Poetry and Prose suggestions

Originally posted by Bardock42
Well, my poetry (3 poems so far) are mostly about how much I suck at writing poetry....and I don't feel like posting them, cause I suck at poetry. I really do, I tried, I suck. End of story. Well, not fully end of story, I will keep attempting to write and it will suck and I will hate it and then stuff. I like this word...stuff. It somehow makes me feel happy.

Originally posted by debbiejo
I thought they were rather good.... 😄

See what I mean...they suck weep

Originally posted by Bardock42
See what I mean...they suck weep

😂

oh, come on.......a poem about how you suck at poetry is kinda cool!!

Here's one from me

SUCKS

I hate poetry, it really sucks
I try but I suck too.
I hate it why do I try.........
The world must be poetry cause it sucks big ones....
****.......I hate this.........

God it sucks.....

how's that?? 😂

Well, of course compared to most of the Bullshit here it shines like Gold (no it doesn't)...

i second that idea. a conflict of ideas with no rhyme or reason. but with a hidden agenda to curry sympathy. what a novel idea, that one.

I really like my new poem, now that I look at it......

I really like your new poem too, now that I've looked at it...

Originally posted by Fëanor
i second that idea. a conflict of ideas with no rhyme or reason. but with a hidden agenda to curry sympathy. what a novel idea, that one.

I love sympathy ...

[edit] No wait..I hate it....I forgot.

Originally posted by Bardock42
I love sympathy ...

[edit] No wait..I hate it....I forgot.

Originally posted by Fëanor
I feel for you, really.

I don't need your sympathy, you frenchman.

Fine! Then I want my thong back!!!

Originally posted by Fëanor
Fine! Then I want my thong back!!!

No, you gave it to me...to me alone.

but my butt's cuter...and rounder.

Originally posted by Fëanor
but my butt's cuter...and rounder.

That's why I like it...

oooh...i knew that you did, big boy!

Originally posted by Fëanor
oooh...i knew that you did, big boy!

You sure do, Andre 3000

oh my....flattery will get me naked

Originally posted by Fëanor
oh my....flattery will get me naked

Hmm...I need to consider.

i hate you.