Batman Esculation

Started by HellMaster9354 pages

Sounds good... and he was 50 in DKR so pretty close...

I am thinking that this should be more of a Comic Book script then movie script. Also I have thought up the ending, lets just say it is going to be a very sad one. Also I had an idea for how Batman kills Joker. The Dark Knight Returns had a major infulance on the script. From the very get go I wanted to have a DKR kind of Batman who is deeply depprssed and brutal.

It basically is DKR! Kind of... ultimate DKR...

I have just PM you my Syonpois of Batman/Superman: Ultimate Alliance. Tell me what you like about it.

Sounds fabulous but a little TOO DKR-esque.

Okay, trust me I am not going to make Batman too brutel if that is what you are worried about.

No, I just thought it looked worryingly DKR rip-off-sh. But, yeah, Miller's Batman would be incredibly hypocritial to take down azabts or whatever! LOL...

Do you think it could work?

Oh, yeah, sure... defintely...

Cool.

🙂

Here is a extended version of Selina/Holly scene.

Holly: You can’t be serious Selina this is just wrong.
Selina Kyle: Come on Holly do you really want to remain a hooker all your life, stealing is better then that.
Holly: Well I prefer this to stealing
Selina Kyle: Oh I see you prefer being men’s fantasies. You know men are just useless. They can’t live without us.
Holly: What is wrong with you Selina?
Selina Kyle: Nothing, I guess I have been always so bitter. Maybe through my experiences I have seen the world for what it really is. I was Left to fend for my self at the age of ten. My Mum killed her self, it still haunts me, and I was there when she used that huge knife. As for my father he was such an arse, he would always abuse my mother, no wonder she took her own life. My father died by the drink. From then on I was of to the junville hall, they were so abuse, I took my chances on the mean streets of Gotham. Then I learned to fight and with my trained reflexes I used to steal for a leaving. Holly you have been the closest thing to a friend and sister to me.
Holly: By the way how was the opera thingy?
Selina Kyle: It was fine, guess who I bumped into.
Holly: Who Selina?
Selina Kyle: Old rich bachelor himself Bruce Wayne.
Holly: How did you bump into him then?
Selina Kyle: I was getting mugged, he came and saved me.
Holly: Hay Selina instead robbing museums by night maybe you could just marry Bruce Wayne and then divorce him then you get most of the money. You would be loaded for life if you do that.
Selina Kyle: I may be despite and poor Holly but I would not marry a guy for money. I would marry a guy if I truly loved him and willing to spend the rest of my life with him.
Holly: Oh look who has become choosy.
Selina Kyle: Well I have got to go there is a diamond museum nearby that I want to go robb.
Holly: I still think this is a bad idea and that costume looks dorky.
Selina Kyle: Well you were always the good one.

Again, great scene BUT please think about making the language sound NATURAL: most people say "it's" etc. not "it is" or "that is" etc...

hey taj, kool batman+superman thingy. i liked it. gud size 4 for a blurb on a novel or something.

Hay Morgan this is what I have written so far of the Batman/Superman script.

Synopsis of Batman/Superman: Ultimate Alliance
It was nine years ago since Batman and Superman fought Doomsday resulting in the death of Supergirl and the falling out of Superman and Batman. Now nine years later
a new murderer has been going out on murderous rampages across Gotham and now Metropolis is next. In the wake of these murderous rampages Princess Diana aka Wonder Woman calls on Bruce Wayne to don the Batman persona for a final time ever since he lost Selina Kyle and his unborn child to the Joker resulting in his reputation as the caped crusader to be shattered. Now two broken men will unite to fight the ultimate evil, thus forming the ultimate alliance.

Warner Bros logo opens up with dramatic music. Then switch to a shot on a dark street, also the words 9 Years Ago come up.

Suddenly Batman comes in his Batmobile, it suddenly stops, and the front bit of it opens and out comes Batman the Caped Crusader. Then from the sky comes the man of steel Superman.

Batman: Clark did you find anything?
Superman: Bruce I looked everywhere but I still can’t find Supergirl.
Batman: Have you heard from her?
Superman: No, have you run that scan on that sample you found the other day.
Batman: Yes, and it’s just as I feared. The mastermind of this whole plot is Doomsday.
Superman: That can’t be, Doomsday would not be able to pull this all of, he can’t have masterminded this whole plot, and it must have been someone higher.
Batman: It can’t have been the Joker; he tries to make his murders sick and funny.
Superman: It can’t have been Lex; he got injured severally in our last battle.
Batman: I think I know who it is.

In a dark room Supergirl has been tied up near a wall. Suddenly a man comes into the dark room. His face is covered in bandages and he is wearing a long grey coat. He is carrying a mini pistol fully loaded.

Hush: Hello my dear I see you belong to the Superman clan.
Supergirl: Let me go you creep!
Hush: Well well, I see that this little beauty has a little mouth on her.
Supergirl: You’re sick!
Hush: Call me sick again and this little gun I have got here will blow your brains away clean, so I suggest you shut the f***k up.
Supergirl: Why have you brought me here?
Hush: That’s a good question my dear.
Supergirl: Then answer it.
Hush: You I always wanted to create a new breed of human, so when I found a DNA sample of Superman greatest enemy, I decided to let him be reborn. But something was missing, a sample of Superman DNA. You see when Krypton’s top sciencetist were creating Doomsday they injected part of the Super gene that was found in Superman to make him much stronger then the mere human. Now you are probably wondering my dear how I got all this together, the answer lies in my manipulation of the right people. You see my alter ego faked his death and now the world thinks that I am dead, but just like the last time I manilpited some of Batman’s major enemies like the Joker and the Riddler. But it was down to one man that planned this whole operation and his name is Lex Luthor. After his last battle with Superman which left him severely burned, he approached me to help him. He funded the project to create the new superhuman, but all he wanted was the Super gene, part of the gene could heal any type of injury as well as what I told you earlier.
Supergirl: Let me out of here you sick busted!!!!!
Hush: You didn’t think that I would capture you without arming myself with some Kryptonite.

Sartaj, there's no need to repost scenes on the same page!

Originally posted by HellMaster93
Sartaj, there's no need to repost scenes on the same page!

Morgan never reads his PMs, so that why I posted the scene here.

v kool. hellmaster is a bit right about th natural sppech stuff. try adding stage directions as well because it all seems a bit too much like a normal conversation when it's really torture y'know

Hay Morgan, what do you think of the Selina/Holly scene.

kinda cool i think but i dont know where it fits in with the rest