Mind babble...

Started by Fëanor43 pages

The promotional line to my poetry was this: A state of being in love, with a differing view...I suppose. So here it is...

Snap! Sound the whip from the tormentor’s hand.
The cut stings, the wound deep.
Pain! Felt thunderstruck upon the broken man,
Gritted teeth, deny the weep.

Weep! O' Weep! O' Weep for me no more.
Salt on the wound that bleeds.
Red flows the tears from my pores.
Death make haste and grant my needs.

My earthen grave awaits my mournful coming,
Lonely dreamless sleep is mine.
I grieved the wasted sorrows for no man,
For my state is one sublime!

What benediction read, for one weighed with pity.
Shamed for hearts afoul!
I bleed, I bled .... all for soulless piety.
The cracking whip stings. Sings aloud!

The mind's eye blink with searing pain.
Glorious wonder upon my back!
Lift me! O' child of man once and twice again.
To hear once more that godless whip crack!

cool moves man. glad you got good reviews! 😄

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
cool moves man. glad you got good reviews! 😄
i know...id'nit awesome! two more and i get a chance to be poetry of the month..thing.

I had a Thought, while watching “Stuck on You”

So once again my friends I find myself in that state of contemplation. But this time, it is not about love and its many shades. Nor of friends, lovers or family for that matter. What intrigues me is this: what is the attraction to online love and why it happens. Why you ask, this subject when I’ve already pretty much have stated my own involvement with it? Because I myself have wondered that thought for quite sometime.

I’ve always wondered, what compels us to forego a real, breathing, thinking and for the most part, fraught with unpredictable emotions, person to that of one we cannot see, hear or touch? What makes one decide to enjoy that happy state with someone without the physical fringe benefits? As most of you know, I am in an online romance of sorts. And to be fair and honest, what I do feel in my heart or think in my mind is as real and deep as any that are involved in the real world.

Can I not deeply love someone else through the normal means of meeting with someone in the real world? Can I not subject myself to all the emotional ups and downs with someone who is physically there? Other than some major differences, can online love even begin to work if the odds are against it to even work?

That said, with online relationships, the forging of trust can be a major obstacle for many involved. A person learns to trust the other through interaction of some sorts. Through dating, face to face conversations…the verbal expressions of thoughts and ideals rather than through “typed” words on some forum or messenger service. By physically looking through the eyes of your intended, you learn so much more than by mere words alone.

Yet trust we must if we want it to grow and become something wonderful. Then there’s the possibility that, if you can fall in love online by virtual interaction, what’s to prevent that from happening to your affection with someone else you know nothing about? Someone they may meet online as well through some other board or a different messenger service they subscribe to. You can’t!

And to say that that can never happen is to fool yourself into idiocy. But then that’s where trust comes in I suppose. Yet let us not forget the ugliest of all monster: jealousy. Oh yes! Even in real life, that monster will grab a hold of you and is quite difficult to purge once it’s set in. Real life jealousy is bad enough when your mind begins to imagine things real or not. But imagine the havoc it makes when the love of your life lives mile, if not thousands of miles away.

And the not knowing of what they do or say or to whom they interact with, real or online, can be a major disaster waiting to happen; for online, it could be many things: the reading of a post, the innuendos, the provocative words, the flirties, the shifties, the naughties, and all the love smilies involved. A stated conversation that they may have had that you did not know about. All these things can lead to jealousy. And it is very ugly.

And, you must trust them to say that that means nothing to them. That they are, after all just friends. I could have all of this and none of this with someone real if I wanted to. But I’ve chosen not to. Why? Because I am in love with someone online. And to be honest I wouldn’t want it any other way. So what’s the attraction? I have no answers really. But here’s what I do know.

In the real world, if I were to meet someone through the usual means. Numbers are exchanged, a few phone conversations are had, a date is set for either dinner or a movie, or both. Normally three or four days are spent in getting know one another, more dates…and eventually, the reward. You’re first night together in making hot passionate uglies. Great to be sure, but the next day when you wake up…you’re looking at this girl you’ve just spent the night with and you realize; you know so very little about them!

And yet you’ve shared yourself physically. Then there’s the possibility that this girl is/was not exactly what you’d hope for but you stick it out because you’ve invested some time with it. Online…there is no making uglies, you’re stuck for however long, in just getting to know that person. And YOU do get to know them. For that’s all you have until that happy fateful day when you do meet.

So is that attraction? Or not. I’ve learn so much about this person I love, online, and what I’ve learned is that she is exactly the kind of person I’d love to be with for however long that is, or she’ll let me. And I like to think it’ll be a long time. If she’ll have me, but for that I have to trust that what she feels is as real as what I feel for her. And I doubt she lies or why waste time.

Originally posted by Fëanor
aw thanks babe...😊 and i hope you're right about time

and thanks again...blushing


Me too hun, me too

And you're welcome 😊

Originally posted by Fëanor
[b]I had a Thought, while watching “Stuck on You”

So once again my friends I find myself in that state of contemplation. But this time, it is not about love and its many shades. Nor of friends, lovers or family for that matter. What intrigues me is this: what is the attraction to online love and why it happens. Why you ask, this subject when I’ve already pretty much have stated my own involvement with it? Because I myself have wondered that thought for quite sometime.

I’ve always wondered, what compels us to forego a real, breathing, thinking and for the most part, fraught with unpredictable emotions, person to that of one we cannot see, hear or touch? What makes one decide to enjoy that happy state with someone without the physical fringe benefits? As most of you know, I am in an online romance of sorts. And to be fair and honest, what I do feel in my heart or think in my mind is as real and deep as any that are involved in the real world.

Can I not deeply love someone else through the normal means of meeting with someone in the real world? Can I not subject myself to all the emotional ups and downs with someone who is physically there? Other than some major differences, can online love even begin to work if the odds are against it to even work?

That said, with online relationships, the forging of trust can be a major obstacle for many involved. A person learns to trust the other through interaction of some sorts. Through dating, face to face conversations…the verbal expressions of thoughts and ideals rather than through “typed” words on some forum or messenger service. By physically looking through the eyes of your intended, you learn so much more than by mere words alone.

Yet trust we must if we want it to grow and become something wonderful. Then there’s the possibility that, if you can fall in love online by virtual interaction, what’s to prevent that from happening to your affection with someone else you know nothing about? Someone they may meet online as well through some other board or a different messenger service they subscribe to. You can’t!

And to say that that can never happen is to fool yourself into idiocy. But then that’s where trust comes in I suppose. Yet let us not forget the ugliest of all monster: jealousy. Oh yes! Even in real life, that monster will grab a hold of you and is quite difficult to purge once it’s set in. Real life jealousy is bad enough when your mind begins to imagine things real or not. But imagine the havoc it makes when the love of your life lives mile, if not thousands of miles away.

And the not knowing of what they do or say or to whom they interact with, real or online, can be a major disaster waiting to happen; for online, it could be many things: the reading of a post, the innuendos, the provocative words, the flirties, the shifties, the naughties, and all the love smilies involved. A stated conversation that they may have had that you did not know about. All these things can lead to jealousy. And it is very ugly.

And, you must trust them to say that that means nothing to them. That they are, after all just friends. I could have all of this and none of this with someone real if I wanted to. But I’ve chosen not to. Why? Because I am in love with someone online. And to be honest I wouldn’t want it any other way. So what’s the attraction? I have no answers really. But here’s what I do know.

In the real world, if I were to meet someone through the usual means. Numbers are exchanged, a few phone conversations are had, a date is set for either dinner or a movie, or both. Normally three or four days are spent in getting know one another, more dates…and eventually, the reward. You’re first night together in making hot passionate uglies. Great to be sure, but the next day when you wake up…you’re looking at this girl you’ve just spent the night with and you realize; you know so very little about them!

And yet you’ve shared yourself physically. Then there’s the possibility that this girl is/was not exactly what you’d hope for but you stick it out because you’ve invested some time with it. Online…there is no making uglies, you’re stuck for however long, in just getting to know that person. And YOU do get to know them. For that’s all you have until that happy fateful day when you do meet.

So is that attraction? Or not. I’ve learn so much about this person I love, online, and what I’ve learned is that she is exactly the kind of person I’d love to be with for however long that is, or she’ll let me. And I like to think it’ll be a long time. If she’ll have me, but for that I have to trust that what she feels is as real as what I feel for her. And I doubt she lies or why waste time. [/B]


I've wondered about that same question myself for so long.... and I still don't know the answer.... but I know exactly what you mean there... and I've felt the same myself... it's something I'd never thought I'd do, but there it is *shrugs*

Fea-Fea-Feanor, Feanor, Feanor!

Your thoughts are interesting, but your very first paragraph contains a glaring contradiction.

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
Fea-Fea-Feanor, Feanor, Feanor!

Your thoughts are interesting, but your very first paragraph contains a glaring contradiction.

hush! i was hoping no one would notice the discrepancy! *wink wink*

Originally posted by Fëanor
hush! i was hoping no one would notice the discrepancy! *wink wink*

haha you really thought you could get away with that 🙄 😛

Originally posted by Coldfire
haha you really thought you could get away with that 🙄 😛
yah-huh i did, or so i thought! bag

Originally posted by Fëanor
yah-huh i did, or so i thought! bag

heh heh heh 😖hifty:

Originally posted by Coldfire
heh heh heh 😖hifty:
😆

meanie 😄

Originally posted by Fëanor
😆

meanie 😄


Well I try 😛

Originally posted by Coldfire
Well I try 😛
try? i hardly doubt that...comes kinda natural to you, dont' yah think?

Originally posted by Fëanor
try? i hardly doubt that...comes kinda natural to you, dont' yah think?

You ass.... lol 😛 But yes, yes of course it does 😄

Originally posted by Fëanor
i know...id'nit awesome! two more and i get a chance to be poetry of the month..thing.
sweet!

Hrm.... and to the question....... well, my young friend, I have "fallen in "love" " with a woman just by her voice, once...... and ended up crying many nights for the foolishness....(twas many a year ago... ) never had an online relationship. Never desired one.... you see, after having tasted the first sweet honey of a lover's lips, i now cannot enjoy the smilie kiss.... it is not the same; the flames of passion do not alight with kisses ..... 'tis fine and well for friends, or in play, as a kiss on the cheek is much the same, but just that one act.... a kiss by one you care more for than your own safety and soul..... that is something I am unable to relinquish..... in time, you too shall see what I mean... but until that perfect moment comes, enjoy it good sir. haha.... enjoy it well.

I didn't exactly intend to have online relationships.... they just sort of happened.... and although they did cause a lot of hurt and sadness, I still think that it was a good learning experience... And I really do want to have that sort of stuff, like cuddles and kisses.... the smilies cannot come even close to comparing.... but I'd like to think that if I do find someone who's willing to stick with me online, that'd we'd someday get to meet, and maybe something serious could come of it.... it has happened before many a time.... And if someone irl does come along, well then that's a whole different story...

Originally posted by Coldfire
I didn't exactly intend to have online relationships.... they just sort of happened.... and although they did cause a lot of hurt and sadness, I still think that it was a good learning experience... And I really do want to have that sort of stuff, like cuddles and kisses.... the smilies cannot come even close to comparing.... but I'd like to think that if I do find someone who's willing to stick with me online, that'd we'd someday get to meet, and maybe something serious could come of it.... it has happened before many a time.... And if someone irl does come along, well then that's a whole different story...
and hey, if nothing else, you know i'll scare the bejeezus outta ya and make you laugh at the same time!!! 😄 😆

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
and hey, if nothing else, you know i'll scare the bejeezus outta ya and make you laugh at the same time!!! 😄 😆

You got that right! 😂 😛

Originally posted by Coldfire
You got that right! 😂 😛
hahahah yeah, and mebbe more.... heh heh.... devil joking, joking...... or am i? naughty

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hahahah yeah, and mebbe more.... heh heh.... devil joking, joking...... or am i? naughty

Ooo... you hint at things... and then hint at other things 😏 heh heh heh 😉