Poetry and Prose suggestions

Started by Ya Krunk'd Floo35 pages

Originally posted by Bardock42
Irony - The Game?

Irony - maybe.

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
Irony - maybe.

Maybe - Irony - Something else?

Yeah, haven't I already said this game is f*cking boring, or was that in my mind?

(Am I talking in my mind now?)

That's a double-edged question. Let's see how you deal with it...

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
Yeah, haven't I already said this game is f*cking boring, or was that in my mind?

(Am I talking in my mind now?)

That's a double-edged question. Let's see how you deal with it...

I'm not a dealer...I'm a German. So i will just disregard it...or answer it with a "yes" ...either way, it does not make sense.

Originally posted by Bardock42
I'm not a dealer...I'm a German. So i will just disregard it...or answer it with a "yes" ...either way, it does not make sense.

Ironic.

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
Ironic.

Weird.

Originally posted by Bardock42
Weird.

Word.

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
Word.

Wd.

Originally posted by Bardock42
Wd.

Letters.

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
Letters.

Letterman.

David Letterman?? 😕

Originally posted by debbiejo
David Letterman?? 😕

Jay Leno.

Originally posted by Bardock42
Jay Leno.

Nemo The Clownfish.

Yeah, I've read your Nemo poem...... 😑

*All of you say "Daddy", to daddy Floo..*

It's been a very long time since I was last here, and I've got to say how sorry I am at the sorry state this place has gone. I've gone over some of the newer threads and some of the poetry posted in said threads, and three thing comes to my mind! OH! MY! GOD!

I understand that not all poetry will please the mass, nor is one comparable to the other as everyone of us have our own unique way of verbal expresssion. I'm sorry to say, but after having perused some of the postings, I'm afraid I've lost 20 points of my IQ. Not to say it was great before. But now I've lost all coherent thought and sentence making. It is really bad.

And how is it that the only ones that ever truly post on this thread are the ones I know and have the utmost respect for? Krunk, Feanor...don't get your willies all in a knot just because I just now mentioned you two. And Syren, my poetic vixen, why have you not posted any in so long? Why have you three not posted much so as to balance the bad that are on here? Not to be too critical to those I've not mentioned, but really...all poetry subjects are mostly about: love and sorrow.

Is there nothing else in life other than those two emotions? If not, then is it really that hard to express it in a way that isn't trite? conformist? emo-like?

COME ON PEOPLE!!!!

Well, my poetry (3 poems so far) are mostly about how much I suck at writing poetry....and I don't feel like posting them, cause I suck at poetry. I really do, I tried, I suck. End of story. Well, not fully end of story, I will keep attempting to write and it will suck and I will hate it and then stuff. I like this word...stuff. It somehow makes me feel happy.

Originally posted by Bardock42
Well, my poetry (3 poems so far) are mostly about how much I suck at writing poetry....and I don't feel like posting them, cause I suck at poetry. I really do, I tried, I suck. End of story. Well, not fully end of story, I will keep attempting to write and it will suck and I will hate it and then stuff. I like this word...stuff. It somehow makes me feel happy.
One man's garbage is another man's....garbage. But to say you suck is defeatist, to say the least. How does anyone know your work sucks unless "we" who read it say it is. But to say it is because "you" say it is, is like saying the water is hot and tepid and full of germs when we are clueless but take your word for it.

Originally posted by NunYahBidness
One man's garbage is another man's....garbage. But to say you suck is defeatist, to say the least. How does anyone know your work sucks unless "we" who read it say it is. But to say it is because "you" say it is, is like saying the water is hot and tepid and full of germs when we are clueless but take your word for it.

Well, for one I am infallible..so of course I know what sucks and what doesn't...but, and that is even more important, when I repeat saying how shit it is everyone will believe it and when i finally expose my work they will be like "Oh boy.....this is ....shit..but not as much shit as I thought first" ...yes, I'm aiming for the stars.

Originally posted by Bardock42
Well, for one I am infallible..so of course I know what sucks and what doesn't...but, and that is even more important, when I repeat saying how shit it is everyone will believe it and when i finally expose my work they will be like "Oh boy.....this is ....shit..but not as much shit as I thought first" ...yes, I'm aiming for the stars.
You're sort of going for a self-fullfing prophecy, eh? If you say it sucks, then you're hoping we'll believe it. But then, if we don't say it sucks, you'll not believe it only because you'll think we're patronising you and to stoke your ego. Well, I will not fall for that one.

Originally posted by NunYahBidness
You're sort of going for a self-fullfing prophecy, eh? If you say it sucks, then you're hoping we'll believe it. But then, if we don't say it sucks, you'll not believe it only because you'll think we're patronising you and to stoke your ego. Well, I will not fall for that one.

Yes you will.