Be My Last

Started by T.V.O.T.I.6 pages

thnx. 😊 I must be back to my old self if I am writing about torment and sorrow. lol

btw if anyone quotes that last poem, could you put a"[" in front of that open tag? thnx in advance. 🙂

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
center][b]Incapable

I see the direction
That arrows the point me to
And I know that I should
Let my feet follow them
My problem is that
My heart has weighed me down
Somehow You have become my pleasure,
My desire, my misery and and my fear
Though my heart weeps
And aches at the knives imbedded in it
I can't find the will to turn away
As if I am bound to you in some way
Some might label me "fool" wishing for your love
Instead of praying for freedom
All of this confuses me to no end
But one thing always remains constant
My love for you makes me
Incapable of ever saying a final goodbye[/center] [/B]

nicely done man....

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Does anyone ever listen to me?

Listen When I Sigh

*sigh*
Sighs seem to be the only way to convey my emotions as of late
you do so very many things to contradict yourself almost daily
You say that it's my fault for the state that I am in
After all was not it you who said that love was not for us
*sigh*
Sighs seem to be the only way to convey my emotions as of late
you spend hours crying on the shoulders of sympathetic men
Having them believe that your sorrow was caused by me
And here I wait in hopes that your heart lead you back to me
*sigh*
Sighs seem to be the only way to convey my emotions as of late
You send me secret letters behind the backs of those you entertain
Always keeping them distracted from seeing the truth
As time progresses I can not help but feel that I to am one of your fools
*sigh*
I guess it's true what they say
we all play the part in the name of love
*sigh*
Sighs seem to be the only way to convey my emotions as of late

good stuff better thn mine 😮

I think your stuff is pretty awesome. I really am not anything special.

Black-Winged Angel

I have been down this road many times before
I thought that I would be able to get past this
But she has a hold on me and I can't break free
She's a black-winged angel that refuses to love
I should have foreseen that things would turn out this way
I promised myself that sorrow would never will again
But she has a hold on me and I can't break free
She's a black-winged angel that refuses to love
I know I could never say goodbye trapped under her spell
I had hoped that someone could save me before it was too late
But she has a hold on me and I can't break free
She's a black-winged angel,
That refuses to love...me in return

nice work mario

damn been a while since i browsed the poetry sections

u dont lose ur touch do u i like the first one a hell of a lot

thnx

Hey there you... glad to see you're alive and {hopefully} well! Good stuff, as usual 😉

Originally posted by Syren
Hey there you... glad to see you're alive and {hopefully} well! Good stuff, as usual 😉

I could say the same about you...(I think I will)

Hey there you... glad to see you're alive and {hopefully} well! 🙂

I am alive and well. 😄 Even though things have been "interesting" lately I am really happy atm. 😱

💃

In a life before this one
I promised that for you
I would spend my life
Finding ways to prove
How much I love you
For a while I was not able to
Due to inevitable circumstances
Thankfully fate has granted me
For better or worse
A second chance to keep that promise
In the past my promises
were of little value to anyone
But I mean to show you
That you are the only one
It has always been you
I knew that from the first moment
I ever laid eyes on you
So many nights while lying next to
the would be someone
who finally replaced you
Wishing to God that she was you
I prayed for just one more night with you
Now that my desires have been fulfilled
I don't want to ever see you go
Promise me you never leave

Very good

thnx luv

😊

Nice stuff Mario! 😊

seriously...

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
😖

Does anyone ever listen to me?

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
seriously...

What do you mean?

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
😖

Does anyone ever listen to me?

😠
I wanted so desperately to have
something I could write about
It seems no matter how many times
the lesson is thought
I never learn to be careful
If I seem a little bitter
It is because I am
I took a chance on someone
Opened up my heart once more
Only to be betrayed again
Like so many times before
Maybe it was her beauty
Maybe I just wanted to believe
But what does it matter
When my heart cannot find truth
And longs to remain broken