Poetry and Prose suggestions

Started by Ya Krunk'd Floo35 pages
Originally posted by Bardock42
Well.....you do have a sharp tongue.

In the sense you're referring to, yes, it's true. However, I think Fëanor is speaking metaphorically...

Private = Private. Remember?

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
In the sense you're referring to, yes, it's true. However, I think Fëanor is speaking metaphorically...

Private = Private. Remember?

Oh....well, why the hell didn't he say so then?

Because he was vomiting over the naked backs of purple virgins?

You terrify me.

What's the world coming to when a simple question can cause fear?

I blame George, Tony, Dick and Ringo.

You leave Ringo out of this, he was an absolute star 😒

No, he was more of a Starkey.

Originally posted by Syren
That's almost like saying you love us, meaning me, meaning you want me eyes

Of course I want you flirt1 Meet me in my bungalo in 20.

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
Because he was vomiting over the naked backs of purple virgins?

Like Jimi Hendrix?

Originally posted by Bardock42
Like Jimi Hendrix?
No. More like Jim Morrison after spending a night with Janis.

Originally posted by Fëanor
No. More like Jim Morrison after spending a night with Janis.

Funny...and eww....and funny....

Originally posted by lil bitchiness
Of course I want you flirt1 Meet me in my bungalo in 20.

Bungalow? No stairs mhm

question:

i know this is the poetry and prose forum..but lately, with the exception to the last one i've posted...i haven't written any poetry in a long while, not since my sad state of whatever. and if i did, it will most likely come out sounding really really really stupid.

ex.
i feel bad
so i feel sad
where's my dad?
he gives advise to make me glad?

yeah...horrible. so my question is. would i have to post some of my written reflections, thoughts, and my little stories about some of my adventures and such and such in the Gen Fic forum? or can i post them here, in my thread. i know some of the ones i did are long winded and takes patience and skill to rummage through all that crap for that piece of a gem we call "the point".

and on another note...most of my stories i have posted actually has happened. the core it at least. but how boring a read it would be if i didn't take some creatlive license and embellish it, but not so much that it sounds exaggerated. i have hundreds, but i've posted a few. if i were to ever publish it as a book, i'd title it "A guy(me) and his three knuckelheads" or something like that.

and if you should notice some inconsistancies in the names of my friends it's because i use their real names in my actual filed story but change them when i post them here. sometimes i forget...but not always. it gets confusing after a while. it's only until the results for the poetry and the short story contests are out. until then...all of you will suffer!!!

so...can I?

Well, as Syren pointed pout this is for poetry and prose ...so I doubt people would mind. Afterall there are also poems in the General Fiction.

Originally posted by Bardock42
Well, as Syren pointed pout this is for poetry and [b]prose ...so I doubt people would mind. Afterall there are also poems in the General Fiction. [/B]
sweet! you da maaaan! maaaaan!

Originally posted by Fëanor
sweet! you da maaaan! maaaaan!

Yes, yes, I knew that already, but thank you.

Originally posted by Bardock42
Yes, yes, I knew that already, but thank you.
oh. i forgot. sorry ol' boy. i've no response to that.

Originally posted by Fëanor
oh. i forgot. sorry ol' boy. i've no response to that.

....irony?

Originally posted by Bardock42
....irony?

Irony.

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
Irony.

Irony - The Game?