My poems

Hun I think you are good at writing poems 🙂 From my experience, some of the best written poems have come from some pretty bad times in peoples lives... and like Syren said, it helps to put things into perspective 🙂 I think you should definitely keep going 😄

ok then

I'm glad you decided to keep writing. That reminds me..I need to post the 2 new ones I have written.

k I'll read them when u put them up

Confused!!

Right now i feel so confused
There are many things i want to say
I have mixed wmotions deep down inside
But cannot bring myself to explain
The world is spinning
Never stopping
I feel so dizzy
Time flies by
But still feeling confused
Will i bring myself to say it?
Or would this question still hang?
For now i sot
All alone
By myself
And still confused

Emotions

My emotions are running so high
Tears drip down from my face
I lie in bed
With tear stained cheeks
My thoughts returning to you
your words running through my mind
Each word you spoke
Brought forth a tear
That ran freely down my cheek
My heart is aching
My soul is weeping
Will these tears ever stop falling?

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
Emotions

My emotions are running so high
Tears drip down from my face
I lie in bed
With tear stained cheeks
My thoughts returning to you
your words running through my mind
Each word you spoke
Brought forth a tear
That ran freely down my cheek
My heart is aching
My soul is weeping
Will these tears ever stop falling?

ty u think it ok?

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
ty u think it ok?

thanks

Unknown. I like both of your new poems.

thank u

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
Confused!!

Right now i feel so confused
There are many things i want to say
I have mixed wmotions deep down inside
But cannot bring myself to explain
The world is spinning
Never stopping
I feel so dizzy
Time flies by
But still feeling confused
Will i bring myself to say it?
Or would this question still hang?
For now i sot
All alone
By myself
And still confused

Thanks that one took me ages i couldn't think of anything to put then everything just came out and well iam suprised it came outmreally well.

Originally posted by Unknown Girl
Emotions

My emotions are running so high
Tears drip down from my face
I lie in bed
With tear stained cheeks
My thoughts returning to you
your words running through my mind
Each word you spoke
Brought forth a tear
That ran freely down my cheek
My heart is aching
My soul is weeping
Will these tears ever stop falling?

I like this one..It sums up me perfectly and how HE let me down when i needed him the most and how HE made me feel unwanted..

Originally posted by Enslaved
I like this one..It sums up me perfectly and how HE let me down when i needed him the most and how HE made me feel unwanted..

Originally posted by Fëanor
then HE is a doof!

Lol Fea!

I really dont care about HIM anymore..I have tried to move on but HE keepps rubbing my face in stuff and making me feel like doggy poo

Originally posted by Enslaved
Lol Fea!

I really dont care about HIM anymore..I have tried to move on but HE keepps rubbing my face in stuff and making me feel like doggy poo

my only advise...burn the shoe and tell him to grow some nutz and be a man for once. even gay men act like men.

lol aww don't worry u'll get over it

😖