Star Wars Versus StoryTime!

Started by Darth_Glentract34 pages

I like it. It's short though. I think you should make it longer. Add more details.

how ragnos totaly pwns them yea i could add some stuff thanks im not a noob right darth Glentract

as of a few hours ago, i thought you were, but you have earned my respect.

thank you

yay!!! Another Journal by glentract! or at least the start of it.

Journal of Tulak Hord

I am Tulak Hord. This is my story.

Chapter One: My Beginnings

Every warrior has his beginning. I was born on Coruscant, like trillions of other beings in the galaxy. I was one of nine children, an unusally large family. I was the youngest child, two of my older siblings had already left Coruscant before I could talk.

My father’s name was Balic Hord. He had lived on Coruscant until he was twenty-four years old. His family being one of the first groups of humans to emigrate to it. He was a powerful business man part of the time and a powerful crimelord at other times; he controlled over fifteen percent of the spice on Coruscant. He is probably the most powerful ever to control his operations on Coruscant. He had mahor interest on Fondor, Ord Mantell, Rodia, Ison, and Thyferra. Thyferra was the main location of his legal trades; he had a large Bacta processing facility there.

Father was a strong build. He was six foot eight, over a one-hundred fifty kilos. He is rumored to have killed a Barab with his bare hands before, but whether or not it’s true I don’t know. He had brown hair wavy hair and dark brown eyes. Being as powerful as he was he built himself a small fleet of warships. It was a wonder the Republic never tried to put him out of business, but they probably didn’t want to spend the money necessary, on top of the fact that most people were pretty sure he had criminal workings, they couldn’t prove it. The Hutts tried to give him trouble every now and then, but he always ended up besting them, a tribute to his extreme intelligence.

My mother’s name is Dia. Before she met my father she was the leader of a small group of mercenaries. He mercenary band along with my father’s space fleet and hundreds of billions of credits made of the most powerful family the galaxy had seen in a thousand years. She lived for the hunt; when there was no mercenary work she was a bounty hunter and fought in the dueling rings.

We lived in a massive building in the best part of Coruscant. We got whatever we wanted. The only rules that my parents had was to respect them and those older than us. It was a gleaming tower several hundred stories high. We lived in the top twelve floors. Our floors each had a six man security force, with another seven hundred men less than a two minute speeder ride away.

In my first ten years I spens a lot of time learning many common skills used among formal classes and considerable amounts of fighting knowledge. My father expected us to know how to defend ourselves whenever we left the house and never sent an escourt or kept an eye on us when we were outside. I had a small sporting blaster and a vibro-knife that I kept with me. It would hurt a full grown human on a regular power-level, but a full power hit could easily kill someone. The first time I ever used it on someone was in the Coruscant Underworld. I was attacked by a group of three thugs, probably recognizing me and figuring they could take me for ransom. I discouraged their attack real fast when I shot one of them in the face, killing him, and then cut off three of another’s fingers with my vibro-knife. The third guy started to run away, but I shot him in the back of his legs, causing him to fall to the ground. It would be a few hours at least before he would be able to walk. I father was quite happy to hear that I had survived a real fight at only eight years old. Both of my siblings who were directly older than me still hadn’t; and they were ten and twelve years old. Winning a fight is how someone in my faimly gets a name. I was named Tulak, replacing my former title of nine; I was called nine up until that point because I was the ninth child in my family.

Revan was walking through yavin 4 when the darkside exploded. He knew who it was. Exar kun walked out from the trees and said "There will be only one dark lord" and ignited his blades. Revan was not surprised and did the same.

Kun used the force to throw a tree at Revan. Revan jumped over the tree and slashed at Kun who blocked with the top half of his blade and attacked with the bottom half. the strike was blocked as Revan back-flipped.

Revan used the force with all his might to throw a tree at Kun who jumped 20 feet to avoid it. revan used the force to bring it up at Kun. Kun tryed to stop the tree with the force but there were to many toos. Too fast, Too hard, Too soon.

Kun felt a blinding pin as he fell hard. The tree almost broke his bones. He quickly got up to see Revan's blade hit his. Kun attacked, but was blocked. Revan let out all his anger in one strike that knocked Kuns blade out of his hand and the hilt was cut into 4s in the next second. Kun knew he was in big trouble.

Kun used the force to make a stick into a staff and to throw a tree at Revan who jumped over it. Revan jumped over it and charged. Kun jumped 15 feet up joined by Revan who slashed at Kun and missed. Kun used the force to pull Revan closer and whacked him with the staff in the arm and kicked him away.

They both hit the ground and Kun threw his staff at Revan. Revan slashed it apart and charged right into a force scream. Revan flew back and hit a tree hard.

Revan was hurt badly but got up to a branch flying into his forehead. A sharpened branch. Kun stood barley victories.

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what does bump mean?

Nice story. I like how Kun whoops his a$$ with a tree branch. Actually I did that once...I got in a fight at my school and decided to play dirty.
"All is fair in love and war" well I wasn't in love so I was at war.

what does bump mean 🤨

I haven't the slightest idea.....

glentract explain please

its to put a thread at the top of the list if there is something you want people to see.

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read what is done so far of the Tulak Hord Journal.

ohhh do you like my FIGHT i dont do stories so well

sorry atlant, I thought I had given a response on you story, but apparently I hadn't. I like it, but you make you stories really short.

I thought you did well.

i write fights not stories fights are never long

make is a longer fight then