Star Wars Versus StoryTime!

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“I’ll take pleasure destroying you.” was all that Dooku said to Mace Windu as they fought. Three Sith, three Jedi. Dooku and Mace were seperated from the others, Mace perfering it that way. Anakin had fallen to the darkside and was doing all that he could to defeat Obi-wan. Anakin was stronger and they both new it, but Obi-wan was smarter, faster, more experienced. Obi-wan was better at using the terrain to his advantage.

Less than fifty feet from Obi-wan and Anakin, the Heads of the Orders were fighting for survival. Wiserand better with a lightsaber Yoda was, but Sidious had an advantage in his superior force powers. Yoda ran towards Sidious, his blade burning like the sun. Sidious dodged and stabbed at the Jedi Master’s chest. “Be an easy fight, this will not be.” Yoda told himself as he and Sidious exchanged blows.

At the same time a short distance away Anakin and Obi-wan were giving it there all. Neither was able to get the upperhand though. For every attack one made, the other blocked and every counter-attack was deflected or returned. No matter who the victor would be, it would be a long fight.

Crack. Mace’s nose was broken by a punch from the aged Jedi gone evil. Dooku was wining, Mace wasn’t able to fully call upon his skill in Vapaad. Dooku was fighting with a vigor that surprised both of them. This was Dooku’s finest hour, his peak. Every strike made by Mace was blocked. Every attempt by Master Windu to gain ground was stopped before it could fully take place. During this time, Dooku was more powerful than Sidious. Not even Yoda would have been able to stop him.

Sparks flew as the blades of the Sith and Jedi locked again. Yoda, even with his smaller size was managing to push Sidious away. The air was cracking with the energy of the fight. The Ancient Jedi force pushed Sidious against a rock, Sidious sent a blast of lightning at the Jedi, both were flown across the battle field.

Anakin’s mind was confused. He didn’t know what he was doing. Sidious had told him it was the Jedi’s fault for Padme’s death, but somehow he knew that wasn’t true. Sidious had caused it, it was Sidious’ fault, all of it. Anakin shut off him lightsaber and spoke, “I’m sorry Master, I don’t know what I was thinking. I wish to help you.” Obi-wan sensed no deception in him. Smiling, they rushed off to help Windu.

And got there just in time to see the Korun Master decapitated. Anakin screamed, wanting to do something. Dooku walked towards them. He laughed and said, “I see young Skywalker that you have betrayed the Sith. Verywell, I’ll soon destroy you.”

He raced at the two Jedi, but the were to quick. The recent experiences had made them closer than ever. They fought like one, in perfect cadence. One would attack and Dooku would block it but as soon as he had blocked one strike, another came at him. Anakin made a mistake that cost him his life. He tried to attack to soon and Dooku blocked it and then stabbed him. Anakin fell to the ground dead.

Obi-wan let out the scream that rang within him when Qui-gon died. He fought with a masterful fury, never letting Dooku made a single strike, never letting Dooku have an inch, always pushing. Ten seconds later a dead Dooku fell to the ground, right beside Anakin.

Yoda’s kneck snapped. The ancient Jedi Master was gone. Sidious was laughing as Obi-wan’s blade pieced him. He died only seconds from victory. A thousand years of planning gone by a singe stab from a lightsaber. With one Jedi left standing they were victorious.

I wrote this a ling time ago. It's part of a larger story.

NJO Luke vs. Revan LS-KOTOR

Revan, “Are you Luke Skywalker?”
Luke, “Yes, I am.”
Revan, “I shall fight you, now, here in Exar Kun’s former meditation temple.”
Luke, “Who are you?”
Revan, “Revan.”
Revan through a massive wave of force energy at Luke to try and knock him off balance. Luke blocked it and used his body as channeled it back into the Living Force. Revan tossed force lighting at Luke which Luke also channeled back into the Living Force. Luke then tossed a powerful force push at Revan. Revan did the same thing that Luke had done and released it into the Living Force.
Revan, “I am most impressed. You have learned well from you teachers.”
The next second Revan pulled out both of his lightsabers and covered the twenty feet between them in less than half of a second. Luke dodged to the right and drew his own lightsaber. Luke was one who took every chance he got and he threw another force push at Revan. Revan blocked most of it, but still some of it got threw and he was thrown several feet back, but he landed on his feet.
Revan, “So indeed you are powerful. I know you are the Son of the Chosen One. Or at least the most powerful of them.”
This statement caught Luke of balance. What did Revan mean by the one of the Chosen One’s. Was there more than one of them?
Revan, “I can tell that you are confused by this. Your Father, Anakin Skywalker was one of the Chosen One’s. He was the most powerful of them that I know of. Or at least he had the potential to become the most powerful of them. Obi-wan Kenobi, one of your teachers, was forced to seriously damage his body when Anakin became Darth Vader. His power after this was not even a full shadow of his possible strength. I was also one of the Chosen One’s. And I believe another Chosen One is coming.
Luke, “Who is this next Chosen One?”
Revan stabbed followed by blocking Luke’s attack to his left. He then swung his lightsaber at Luke’s legs.
Revan, “I don’t know. But, I do believe he or she is already alive and learning the ways of the Force.
Luke stabbed at Revan then flipped over Revan’s head. Luke this tried to cut off one of Revan’s hands. Revan was fast though and blocked it.
Luke, “The Light or the Dark?”
Revan used the force to throw some debris at Luke, but Luke was able to block them all.
Revan, “I am unsure. Probably both.”
Luke, “How powerful will this next Chosen One be?”
Luke blocked a force push from Revan. Luke then swung at Revan’s legs. Revan blocked and force jumped a good ten feet away.

Revan, “That is another thing I do not know. I am sure that he, yes, the next Chosen One will be a he, will be more powerful than anyone you have yet trained. Kyp Durron and Anakin Solo both appear to me to have more natural force affinity, but they will not be as strong. He will be more powerful than you are now. Much more powerful. You need more training. We will teach you.”
Revan then decided to let Luke have it. He swung at Luke’s legs then used his other lightsaber to go for Luke’s head. Then he stabbed at Luke’s chest and spun and kicked him in the side. Revan didn’t wait a second though and then he continued his spin and elbowed the side of Luke’s head. By the time he landed he had stabbed at Luke with both lightsabers.
Luke wasn’t defenseless though. He parried Revans stab and went in close and shouldered him in the face, breaking his nose. Luke then tried to hit him with a force push, but Revan blocked his strike and countered with force lightning. Luke didn’t get the chance to block this and was thrown backwards.
Suddenly, Revan stopped.
Revan, “We must not destroy ourselves. I must leave now, but I will be back. Here, take this holocron. It contains many things that will help to strenghthen your New Jedi Order.
Luke looked at the gift and wondered what was in there.
Revan, “It is from many of us, including you old teachers, Obi-wan and Yoda.”
Luke, “Obi-wan and Yoda? Where are they!”
Revan, “They are still one with the Force, but now they can come back as I have now.”
Luke, “But Obi-wan told me that he would no longer be able to come back, that the distance had become to great.”
Revan, “It was, but now it is smaller. Even me, a Jedi from four thousand years ago, is now able to come back.”
Luke, “Obi-wan always came back as a “ghost” type thing, yet hear you are and your a person.”
Revan, “This also has to do with the distance. Well, that and the reuniton of us in the force.”
Luke, “What do you mean by reuniton.”
Revan, “I am sorry, but I can’t answer anymore of you questions right now. Read the holocron, you will find many answers in there.”
Without another word, Revan was gone.
Luke at first didn’t know what to do. Had he really just been attacked by a four thousand years old ghosts? Even more a ghosts that could match him with a saber. He was very troubled by this. If the distance had gotten smaller, well, surely it didn’t shrink this far over night, why hadn’t been visited before today. Luke decided that he would meditate on this. So many qeustions.
First, though, he needed to enter a healing trance. He was exausted as it was and would probably not make it back to the academy in this shape. And begin to heal himself, he did.

A rip off from JA...

Luke Skywalker survayed the ancient tomb that had once held the ancient Sith Lord Revan. The fanical Cult of Revan, had achived their goal and now the ancient Sith Lord had been risen from the grave to unleash his powers of destruction upon an unsispecting Republic.

Revan, was an imposing figure within the demonic armor that he wore. He was not tall or physicaly imposing...yet around him there was an aura of darkness and ruthlessness that made the Late Emporer seem kind. Coupled with his eery silence, Luke could not help but feel fear.

Taking a deep breath, Luke let the Force flow through him and felt his fear vanish as clamness filled him. Eyeing the Sith Lord he depressed the plate of his emerald saber causing the brilliant green beam to shoot forth from the hilt. His face hidden withing the dephths of his mask, Revan unhooked the black saber hilt from his belt and followed in suit, causing a deep red and orange beam to ignite.

Still silent, Revan twilred his saber in flurries about his person resting in a defensive stance with the saber raised above his shoulder. Taking the cue, Luke advanced with blinding speed lauching powerful strokes; green blade flashing in the dimness of the tomb. Yet with equal speed, Revan moved his saber to block with a flowing grace unrivialed. Seering flashes of light blasted the dark tomb briefly ilmuminating the dank walls and carved statues of people long gone from myth and memory.

The two combatants continued with their blinding strikes and vicious battle. Revan, with static moves and precise cuts while Luke, let loose with powerful swings and stunning arobatics. As the battle progessed, Luke began to feel wearieness ceeping up on him and if Revan felt same he showed no sign of it beneath his mask. Then within the blinding flurry of sabers, Revan unleashed a seering fan of blue and white lightning from his gauntleted hand. Caught off guard the lighting sent Luke crashing into the wall, yet with inhuman swiftness Luke responed with a powerful wave of raw force energy that sent Revan flying into the opposite wall. Ignoring his pain, Luke leaped with the Force towards Revan and launched a vicious strike. Yet his saber found only air as, Revan propeled himself with the Force through the air landing gracefully on the stone floor. Luke leapt at him again and the fight resumed...

NOTE: Due to the fact that there are so many opposing views to who would win in a NJO Luke Vs Revan I have decided to let people come to their own conclusion.

I think you just got tired of typing 🙂. Nice story. I think you should make an ending. If it makes you fell anybetter, I probably have posted more stories on this forum than anyone else and plenty of people I'm sure dont like the. It doesnt really bother me though, your not going to get flamed for making a story.

Nice. Actually, you should leave that open to debate. The ending.

Originally posted by Darth_Glentract
I think you just got tired of typing 🙂. Nice story. I think you should make an ending. If it makes you fell anybetter, I probably have posted more stories on this forum than anyone else and plenty of people I'm sure dont like the. It doesnt really bother me though, your not going to get flamed for making a story.

I'm writing my own book so believe me I say you have no idea how much I typing I do...

How long is it?

Originally posted by Darth_Glentract
How long is it?

It isn't doen yet, but in standered paperback fromat it should reach to about 700 pages...

Here is a link if you wan't to read the first five chapters.
http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1948171

wow. whats it about(I will read the first five chapters soon).

Originally posted by Darth_Glentract
wow. whats it about(I will read the first five chapters soon).

Its the first book in a series I am writing and is a sci-fy/fantasy.

Note: The five chapters you will see are only rough drafts and sorry for my horrible grammer...

sweet. I wanted to write SW books but the process is to hard to get GL to let you sell your work. School kept getting in the way also. How many chapters do you actually have written and have you already planned out all of the major characters and events for the series or do you think as you write.

anyone other than Darth-Yoda like my Tulak Hord vs. Revan story? (Page 20)

Originally posted by darthrevan89
A rip off from JA...

Luke Skywalker survayed the ancient tomb that had once held the ancient Sith Lord Revan. The fanical Cult of Revan, had achived their goal and now the ancient Sith Lord had been risen from the grave to unleash his powers of destruction upon an unsispecting Republic.

Revan, was an imposing figure within the demonic armor that he wore. He was not tall or physicaly imposing...yet around him there was an aura of darkness and ruthlessness that made the Late Emporer seem kind. Coupled with his eery silence, Luke could not help but feel fear.

Taking a deep breath, Luke let the Force flow through him and felt his fear vanish as clamness filled him. Eyeing the Sith Lord he depressed the plate of his emerald saber causing the brilliant green beam to shoot forth from the hilt. His face hidden withing the dephths of his mask, Revan unhooked the black saber hilt from his belt and followed in suit, causing a deep red and orange beam to ignite.

Still silent, Revan twilred his saber in flurries about his person resting in a defensive stance with the saber raised above his shoulder. Taking the cue, Luke advanced with blinding speed lauching powerful strokes; green blade flashing in the dimness of the tomb. Yet with equal speed, Revan moved his saber to block with a flowing grace unrivialed. Seering flashes of light blasted the dark tomb briefly ilmuminating the dank walls and carved statues of people long gone from myth and memory.

The two combatants continued with their blinding strikes and vicious battle. Revan, with static moves and precise cuts while Luke, let loose with powerful swings and stunning arobatics. As the battle progessed, Luke began to feel wearieness ceeping up on him and if Revan felt same he showed no sign of it beneath his mask. Then within the blinding flurry of sabers, Revan unleashed a seering fan of blue and white lightning from his gauntleted hand. Caught off guard the lighting sent Luke crashing into the wall, yet with inhuman swiftness Luke responed with a powerful wave of raw force energy that sent Revan flying into the opposite wall. Ignoring his pain, Luke leaped with the Force towards Revan and launched a vicious strike. Yet his saber found only air as, Revan propeled himself with the Force through the air landing gracefully on the stone floor. Luke leapt at him again and the fight resumed...

NOTE: Due to the fact that there are so many opposing views to who would win in a NJO Luke Vs Revan I have decided to let people come to their own conclusion.

So everyone talks about NJO Luke vs. Revan... but in KOTOR didnt Revan end up being on the light side? I guess it depends on how you play the game, and I also never finished it so can someone fill me in...

I personally dont really like the whole vs. idea. Yoda vs. maul, or revan vs. yoda... I prefer to read a story that has a plot, a beginning, and an end. I know people are just having fun... Heck I even wrote one earlier in this thread... oh wait, that was NJO Luke vs Star Trek's Q... lol

Anyways, back to the story quoted above... Great writing skills. I have bookmarked your 5 chapters and will go back and read them later.

A Glentract Masterpeice.

Vader vs. Q

Q, "Pathetic mortal."

Vader, "You don't know the power of the darkside."

Q makes a choking noise and falls to the ground dead.

Sorry for the double post. Someone please say if they like Tulak vs. Revan

Hey Glentract here is your sig.

sweet! thanks.

Originally posted by TRSundown
So everyone talks about NJO Luke vs. Revan... but in KOTOR didnt Revan end up being on the light side? I guess it depends on how you play the game, and I also never finished it so can someone fill me in...

I personally dont really like the whole vs. idea. Yoda vs. maul, or revan vs. yoda... I prefer to read a story that has a plot, a beginning, and an end. I know people are just having fun... Heck I even wrote one earlier in this thread... oh wait, that was NJO Luke vs Star Trek's Q... lol

Anyways, back to the story quoted above... Great writing skills. I have bookmarked your 5 chapters and will go back and read them later.

I get what you're saying, which is why I heavily advocate story-like answers to versus posts. Anything else is just reduced to a "whose logic pwns most" fest. And I am le tired of winning...

Originally posted by Darth_Glentract
anyone other than Darth-Yoda like my Tulak Hord vs. Revan story? (Page 20)
Originally posted by darth-yoda
wow great story i like the idea of tulak helping revan

Same here, although it kinda seemed like Tulak was taking Revan easily. Other than that, good job.