I know, that happens to me too.
But other then that - WOW! That was awesome Celestial! That is such a cool angle you are using, I never thought of it! and you've really got a strong character going there, it's short but has so much impact - lol I don't want to sound gushy but it's great and I really think we could work with that theme.
Good job 👆 🙂
I think you're on the right track for sure ✅ - I'm currently doing three things at once and don't really have much time but I will try to add abit to it when I have some time, if you don't mind that is 🙂
Or, I'll just write an idea here and you can work on it or anyone else: I was thinking about diary entries but everyone seems to be using it so howabout different scenes? Like here, Celestial has started with a post fight, howabout we have a scene where they all argue first and one after when it's just the three founders left and they have just opened the school or something. Also, we don't have to put them in date order, we can start with Celestial's and then put in the pre-argument as a diary entry or type of flashback and then skip back to the present where they are opening the school or something like that. As long as we do it from Godric's point of view then it should work.
Oh and Tassie - good call, we should definitely call everyone by their first names unless the characters call another one by their second name on purpose e.g. if they are angry with them.
Whaddaya all think?
RPhoe, that's a great idea
I think we should divide it then... Since CM started that, maybe she can expand on it a little...
Then someone else can write the flashback, maybe you since you suggested, I guess, etc..
Let's just come up with a firm plot today, then we'll start dividing tasks to house members 🙂
Yeah, that's what I was thinking - if it was divided into scenes it would leave space for more members to work on it but then again, it's CM's original idea so she can work on the ideas if she wants. Right now I'm only on for a few minutes so I can't start one but we've got til the 31st right? Weve got time 😛 (as long as we don't like slackers and leave it to the last minute lol).
Quick recap:
Intro - post fight scene CM wrote
Flash back - pre fight scene that caused Godric and Salazar to go at it
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The remaining founders open the school
Maybe other scenes could be abit of info on Godric's history and how he came to meet the others and come up with the idea? Plus another one on what he thinks and feels towards the other founders....? Once we have everything we can figure out how to structure it to make it a good read and check grammar/spelling etc.