tulak’s age related problems. They were heading for the nearest Cantina to grab some juri juice when Tulak felt a slight disturbance in the force. Someone trained in the force was following him. He couldn’t tell how powerful his follower was, or even who it was exactly. Res knew about Tulak. He knew that he was the Dark Lord of the Sith and that he was old, but he figured Tulak was not more than five hundred years old. Tulak whispered to him, “Someone is following me, lets go to the lower levels to have a little more privacy.
They made several turns and were in the lower city in a few minutes. They ran into a small cave. Afterward, Tulak sat on a bench to wait for his follower. The figure approached him. He was wearing long black robes and a mask. As he came closer, Tulak was able to sense he was powerful. Very powerful. For the first time in over a thousand years, Tulak became uncertain. This guy was powerful whoever he was. Tulak decided to try and talk to him. The erie figure moved to within ear shot.
Tulak yelled, “Who are you? Why are you here? I not the Dark Lord of the Sith anymore! I gave that up path long ago!” The Dark figure continued walking towards Tulak and replied, “If you are no longer a Sith, why do you still rule them? Why do they still fear your power?” I keep them away from the Republic. The Republic that I served so many thousands of years ago!”
“You protect the Republic? You keep it safe? You’ve done more against the Republic than anyone since Ajunta Pall! You are of the darkside!” “But I’ve also done more for it. Yes, I have hurt the Republic on many occasions, but think who invented the lightsaber? I did. Of all the Jedi, I have trained more students than any other! I have killed more Sith! I have stopped more crimes! I have saved more lives than anyone! I could have destroyed the Republic! I could have destroyed the Jedi! But I didn’t. On that battle-feild on I fought the corrupt Jedi, I abandoned the Order to save it. I fought it to protect it. It was destroying itself! My apprentice Ajunta; he continued my work. Do you know who convinced Marka Ragnos not to attack the Republic? I did.” “A war happened anyway.” “Yes, a war started anyway. A war between the Sith, then the Republic. Now, tell me, who are you?” “ My name is Revan. I have come here to destroy you. You have started a war against the Republic.” “A war, what are you talking about?” “Don’t try to fool with me, Sith.”Tulak cringed at the word. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.”
“Really. Well fine then, I’ll play your game.The Sith Empire attacked Coruscant four days ago. They were repelled, but caused extensive damage to the city. They then attacked four other places before I was set out to find you. You minions who led the attack told me your exact location before they died. So here I am, on Taris, having a conversation with the Dark Lord of the Sith.” “ I haven’t come in contact with the Empire for a long time. I certainly never gave any order to attack the Republic. You must realize this.” “I don’t. I sense only evil coming from you.” “That is only because that is what you want to see.” “Your tricks won’t work, Sith.” Revan was growing angry. “Master Revan, please calm down. You not thinking clear” “Shut up, Sith.”
In a single leap Revan closed the ten feet between them. He ignited both of his lightsabers and swung downwards at Tulak’s head and the other towards his midsection. It should have been impossible to block with a single lightsaber, but Tulak did it with ease. Holding his lightsaber in his left hand, he punched Revan in the stomach and then force pushed him across the room. “Revan, I remember that name now. You were supposed to be great. I must say, I’m disappointed.” “I was just going easy against an old man.” “I don’t think you’ll feel the need anymore.”
Tulak walked slowly towards Revan, who had by now gotten to his feet. Revan sent force lightning at Tulak, who asorbed it and used the energy to toss a large rock at Revan that he was hard-pressed to deflect. “You still have much to learn. Against force users, it is often more effective to use physical attacks rather than electrical ones.” Tulak through another rock at Revan, but Revan took the rocks and shattered it. The several peices of the rock hit him, causing him to take a step back. Tulak laughed. Revan looked at him and smiled. All nine peices of the rock flew at Tulak at high speed. Tulak blocked all except one, which grazed his thigh.
“Nice trick, but it won’t be enough.” Tulak was able to move at inhuman speeds and charged at Revan. He swung high, low, high, spun and kicked. The kick hit Revan square in the chest, but on his way down he flicked Tulak with his violet lightsaber, leaving a small wound on Tulak’s shoulder. When Revan hit the ground he ducked into a roll and was on his feet again in less than a second, just in time to block Tulak’s next strike. From a crouch Revan kicked Tulak’s leg and attempted to bring both down on Tulak’s head. Tulak blocked and the spun and attempted to stab Revan in the side. Revan took a step foward and the lightsaber missed, but Tulak hit him with his right elbow.
Revan took a few steps back, trying to catch his breath. That his had been greatly force assisted. It had been hard enough to shatter a boulder. Tulak said mockingly, “To tough for you? Maybe you should run home.” “You can not win, Sith.” “Stop calling me that.” Tulak charged at Revan. Revan made an attempt to jump over Tulak and got about four feet off the ground when Tulak flipped onto his back and shoved Revan towards the ceiling. Revan put up a hand an pushed off the ceiling and the landed neatly back on the ground, forty feet below.
He landed facing away from Tulak, so Tulak took the opportunity to charge him. Revan turned to face Tulak and hit him with a massive force push from only a few inches from Tulak’s blade. Tulak hit a large stalagmite, breaking it at the halfway point. He didn’t rise from the rubble for over ten seconds, and when he did, Revan was all over him. It was all he could do to block Revan’s attacks, they were coming so fast and there was so much power behind each swing. This went on for over a half minute before Tulak found and opening and was able to knock Revan’s violet lightsaber out of his hands. It clattered onto the floor several feet away.
Tulak ignited the lightsaber and had it cut several feet into the cave floor and then shut off, making it irretrievable during the fight. “Now we fight on equal terms.” Revan cloaked himself in the force and moved away from Tulak. He had lost his advantage and now had to think of a new strategy. Tulak took the moment to try and look for Res. He had left a note saying he had gone to the surface, and that he was sorry that he couldn’t help Tulak, but knew he would only get in the way. Before Tulak had set the note down Revan struck from behind. Tulak barely managed to get out of the way, the blade was so close to Tulak that the blade cut the note in half.
Tulak, angered by the coward attack caught Revan in a force choke, draining the life from him. Revan shot force lightning at Tulak and then grabbed a boulder from behind Tulak and threw it at him. Tulak had to drop Revan to block the force lightning, some of which still got through, but was distracted and took the hit from the boulder full on. He was knocked flat on his face. Revan mocked, “Thanks for the advice.” Then threw his lightsaber at Tulak, who was still lying there on the ground.
At the last second, Tulak looked up and caught the blade. Revan’s jaw dropped. Tulak replied smiling, “Cortosis-weave gloves.” Tulak then said, “I quite happy now that I carried these for the last several thousand years. I haven’t needed them in over a millennium, but I knew these were special gloves. Ajunta told me to keep them.” Silently Tulak wispered to himself, you saved me again buddy.
Tulak then tossed the lightsaber in the air and shot it with force lightning, destroying it, leaving Revan without a lightsaber. Revan said, “It would be unfair for you to fight with a lightsaber and for me to have none. I suggest we finish this with pure force skill.” Tulak replied, “You have fought unfairly against me several times already, I shouldn’t do this, but I respect you.” Tulak flung his lightsaber into the cave wall, and like he had done to Revan’s earlier, after it had embedded itself several feet into the rock, shut it off.
Right after Revan didn’t wait a moment before attacking. He tossed wave force lightning at Tulak, followed by a force push. Tulak then hit Revan with a force drain, and then flung a boulder at him. Revan then created a small force storm and sent it towars Tulak at high speed. Tulak was hit and thown down. While lying on the ground, he gathered a large amount of energy and then tossed it as force lightning at Revan. Revan was knocked against the cave wall. He fell to the ground with almost all of his ribs broken, his right arm broken, both legs broken, several organs severaly damaged, and severe burns all over his body.
Tulak walked over and took Revan’s unconscious body to Res. If anyone coulld save him, it would be Res. Tulak began to walk towards Res’ medical lab. He recieved many strange glances on the street on his way to the lab because he was carrying a unconscious man over his shoulder with burns all over his body. Tulak himself was almost to the point of passing-out. He had put so much energy into that last blast, that the cave had collapsed a short time later from all of the damage to the walls.
When he got to Res’ office, Res examined Revan while Tulak got some rest. Tulak got up four hours later and was glad to hear that Revan would fully recuperate in a week or so. The damage was severe, but Revan had woken-up for a minute about an hour earlier and had gone into a healing trance. Res also gave Tulak a number and place that Revan had told him. Res said that Revan had told him that it has some special objects inside it. Tulak left to find what was in there.
The location was realtivly far away and Tulak took a speeder to get there. It was about a fifteen minute ride to the location. It was a storage facility, one of the smallest on the planet. Tulak went to the office there and asked for the location of Revan’s particular locker. They pulled of the number and gave him a key. One of the employees then led him to the locker.
It wasn’t actually a locker, it turned out to be a private storage room. Inside was a spacecraft. The ship was unlocked. Tulak walked to the cockpit and discovered there was several of his items inside. These were things that he had lost over the years and apparently Revan had managed to find them all. This was incredible, a tear fell from Tulak eye. He flew the ship back to the medlab and talked to Revan about it. Revan said he had seen that Tulak was not really evil, and that he wanted to fight the Sith with Tulak.
Tulak agreed and a few days later Tulak bid farewell to Res and set-out with Revan to become the leaders of the Jedi’s fight against the Sith.
Overtime, Tulak and Revan stopped the Sith invasion, but after the war, Tulak returned to the Sith Empire. He once again took control and ruled for another half century before dying during a revolt. Over three thousand Sith revolted against him, and his body was almost completly gone by this point. He was loosing his connection to the force, and lost his ability to fight. He was remembered as a hero among the Sith and recieved a complete burial and a tomb with some of the greatest Sith Lords. Loved by the Sith, loved by the Jedi.